Part 1
Giám khảo
Did you do puzzles in your childhood?
Thí sinh
Well, if my memory serves me right. I was around 2011 I'm I was singing primary school student. I think I often do puzzles. Puzzles in my school, because it is, were interesting and really liked.
Giám khảo
When do you do puzzles, during your trip or when you feel bored?
Thí sinh
You know, that's actually not my cup of tea. Because I am a introverted person so I'm I often listen music holes in. In in my trip. I think it a better choice.
Giám khảo
Do you like doing word puzzles or number puzzles? Which is more difficult for you?
Thí sinh
I say slide. That's actually not my cup of tea, but I'm really into word puzzles because it more. Interesting for me. You know what puzzles can help me express my? Academic knowledge E.
Giám khảo
Do you think it is good for old people to do puzzles?
Thí sinh
Yes, I think it is good for old people to do puzzles. Because I think. Do puzzles. It's a very important. Important. So.
Did you do puzzles in your childhood?
Điểm: 50.0Gợi ý: 回答中语法和表达不够准确,句子结构混乱,建议简化句子,直接回答问题,并补充具体细节。
Ví dụ: Yes, I often did puzzles when I was in primary school because I found them interesting and enjoyable.
When do you do puzzles, during your trip or when you feel bored?
Điểm: 40.0Gợi ý: 回答不够连贯,表达不清楚,建议直接回答问题并用连词连接句子,说明原因。
Ví dụ: I usually listen to music during my trips because I am an introverted person, so puzzles are not my favorite activity.
Do you like doing word puzzles or number puzzles? Which is more difficult for you?
Điểm: 45.0Gợi ý: 回答中有语法错误和表达不清晰的问题,建议明确表达喜好并解释原因,避免含糊。
Ví dụ: I prefer word puzzles because they are more interesting and help me improve my vocabulary and academic knowledge.
Do you think it is good for old people to do puzzles?
Điểm: 40.0Gợi ý: 回答过于简短且重复,缺乏具体理由,建议补充详细原因并用连词连接句子。
Ví dụ: Yes, I believe puzzles are beneficial for older people because they help keep the mind active and improve memory.
× I was around 2011 I'm I was singing primary school student.
✓ I was around 2011, I was a primary school student.
句子中使用了错误的时态和结构,应该用过去时态描述过去的情况,并且“singing”应为“a”加名词形式,表示“我是一个小学生”。
× I think I often do puzzles.
✓ I think I often did puzzles.
描述过去习惯时,应使用过去时态“did”而非现在时“do”。
× Puzzles in my school, because it is, were interesting and really liked.
✓ Puzzles in my school were interesting and I really liked them.
句子结构混乱,缺少主语和谓语的正确搭配,应明确表达“拼图在学校很有趣,我很喜欢它们”。
× Because I am a introverted person so I'm I often listen music holes in.
✓ Because I am an introverted person, I often listen to music during trips.
“a”后面应接以辅音音素开头的词,“introverted”以元音音素开头,应使用“an”;“listen”后应加介词“to”;“holes in”不合适,改为“during trips”更准确。
× I think it a better choice.
✓ I think it is a better choice.
句子缺少动词“is”,导致结构不完整,应补充。
× I say slide.
✓ I would say no.
“slide”用词错误,可能想表达否定,应使用“no”或“not really”。
× because it more. Interesting for me.
✓ because it is more interesting for me.
缺少动词“is”,导致句子不完整,应补充。
× You know what puzzles can help me express my? Academic knowledge E.
✓ You know, puzzles can help me express my academic knowledge.
句子结构混乱,问号和多余字母“E”应去除,调整语序使句子通顺。
× Because I think. Do puzzles. It's a very important. Important. So.
✓ Because I think doing puzzles is very important.
句子断裂且重复,应合并为完整句子,表达清晰。