Part 1
Giám khảo
Did you do puzzles in your childhood?
Thí sinh
In fact, I dislike do puzzles and didn't do it when I was a child. I think it's difficult for me and I wasn't very interested in solving them so I'm unable to do it.
Giám khảo
When do you do puzzles, during your trip or when you feel bored?
Thí sinh
No, it is difficult and boring for me. When I feel bored, I prefer to watch movies or listening to music.
Giám khảo
Do you like doing word puzzles or number puzzles? Which is more difficult for you?
Thí sinh
Neither numbered puzzles can be too challenging for me and I get stuck.
Giám khảo
Do you think it is good for old people to do puzzles?
Thí sinh
Yes, I think it's good for them. Parcel can improve memory and cognitive skills which are important for the elderly. For example, solving puzzles regularly can keep their minds active.
Did you do puzzles in your childhood?
Điểm: 60.0Gợi ý: 回答中存在语法错误,如'dislike do puzzles'应为'dislike doing puzzles',且表达不够自然。建议使用更地道的表达方式,并避免重复表达相同意思。
Ví dụ: Actually, I didn't enjoy doing puzzles when I was a child because I found them quite challenging and not very interesting.
When do you do puzzles, during your trip or when you feel bored?
Điểm: 65.0Gợi ý: 回答中存在语法错误,如'watch movies or listening to music'应保持动词形式一致。建议使用连贯的句子结构,并适当使用连接词使表达更流畅。
Ví dụ: I usually don't do puzzles because I find them difficult and boring. Instead, when I feel bored, I prefer to watch movies or listen to music.
Do you like doing word puzzles or number puzzles? Which is more difficult for you?
Điểm: 50.0Gợi ý: 回答不完整且语法错误,表达不清晰。建议明确表达喜欢或不喜欢哪种谜题,并说明原因,使用完整句子。
Ví dụ: I don't enjoy either word puzzles or number puzzles because both can be quite challenging, and I often get stuck while solving them.
Do you think it is good for old people to do puzzles?
Điểm: 70.0Gợi ý: 回答中有拼写错误,如'Parcel'应为'Puzzles'。建议注意拼写准确性,并使用更多具体细节支持观点。
Ví dụ: Yes, I believe puzzles are beneficial for elderly people because they help improve memory and cognitive skills. For instance, regularly solving puzzles can keep their minds sharp and active.
× In fact, I dislike do puzzles and didn't do it when I was a child.
✓ In fact, I dislike doing puzzles and didn't do them when I was a child.
动词dislike后应接动名词doing,而不是动词原形do。此外,puzzles是复数,代词应使用them而不是it。
× In fact, I dislike do puzzles and didn't do it when I was a child.
✓ In fact, I dislike doing puzzles and didn't do them when I was a child.
puzzles是复数,代词应使用them而不是it。
× I think it's difficult for me and I wasn't very interested in solving them so I'm unable to do it.
✓ I thought it was difficult for me and I wasn't very interested in solving them so I was unable to do it.
句子描述过去的情况,动词时态应使用过去时。
× I think it's difficult for me and I wasn't very interested in solving them so I'm unable to do it.
✓ I thought it was difficult for me and I wasn't very interested in solving them so I was unable to do it.
前文提到puzzles是复数,代词应使用them而不是it。
× No, it is difficult and boring for me. When I feel bored, I prefer to watch movies or listening to music.
✓ No, it is difficult and boring for me. When I feel bored, I prefer to watch movies or listen to music.
prefer后应接动词原形或动名词,但在此结构中应使用动词原形listen而非动名词listening。
× Neither numbered puzzles can be too challenging for me and I get stuck.
✓ Neither number puzzles nor word puzzles are too challenging for me and I get stuck.
句子结构不完整且表达不清,应明确指出两种拼图类型。
× Neither numbered puzzles can be too challenging for me and I get stuck.
✓ Neither number puzzles nor word puzzles are too challenging for me, but sometimes I get stuck.
句子中形容词使用不当,且逻辑不清,需调整表达使其更自然。
× Parcel can improve memory and cognitive skills which are important for the elderly.
✓ Puzzles can improve memory and cognitive skills which are important for the elderly.
单词Parcel错误,应为Puzzles。
× Parcel can improve memory and cognitive skills which are important for the elderly.
✓ Puzzles can improve memory and cognitive skills which are important for the elderly.
单词拼写错误,Parcel应为Puzzles。