Hometown— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Your answer lacks clarity and completeness. Try to give a direct response first, then add specific details with linking words. Avoid incomplete sentences and filler words like 'Umm'. Also, ensure your sentences are grammatically correct and complete.

Ví dụ: My hometown is a small city in Uzbekistan. Although it is small, it often experiences traffic jams due to the large number of cars and residents. However, I love it because I have many close friends and the people are very friendly.

Gợi ý: Your answer is relevant but could be more natural and concise. Avoid filler words like 'Uh'. Use linking words to connect ideas smoothly and provide specific examples or reasons to support your points.

Ví dụ: What I like most about my hometown is the warm-hearted and friendly people. They always make me feel comfortable and are willing to help whenever I need support. For example, my close friends here have always been kind and supportive.

Gợi ý: Your answer is clear but contains some grammatical errors. Use correct tense and phrasing, and try to link your ideas smoothly. Also, avoid repeating similar information unnecessarily.

Ví dụ: I have lived in my hometown since I was born, which is about 15 years. Many of my friends, relatives, and my family also live here, so I know the city well and feel very comfortable living here.

Gợi ý: Your answer addresses the question but is incomplete and lacks coherence. Use linking words to organize your points clearly. Also, complete your sentences and provide specific reasons or examples. Avoid vague phrases like 'go out with difference'.

Ví dụ: I don't think my hometown is a good place for young people because there are few cafes and pedestrian areas. Additionally, public transport is poor, and the parks are often polluted. Therefore, I believe the government should improve these facilities to make the city more attractive for young people.

× Despite its quite small city, it always experience traffic jams because of many cars and large number of people living there.

✓ Despite being quite a small city, it always experiences traffic jams because of many cars and a large number of people living there.

The subject 'it' refers to 'city', which is singular, so the verb should be 'experiences' (third person singular). Also, 'large number' requires the article 'a' before it.

× Despite its quite small city, it always experience traffic jams because of many cars and large number of people living there.

✓ Despite being quite a small city, it always experiences traffic jams because of many cars and a large number of people living there.

The verb 'experience' should be in third person singular form 'experiences' to agree with the singular subject 'it'.

× Umm also the drawbacks.

✓ Umm, there are also drawbacks.

The original sentence lacks a verb and proper structure. Adding 'there are' completes the sentence and makes it grammatically correct.

× I love my city because I have many friends here and people here are very.

✓ I love my city because I have many friends here and the people here are very friendly.

The sentence is incomplete; 'people here are very' needs an adjective to complete the thought. Adding 'friendly' completes the sentence meaningfully.

× There are always warm hearted and friendly nature of people.

✓ There is always a warm-hearted and friendly nature in the people.

The original sentence incorrectly uses 'There are' with a singular noun phrase 'nature'. Also, 'warm hearted' should be hyphenated as 'warm-hearted'. The sentence is restructured for clarity.

× I always feel very comfortable with them and when I need something they always help me and support me.

✓ I always feel very comfortable with them, and when I need something, they always help and support me.

Adding commas improves sentence clarity and flow. Also, 'help me and support me' can be shortened to 'help and support me' for conciseness.

× Uh, they are very uh, kind.

✓ They are very kind.

Removing filler words 'uh' makes the sentence clearer and more formal.

× I've been living here since I've born.

✓ I've been living here since I was born.

The phrase 'I've born' is incorrect; the correct past tense form is 'I was born'.

× Because of that, I know the city very well and feel very comfortable living here.

✓ Because of that, I know the city very well and feel very comfortable living here.

This sentence is grammatically correct and needs no correction.

× I don't think so because the conditions to go out with difference is not that good through a lack of cafes here and also pedestrian area.

✓ I don't think so because the conditions for going out are not very good due to a lack of cafes here and also pedestrian areas.

The original sentence has awkward phrasing and incorrect prepositions. 'Conditions to go out with difference' is unclear; 'conditions for going out' is better. 'Through a lack' should be 'due to a lack'. 'Pedestrian area' should be plural 'pedestrian areas'.

× Public transport is very bad.

✓ Public transport is very bad.

This sentence is correct; 'public transport' is uncountable and singular, so no correction needed.

× Parks are very polluted so I believe governments should take.

✓ Parks are very polluted, so I believe the government should take action.

'Governments' should be singular 'government' when referring to the authority of the country. Also, the sentence is incomplete; adding 'take action' completes the thought.