HometownPart 1 Báo cáo

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Part 1

Giám khảo

Where is your hometown?

Thí sinh

How I do live in hometown?

Giám khảo

What do you like about your home town?

Thí sinh

I like so many things in my hometown first, so many facilities there. School, College Park.

Giám khảo

How long have you lived there?

Thí sinh

Almost. I lived there 20 years and that hometown is very beautiful.

Giám khảo

Is your home town a good place for young people?

Thí sinh

Has this good place for young people because there is several things that they can learn from there.

Đánh giá

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Tổng: 5.0Trôi chảy và mạch lạc: 5.0Phát âm: 5.0Ngữ pháp: 5.0Từ vựng: 5.0

Part 1

Where is your hometown?

Điểm: 22.0

Gợi ý: Give a direct, grammatically correct answer that states the place, using a clear topic sentence. Keep it short (1–2 sentences) and avoid questions. Add one brief detail if helpful (e.g., region or a notable city nearby).

Ví dụ: I live in Guwahati, in the northeast of India. It’s a major city in Assam and is known for its riverfront and markets.

What do you like about your home town?

Điểm: 44.0

Gợi ý: Start with a clear topic sentence saying one or two things you like. Then add 1–2 specific supporting details using linking words (e.g., "for example", "also") to make it coherent. Keep answers under five sentences and use accurate nouns and articles.

Ví dụ: I like the facilities in my hometown, especially the parks and schools. For example, there is a large park called College Park where families relax, and several good schools close to my house.

How long have you lived there?

Điểm: 46.0

Gợi ý: Answer directly with the correct tense and a clear time expression. Use one sentence for the duration and an optional second sentence to add a brief reason or description, linked naturally.

Ví dụ: I have lived there for about 20 years. It’s a very beautiful town with tree-lined streets and friendly neighbors.

Is your home town a good place for young people?

Điểm: 40.0

Gợi ý: Begin with a direct statement (Yes/No and why). Use linking words (e.g., "because", "for example") and provide one or two specific reasons or examples. Make sure grammar agrees (subject-verb, articles).

Ví dụ: Yes, it’s a good place for young people because there are many educational programs and sports clubs. For example, local community centers offer coding classes and weekend football teams.

Ngữ pháp

Sentence structure errors

× How I do live in hometown?

How do I live in my hometown?

The sentence has incorrect word order for an English question and missing article 'my' before 'hometown'. Use auxiliary do + subject + base verb for present simple questions: 'How do I live...'. Also include the possessive determiner 'my' to specify which hometown is meant.

Incorrect use of articles

× I like so many things in my hometown first, so many facilities there. School, College Park.

I like many things about my hometown. First, there are many facilities, such as schools and a college park.

Article and structure errors: 'so many' is conversational but repetitive; 'in my hometown' should be followed by a clear clause. 'There' needs a verb: 'there are many facilities'. Also nouns need correct plurality and articles: 'School, College Park' is unclear; use 'schools and a college park' to list items. Reorganize into two sentences for clarity.

Past tense issue

× Almost. I lived there 20 years and that hometown is very beautiful.

I've lived there for almost 20 years, and my hometown is very beautiful.

Tense and time expression: Use present perfect 'I've lived' with 'for' to indicate duration up to now. 'Almost 20 years' should be together. Also use the possessive 'my hometown' and join clauses with 'and' for coherence.

There be issue

× Has this good place for young people because there is several things that they can learn from there.

Yes, it's a good place for young people because there are several things they can learn there.

Incorrect existential construction: 'Has this good place' is ungrammatical. Use 'It's a good place' or 'Yes, it is a good place'. Use 'there are' for plural 'several things'. Remove unnecessary 'from' after 'learn' — 'learn there' or 'learn from it' are correct. Also 'they' as subject is fine.

Từ vựng trọng tâm

BeautifulAttractive
GoodFine; Virtuous; Well-behaved; Right; Capable
ManyNumerous; A great/good deal of
YoungYouthful; Immature; Fledgling; Offspring; Young people
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