Hometown— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Be clear and concise. Start with a direct topic sentence stating your hometown, then add one or two precise details (location, size, or a defining feature). Avoid fillers and unclear phrases. Use correct grammar: subject-verb agreement and noun phrases.

Ví dụ: I come from a small town in the countryside called X. It is a rural area with wide fields and very fresh air, which makes it peaceful to live in.

Gợi ý: Answer directly and give specific reasons using linking words. Begin with a topic sentence about what you like, then give 1–2 specific supporting details (examples or reasons). Avoid hesitations and unclear vocabulary.

Ví dụ: What I like most about my hometown is the clean, fresh air. For example, when I return there I enjoy long walks in the fields because the air feels pure and it helps me relax.

Gợi ý: Give a precise time period and use clear chronological language. Start with a direct statement of duration, then add brief context if needed (e.g. stages of life). Keep sentences short and grammatical, and use correct tense.

Ví dụ: I lived there for about eighteen years, from when I was a newborn until I finished high school. After that I moved to Hanoi to begin my university studies.

Gợi ý: Respond with a clear opinion and justify it with specific reasons and contrast. Use linking words (however, but, on the other hand). Avoid unclear words and correct vocabulary mistakes (e.g., 'opportunities', 'career', 'relaxed environment').

Ví dụ: It depends on their goals. If young people want career opportunities, it is not ideal because there are few jobs and little industry. However, if they prefer a quiet, affordable life with close community ties, it can be a good place to live.

× You can probably guess I come from uh, I come from countryside is really big pool detonation that had test fresh air.

✓ You can probably guess I come from the countryside; it is a really big place with fresh air.

Original sentence has multiple sentence structure problems: missing article 'the' before 'countryside' (article error, but mainly structure), incorrect noun phrases ('pool detonation' and 'that had test fresh air' are unintelligible), and run-on fragments. I corrected to a clear, grammatical sentence: include the definite article 'the countryside', use a clear noun phrase 'a really big place', and state 'with fresh air' to convey the intended meaning. Suggestion: break ideas into simple clauses, use correct articles, and choose accurate vocabulary to match meaning.

× What I very what I keen on about my hometown is thread air.

✓ What I am very keen on about my hometown is the fresh air.

The sentence misuses words and lacks correct verb form. 'Very' should modify an adjective but the structure requires 'I am very keen on'. 'Thread air' is incorrect—likely intended 'fresh air'. I corrected to 'I am very keen on' plus 'the fresh air'. Suggestion: use the verb 'be' with adjectives ('I am keen on') and choose correct adjective 'fresh'.

× Every time I come back home I can breathe in, fruit in in a really umm, could you add more Fiat dumb line?

✓ Every time I come back home I can breathe in the fresh air; it is really nice.

Original is fragmented and contains unintelligible fragments ('fruit in in', 'could you add more Fiat dumb line'). I replaced those with a coherent clause that matches context: 'breathe in the fresh air' and 'it is really nice.' Suggestion: remove filler words and unclear fragments; keep sentences concise and relevant to the question.

× I have lived here for a long time from my one new born baby to a a high school student and after that I moved to Hanoi to start my third year tertiary level in study.

✓ I lived there for a long time, from when I was a newborn until I was a high school student; after that I moved to Hanoi to begin my third year of tertiary study.

The original mixes present perfect 'have lived' with past events and has incorrect noun forms ('new born', 'tertiary level in study'). The timeframe refers to completed past periods, so simple past is appropriate: 'I lived there.' Also correct 'newborn' and the phrase 'begin my third year of tertiary study.' Suggestion: match tense to the time reference (use past for completed past periods) and use standard collocations ('newborn', 'tertiary study').

× Is the pain on young people the light target?

✓ Is it good for young people?

The original is unintelligible and likely a literal mistranslation. I provided a clear, concise rephrasing that fits the examiner's question about suitability for young people. Suggestion: respond directly using common expressions ('Is it good for young people?').

× If they have a bigger ambition in work, I think it's not a good place for them to to live.

✓ If they have bigger ambitions in their work, I think it's not a good place for them to live.

Original has pronoun and pluralization issues: 'a bigger ambition' should be plural 'bigger ambitions' when speaking generally, and 'in work' is improved to 'in their work'. Also remove duplicate 'to'. Suggestion: use plural when speaking generally about goals and match pronouns to possessive context ('their work').

× And if you want to have a big fool. Destination to live as can be a good place to.

✓ But if you want a peaceful destination to live in, it can be a good place.

The original contains many errors and nonsense words ('big fool. Destination', 'to live as can be a good place to'). I interpreted intent as 'a peaceful/quiet place' and corrected to a grammatical sentence: 'a peaceful destination to live in.' Suggestion: choose correct vocabulary ('peaceful' or 'quiet') and use proper preposition 'to live in' at sentence end.