Puzzles— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Cavabınızda təkrarlar və qrammatik səhvlər var. Daha təbii və axıcı olmaq üçün cümlələri sadə və aydın qurun, təkrarları aradan qaldırın.

Ví dụ: Yes, I enjoyed doing puzzles as a child. One of my favorites was the Princess Puzzle because it was very pretty, and I felt very happy when I completed it.

Gợi ý: Cümlələrinizdə qrammatik səhvlər və təkrarlar mövcuddur. Daha aydın və məntiqli cavab üçün keçid sözlərindən istifadə edin və fikirlərinizi daha qısa və dəqiq ifadə edin.

Ví dụ: I usually do puzzles when I feel bored at home because during trips, I prefer reading books or using my phone. However, when I'm bored at home, I like to take a break from screens and enjoy puzzles instead.

Gợi ý: Cavabınız aydın və məntiqlidir, lakin daha çox dəstək verən detallar əlavə edə bilərsiniz. Məsələn, niyə rəqəm tapmacaları çətin gəlir və hansı növ tapmacaları sevdiyinizi qeyd edin.

Ví dụ: I find number puzzles more challenging because I have more experience with word puzzles since childhood. For example, crossword puzzles are easier for me, but Sudoku puzzles are quite difficult.

Gợi ý: Cümlələrinizdə qrammatik səhvlər və təkrarlar var. Cavabınızı daha təbii və axıcı etmək üçün fikirlərinizi daha aydın və qısa ifadə edin, keçid sözlərindən istifadə edin.

Ví dụ: Definitely yes. Doing puzzles helps older people to keep their minds active and relaxed. Therefore, they should spend some of their free time solving puzzles to stay entertained and mentally sharp.

× It was so pretty and I was so I was over the moon for doing that puzzle.

✓ It was so pretty and I was over the moon doing that puzzle.

The phrase 'I was so I was over the moon for doing that puzzle' contains a repetition and incorrect preposition usage. The correct form is 'I was over the moon doing that puzzle' where 'doing' is the present participle correctly used to express the activity causing happiness.

× I usually prefer to do pause when I'm bored because on my trips I usually prefer reading books or playing with my phone.

✓ I usually prefer to do puzzles when I'm bored because on my trips I usually prefer reading books or playing with my phone.

The word 'pause' is a typo or incorrect word here; it should be 'puzzles'. Also, 'prefer to do puzzles' is correct usage. The error is a lexical mistake rather than a grammatical preposition error, but it affects sentence clarity.

× But when I board at home, I don't want to look at my phone or I don't want to read any books at that time.

✓ But when I am bored at home, I don't want to look at my phone or read any books at that time.

The word 'board' is a misspelling of 'bored'. Also, 'when I board at home' is incorrect; it should be 'when I am bored at home'. The verb 'am' is necessary to form the present continuous tense here.

× If older people want to state their mind, want to keep their mind relax and entertain, they definitely should use they should do puzzles in their free time.

✓ If older people want to stimulate their mind, keep their mind relaxed and entertained, they definitely should do puzzles in their free time.

The phrase 'state their mind' is incorrect; the intended meaning is likely 'stimulate their mind'. Also, 'keep their mind relax and entertain' is grammatically incorrect; it should be 'keep their mind relaxed and entertained'. The phrase 'they definitely should use they should do puzzles' is redundant and should be simplified to 'they definitely should do puzzles'.