Part 1
Giám khảo
Did you do puzzles in your childhood?
Thí sinh
Of course, I often do puzzle in when I was a kid. I think this is a very interesting and can enhance my soul problem skill. So I love to do puzzle.
Giám khảo
When do you do puzzles, during your trip or when you feel bored?
Thí sinh
I often do puzzle when I feel bored and have a lot of time. I think this is a very good way to enhance my focus on something. Yeah, they can help me a lot of and pass the time.
Giám khảo
Do you like doing word puzzles or number puzzles? Which is more difficult for you?
Thí sinh
I prefer Lambert puzzle because I think Lambert puzzle can help me enhance my math skill and logic logical seeing. So I I usually do some labor puzzle in my free time.
Giám khảo
Do you think it is good for old people to do puzzles?
Thí sinh
Of course, I think this is a better way to help older people relax and past time. For example, I usually do do puzzles with my grandma. I think they can help her in her her experience and congratulate.
Did you do puzzles in your childhood?
Điểm: 55.0Gợi ý: 你的回答中存在语法错误和用词不当,如“do puzzle in when I was a kid”应为“did puzzles when I was a kid”,以及“soul problem skill”应为“problem-solving skills”。建议注意时态一致性和词汇准确性,同时避免重复表达。
Ví dụ: Yes, I often did puzzles when I was a child because I found them very interesting and they helped me improve my problem-solving skills.
When do you do puzzles, during your trip or when you feel bored?
Điểm: 60.0Gợi ý: 回答中存在语法错误和表达不完整,如“help me a lot of and pass the time”不完整。建议使用完整句子,注意冠词和复数形式,同时使用连接词使表达更连贯。
Ví dụ: I usually do puzzles when I feel bored and have free time because they help me improve my concentration and also pass the time enjoyably.
Do you like doing word puzzles or number puzzles? Which is more difficult for you?
Điểm: 50.0Gợi ý: 回答中多次出现拼写错误和重复,如“Lambert puzzle”应为“number puzzles”,“logic logical seeing”表达不清。建议准确使用词汇,避免重复,并清晰表达观点。
Ví dụ: I prefer number puzzles because they help me improve my math skills and logical thinking, so I often do them in my free time.
Do you think it is good for old people to do puzzles?
Điểm: 45.0Gợi ý: 回答中存在多处语法和拼写错误,如“past time”应为“pass time”,“do do puzzles”,“her her experience and congratulate”表达不清。建议简洁明了地表达观点,避免重复和错误。
Ví dụ: Yes, I believe puzzles are a great way for older people to relax and pass the time. For example, I often do puzzles with my grandma, and it helps keep her mind active.
× Of course, I often do puzzle in when I was a kid.
✓ Of course, I often did puzzles when I was a kid.
这里“puzzle”应使用复数形式“puzzles”,因为表示多次做拼图游戏。并且时态应与“when I was a kid”一致,使用过去时“did”。
× Of course, I often do puzzle in when I was a kid.
✓ Of course, I often did puzzles when I was a kid.
句中描述过去的习惯动作,应使用过去时态“did”而非现在时“do”。
× I think this is a very interesting and can enhance my soul problem skill.
✓ I think this is very interesting and can enhance my problem-solving skills.
句子结构不完整,缺少名词,且“soul problem skill”表达不正确,应改为“problem-solving skills”表示解决问题的能力。
× So I love to do puzzle.
✓ So I love to do puzzles.
“puzzle”应使用复数形式“puzzles”,表示拼图游戏的复数。
× I often do puzzle when I feel bored and have a lot of time.
✓ I often do puzzles when I feel bored and have a lot of time.
“puzzle”应使用复数形式“puzzles”,表示多次做拼图游戏。
× I think this is a very good way to enhance my focus on something.
✓ I think this is a very good way to improve my focus on something.
“enhance my focus on something”表达不自然,通常用“improve my focus”更合适。
× Yeah, they can help me a lot of and pass the time.
✓ Yeah, they can help me a lot and pass the time.
“a lot of”后面应接名词,这里应去掉“of”,直接用“a lot”表示“很多”。
× I prefer Lambert puzzle because I think Lambert puzzle can help me enhance my math skill and logic logical seeing.
✓ I prefer Lambert puzzles because I think Lambert puzzles can help me enhance my math skills and logical thinking.
“puzzle”应使用复数形式“puzzles”;“math skill”应为复数“math skills”;“logic logical seeing”表达错误,应改为“logical thinking”。
× So I I usually do some labor puzzle in my free time.
✓ So I usually do some Lambert puzzles in my free time.
“labor puzzle”应为“Lambert puzzles”,且时态用现在时“do”符合习惯表达。
× I think this is a better way to help older people relax and past time.
✓ I think this is a better way to help older people relax and pass the time.
“past time”应为“pass the time”,表示消磨时间。
× For example, I usually do do puzzles with my grandma.
✓ For example, I usually do puzzles with my grandma.
“do do”重复,应去掉一个“do”,保持现在时态。
× I think they can help her in her her experience and congratulate.
✓ I think they can help her with her experience and concentration.
“her her experience”重复,应去掉一个“her”;“congratulate”用词错误,应为“concentration”(专注力)。