Part 1
Giám khảo
Did you do puzzles in your childhood?
Thí sinh
Actually I don't like to puzzles in my childhood and when I was a kid I prefer playing chess with my grandpa which can also train my logical thoughts.
Giám khảo
When do you do puzzles, during your trip or when you feel bored?
Thí sinh
It depends, if I'm on a trip I would prefer reading, but when I feel bored and also have a puzzle in hand I will do that.
Giám khảo
Do you like doing word puzzles or number puzzles? Which is more difficult for you?
Thí sinh
I think number puzzles are more easy because Chinese character for Chinese character is hard to make word puzzles, so we also do never puzzles.
Giám khảo
Do you think it is good for old people to do puzzles?
Thí sinh
Yes, definitely, I think it do puzzles can help them avoid forgetting memories, especially for those older people.
Did you do puzzles in your childhood?
Điểm: 60.0Gợi ý: 你的回答中有语法错误和表达不自然的地方,比如“don't like to puzzles”应为“didn't like puzzles”,并且句子结构较为混乱。建议使用简单明了的句子结构,直接回答问题并补充细节。
Ví dụ: No, I didn't like doing puzzles when I was a child. Instead, I preferred playing chess with my grandpa because it helped me develop logical thinking skills.
When do you do puzzles, during your trip or when you feel bored?
Điểm: 70.0Gợi ý: 回答较为自然,但句子连接稍显生硬。建议使用连接词使句子更流畅,同时注意时态和表达的准确性。
Ví dụ: It depends. When I'm on a trip, I prefer reading, but if I feel bored and have a puzzle available, I usually do it to pass the time.
Do you like doing word puzzles or number puzzles? Which is more difficult for you?
Điểm: 50.0Gợi ý: 回答中存在语法错误和表达不清的问题,如“more easy”应为“easier”,“never puzzles”可能是拼写错误。建议使用正确的词汇和句型,清晰表达观点。
Ví dụ: I find number puzzles easier than word puzzles because Chinese characters are complex, making word puzzles more difficult for me.
Do you think it is good for old people to do puzzles?
Điểm: 55.0Gợi ý: 句子结构不完整且语法错误较多,如“it do puzzles”应为“doing puzzles”。建议使用完整句子并准确表达观点。
Ví dụ: Yes, definitely. I think doing puzzles can help older people keep their memories sharp and prevent memory loss.
× Actually I don't like to puzzles in my childhood and when I was a kid I prefer playing chess with my grandpa which can also train my logical thoughts.
✓ Actually I didn't like doing puzzles in my childhood and when I was a kid I preferred playing chess with my grandpa which could also train my logical thoughts.
The phrase 'like to puzzles' is incorrect because 'like' should be followed by a gerund (verb + -ing) when expressing preference for an activity. Also, the sentence refers to past time ('in my childhood'), so past tense verbs 'didn't like' and 'preferred' should be used to maintain tense consistency. 'Can' should be changed to 'could' to match past tense context.
× Actually I don't like to puzzles in my childhood and when I was a kid I prefer playing chess with my grandpa which can also train my logical thoughts.
✓ Actually I didn't like doing puzzles in my childhood and when I was a kid I preferred playing chess with my grandpa which could also train my logical thoughts.
The modal verb 'can' is used for present or general ability, but since the sentence refers to past time, 'could' is the correct modal verb to express past ability or possibility.
× It depends, if I'm on a trip I would prefer reading, but when I feel bored and also have a puzzle in hand I will do that.
✓ It depends, if I'm on a trip I would prefer reading, but when I feel bored and also have a puzzle in hand I will do it.
The phrase 'do that' is less natural here; 'do it' is more appropriate when referring to an activity like solving a puzzle. However, this is more about natural usage than grammar error. No major grammar mistake found here.
× I think number puzzles are more easy because Chinese character for Chinese character is hard to make word puzzles, so we also do never puzzles.
✓ I think number puzzles are easier because Chinese characters are hard to use to make word puzzles, so we also do number puzzles.
The comparative form of 'easy' is 'easier', so 'more easy' is incorrect. Also, 'Chinese character for Chinese character' is unclear and ungrammatical; it should be 'Chinese characters'. 'Never puzzles' is likely a typo for 'number puzzles'. The sentence is corrected for clarity and grammar.
× Yes, definitely, I think it do puzzles can help them avoid forgetting memories, especially for those older people.
✓ Yes, definitely, I think doing puzzles can help them avoid forgetting memories, especially for older people.
The phrase 'it do puzzles' is incorrect. The correct form is 'doing puzzles' to function as the subject of the sentence. Also, 'those older people' is better as 'older people' for natural expression.