Hometown— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Try to use more natural expressions and correct prepositions. For example, say "I grew up in Suzhou, Anhui Province, China" and "I've spent 16 years living there." Avoid awkward phrases like "growing a living in there."

Ví dụ: I grew up in Suzhou, Anhui Province, China. It is a small and peaceful city where the pace of life is slow. I have spent 16 years living there.

Gợi ý: Your answer is unclear and contains irrelevant or confusing information. Focus on specific details about the food you like and avoid unrelated words like "museum" or "about." Use linking words to connect ideas logically.

Ví dụ: What I like most about my hometown is the delicious and affordable food. For example, there are many local snacks that I always enjoy whenever I visit.

Gợi ý: Avoid incorrect prepositions like "in there." Also, use simpler and clearer expressions such as "I was born and raised there" and "I spent 15 years growing up in Suzhou."

Ví dụ: I was born and raised there. I spent 15 years growing up in Suzhou until I went to college.

Gợi ý: Avoid confusing or incorrect phrases like "busy castles and razors." Instead, use clear expressions such as "busy life in big cities." Also, complete your sentences and provide examples of prosperous cities.

Ví dụ: I think my hometown is a good place for young people to escape the busy life in big cities. However, it does not offer as many job opportunities as more developed cities like Shanghai or Beijing.

× I've spent my 16 years growing a living in there.

✓ I've spent my 16 years making a living there.

The phrase 'growing a living in there' is incorrect. The correct expression is 'making a living there'. Also, the preposition 'in' before 'there' is unnecessary because 'there' already indicates location.

× I always go to eat those delicious food every time I go back to my home such as museum, about and different.

✓ I always go to eat that delicious food every time I go back to my home, such as at the museum and other places.

'Food' is an uncountable noun, so 'those' should be replaced with 'that'. The sentence is also unclear and incomplete; adding 'at the museum and other places' clarifies the meaning. The original sentence also misuses 'about and different' which is unclear and corrected to 'and other places'.

× I was born and raised in there.

✓ I was born and raised there.

The preposition 'in' is unnecessary before 'there' because 'there' already indicates location.

× However, this my hometown does not offer as many job opportunities as more prosperous cities such as.

✓ However, my hometown does not offer as many job opportunities as more prosperous cities do.

The phrase 'this my hometown' is incorrect; 'this' should be removed. Also, the sentence ends abruptly after 'such as' without examples; it is corrected to end properly. The preposition 'such as' requires examples, so it is better to remove it or add examples.