Hometown— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: 回答は基本的に質問に答えていますが、文法の誤りや不自然な表現があります。例えば、「They have a big American base」は主語が不明瞭で、「There is a big American base」とするのが自然です。また、「beautiful ocean like in Oshima」は比較が曖昧で、もう少し具体的に説明すると良いでしょう。

Ví dụ: My hometown is Yokosuka city in Kanagawa prefecture. There is a large American military base there. Also, it has beautiful ocean views similar to those in Oshima island.

Gợi ý: 回答が短く、文法的に不自然な部分があります。例えば、「I like and also」は意味が不明瞭です。より自然な表現で、理由や具体的な説明を加えると良いでしょう。

Ví dụ: I like my hometown because it is very quiet and peaceful. Also, the air is very clean, which makes it a healthy place to live.

Gợi ý: 文法的に誤りがあります。「I have been to live」は不自然で、「I have lived there for 11 years since 2014」や「I have been living there since 2014」と言うのが正しいです。

Ví dụ: I have been living in my hometown since 2014, so I have lived there for 11 years.

Gợi ý: 文法と語順に誤りがあります。「many huge a park」は不自然で、「many huge parks」が正しいです。また、「young people can playing」は「can play」が正しいです。より具体的な説明も加えると良いでしょう。

Ví dụ: Yes, I think my hometown is a good place for young people. There are many large parks where young people can play and enjoy outdoor activities every day.

× My hometown is Yokosuka city in Kanagawa prefecture. They have a big American base and beautiful ocean like in Oshima.

✓ My hometown is Yokosuka city in Kanagawa prefecture. It has a big American base and a beautiful ocean like in Oshima.

The pronoun 'They' is incorrect because 'My hometown' is singular, so 'It' should be used (Grammar Problem Type ID: 1). Also, 'beautiful ocean' needs an article 'a' because it is a singular countable noun.

× My hometown, it's quiet, so I like and also. Air is so clean.

✓ My hometown is quiet, so I like it. Also, the air is very clean.

The original sentence is fragmented and lacks proper structure. 'I like and also' is incomplete and unclear. Adding 'it' clarifies the object of 'like'. 'Air' is a singular noun and needs the definite article 'the'. 'So clean' is better expressed as 'very clean' for naturalness (Grammar Problem Type ID: 26 and 22).

× I have been to live 11 years since 2014.

✓ I have been living here for 11 years since 2014.

The phrase 'have been to live' is incorrect. The present perfect continuous tense 'have been living' is appropriate to express an action continuing from the past to the present. Also, 'for' is used to indicate duration (Grammar Problem Type ID: 5 and 11).

× My hometown has many huge a park.

✓ My hometown has a huge park.

'Many' is used with plural countable nouns, but 'park' is singular here. The correct article 'a' should be used with 'huge park'. Therefore, 'many' should be removed (Grammar Problem Type ID: 1 and 22).

× And young people can playing every day.

✓ And young people can play every day.

After modal verbs like 'can', the base form of the verb should be used, not the '-ing' form. Therefore, 'playing' should be corrected to 'play' (Grammar Problem Type ID: 8).