Part 1
Giám khảo
Did you do puzzles in your childhood?
Thí sinh
Yes, I often did puzzles when I was kid. I love the number puzzles the most because they were both fun and challenging. It's a great way to spend time together with my families and develop my patience.
Giám khảo
When do you do puzzles, during your trip or when you feel bored?
Thí sinh
Actually, I don't often do the puzzle. Instead, I prefer watching videos and playing game at home, which is entertaining and relaxing. If I have free time, I would spend time doing these activities.
Giám khảo
Do you like doing word puzzles or number puzzles? Which is more difficult for you?
Thí sinh
I prefer doing number puzzles. They are challenging, but very satisfying when I solve them. What puzzles are more difficult for me because I sometimes struggle with spelling.
Giám khảo
Do you think it is good for old people to do puzzles?
Thí sinh
Yes, I think good way for old people to keep their minds active, improve memory. And it's also a relaxing hobby that doesn't require much physical effort. My grandparents enjoy doing puzzles almost every day.
Did you do puzzles in your childhood?
Điểm: 75.0Gợi ý: 回答时应注意语法准确性,例如“when I was kid”应为“when I was a kid”。此外,回答可以更自然流畅,避免重复表达“both fun and challenging”,可以用更丰富的词汇描述感受。
Ví dụ: Yes, I often did puzzles when I was a kid. I especially enjoyed number puzzles because they were enjoyable and mentally stimulating. They also provided a wonderful opportunity to bond with my family and helped me develop patience.
When do you do puzzles, during your trip or when you feel bored?
Điểm: 70.0Gợi ý: 回答中存在语法错误,如“do the puzzle”应为“do puzzles”,“playing game”应为“playing games”。回答内容可以更具体,说明什么时候会选择做拼图,使用连接词使表达更连贯。
Ví dụ: Actually, I don't often do puzzles. Instead, I prefer watching videos and playing games at home because they are entertaining and relaxing. However, if I feel bored during a trip, I might do puzzles to pass the time.
Do you like doing word puzzles or number puzzles? Which is more difficult for you?
Điểm: 65.0Gợi ý: 回答中有语法错误和表达不清,如“What puzzles are more difficult for me”应为“Word puzzles are more difficult for me”。建议使用完整句子表达观点,并增加连接词使逻辑更清晰。
Ví dụ: I prefer doing number puzzles because they are challenging but very satisfying when I solve them. On the other hand, word puzzles are more difficult for me since I sometimes struggle with spelling.
Do you think it is good for old people to do puzzles?
Điểm: 70.0Gợi ý: 回答中缺少主语和谓语,如“I think good way”应为“I think it is a good way”。建议使用完整句子,并用连接词使句子更连贯。
Ví dụ: Yes, I think doing puzzles is a good way for older people to keep their minds active and improve their memory. Moreover, it is a relaxing hobby that doesn't require much physical effort. For example, my grandparents enjoy doing puzzles almost every day.
× I love the number puzzles the most because they were both fun and challenging.
✓ I love number puzzles the most because they are both fun and challenging.
“number puzzles”前不需要加定冠词“the”,且后半句描述现在的感受,应使用现在时态“are”。
× It's a great way to spend time together with my families and develop my patience.
✓ It's a great way to spend time together with my family and develop my patience.
“families”应为单数“family”,表示“家人”整体。
× Actually, I don't often do the puzzle.
✓ Actually, I don't often do puzzles.
“puzzle”应使用复数形式“puzzles”,表示一般活动。
× Instead, I prefer watching videos and playing game at home, which is entertaining and relaxing.
✓ Instead, I prefer watching videos and playing games at home, which are entertaining and relaxing.
“game”应为复数“games”,且“videos and games”作为复数主语,谓语动词应用复数“are”。
× What puzzles are more difficult for me because I sometimes struggle with spelling.
✓ Word puzzles are more difficult for me because I sometimes struggle with spelling.
句子缺少主语,应补充“Word puzzles”来明确指代。
× Yes, I think good way for old people to keep their minds active, improve memory.
✓ Yes, I think it's a good way for old people to keep their minds active and improve memory.
句子缺少主语和连词,需补充“it's”和“and”使句子完整通顺。