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Part 1

Giám khảo

Where is your hometown?

Thí sinh

My hometown is Duyang, which is located in the southwest part of China.

Giám khảo

What do you like about your home town?

Thí sinh

There are numerous aspects I like about my hometown, especially for its food. For example, duyang is famous for its spicy hot pot, which I really enjoy having.

Giám khảo

How long have you lived there?

Thí sinh

I have been there for 18 years, since I was born.

Giám khảo

Is your home town a good place for young people?

Thí sinh

Absolutely, yes. It's a really great place for young people to study because there is greater education system and career opportunities for young people.

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Tổng: 6.0Trôi chảy và mạch lạc: 6.5Phát âm: 6.0Ngữ pháp: 6.0Từ vựng: 6.0

Part 1

Where is your hometown?

Điểm: 85.0

Gợi ý: 回答较为简洁,但可以更自然地表达地理位置,并增加一些细节使回答更丰富。

Ví dụ: My hometown is Duyang, a city situated in the southwest region of China, known for its beautiful landscapes and rich cultural heritage.

What do you like about your home town?

Điểm: 80.0

Gợi ý: 回答内容较好,但语言表达稍显重复,且缺少连接词使句子更流畅。建议使用连接词并丰富细节。

Ví dụ: I like many things about my hometown, especially its food. For instance, Duyang is famous for its spicy hot pot, which I really enjoy because of its rich flavors and unique spices.

How long have you lived there?

Điểm: 90.0

Gợi ý: 回答简洁明了,但可以稍作扩展,使表达更自然。

Ví dụ: I have lived in Duyang for 18 years, as I was born and raised there.

Is your home town a good place for young people?

Điểm: 75.0

Gợi ý: 回答中存在语法错误和表达不够自然的问题,建议改进句子结构,避免重复,并使用更准确的词汇。

Ví dụ: Absolutely. My hometown offers excellent educational institutions and numerous career opportunities, making it an ideal place for young people to study and develop their careers.

Ngữ pháp

Incorrect use of quantifiers

× It's a really great place for young people to study because there is greater education system and career opportunities for young people.

It's a really great place for young people to study because there is a greater education system and career opportunities for young people.

这里缺少冠词“a”,因为“education system”是可数名词单数形式,前面需要加不定冠词“a”。建议在类似结构中注意冠词的使用。

Incorrect use of quantifiers

× It's a really great place for young people to study because there is greater education system and career opportunities for young people.

It's a really great place for young people to study because there are greater education systems and career opportunities for young people.

“education system”应使用复数形式“education systems”,因为句中提到的是多种教育系统,且谓语动词应与复数主语一致,使用“are”。建议注意主谓一致和名词单复数形式的搭配。

Từ vựng trọng tâm

FamousWell known
GreatConsiderable; Large; Prominent; Magnificent; Enthusiastic
HotHeated; Very warm; Feverish; Spicy; Fierce
YoungYouthful; Immature; Fledgling; Offspring; Young people
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