Part 1
Giám khảo
Did you do puzzles in your childhood?
Thí sinh
Well, when I was a kid I used to collect many kind of puzzle, but especially if the shoppers also is probably I always play puzzle when I have a free time.
Giám khảo
When do you do puzzles, during your trip or when you feel bored?
Thí sinh
Well, I prefer doing puzzles when I feel bored because they help me relax and pass the time indoors. However, during the trips, I usually enjoy outdoor activities like hiking or sightseeing, which are more exciting than staying inside and serving.
Giám khảo
Do you like doing word puzzles or number puzzles? Which is more difficult for you?
Thí sinh
Well, I prefer doing a work result because it's much more exciting than the numbers puzzle. I feel number puzzle is difficult because there's a lot of kind of number that I can remember.
Giám khảo
Do you think it is good for old people to do puzzles?
Thí sinh
I think do perseverance suit for older people when they have no more exciting activities they can do they care. They could just stay at home and solve a puzzle. It helps them feel relaxed too.
Did you do puzzles in your childhood?
Điểm: 55.0Gợi ý: Câu trả lời của bạn thiếu sự rõ ràng và có nhiều lỗi ngữ pháp, khiến ý không được truyền đạt tự nhiên và hiệu quả. Bạn nên trả lời trực tiếp câu hỏi với câu chủ đề rõ ràng, tránh dùng những cụm từ không chính xác và nên sử dụng câu ngắn gọn, mạch lạc hơn.
Ví dụ: Yes, I used to enjoy doing puzzles when I was a child. I collected different types of puzzles and often played them during my free time.
When do you do puzzles, during your trip or when you feel bored?
Điểm: 70.0Gợi ý: Bạn đã trả lời khá rõ ràng và có sử dụng liên từ để nối ý, tuy nhiên câu cuối có phần không chính xác và hơi dài dòng. Bạn nên chú ý dùng từ đúng ngữ cảnh và tránh lỗi từ vựng để câu trả lời tự nhiên hơn.
Ví dụ: I usually do puzzles when I feel bored because they help me relax indoors. On trips, I prefer outdoor activities like hiking or sightseeing, which I find more exciting.
Do you like doing word puzzles or number puzzles? Which is more difficult for you?
Điểm: 50.0Gợi ý: Câu trả lời có nhiều lỗi ngữ pháp và từ vựng không chính xác, làm cho ý nghĩa không rõ ràng. Bạn nên sử dụng từ vựng phù hợp và cấu trúc câu đơn giản, rõ ràng để truyền đạt ý kiến của mình hiệu quả hơn.
Ví dụ: I prefer doing word puzzles because they are more interesting to me. Number puzzles are more difficult since I find it hard to remember many numbers.
Do you think it is good for old people to do puzzles?
Điểm: 45.0Gợi ý: Câu trả lời của bạn thiếu sự mạch lạc và có nhiều lỗi ngữ pháp, khiến ý không được truyền đạt rõ ràng. Bạn nên trả lời trực tiếp, sử dụng câu đơn giản và từ vựng phù hợp để diễn đạt ý kiến một cách tự nhiên và hiệu quả.
Ví dụ: I think puzzles are good for older people because they can keep their minds active. When they have fewer exciting activities, solving puzzles at home helps them relax and stay engaged.
× Well, when I was a kid I used to collect many kind of puzzle, but especially if the shoppers also is probably I always play puzzle when I have a free time.
✓ Well, when I was a kid I used to collect many kinds of puzzles, but especially if the shoppers also, I probably always play puzzles when I have free time.
The phrase 'many kind of puzzle' is incorrect because 'kind' should be pluralized to 'kinds' when referring to multiple types, and 'puzzle' should be plural 'puzzles' to match 'many'. Also, 'a free time' is incorrect; 'free time' is uncountable and does not need an article. The sentence structure is complex and somewhat unclear, but the main grammatical errors relate to singular/plural forms.
× Well, when I was a kid I used to collect many kind of puzzle, but especially if the shoppers also is probably I always play puzzle when I have a free time.
✓ Well, when I was a kid I used to collect many kinds of puzzles, but especially if the shoppers also are there, I probably always play puzzles when I have free time.
The verb 'is' does not agree with the plural subject 'shoppers'. It should be 'are' to match the plural subject. Subject-verb agreement is important for clarity and grammatical correctness.
× Well, when I was a kid I used to collect many kind of puzzle, but especially if the shoppers also is probably I always play puzzle when I have a free time.
✓ Well, when I was a kid I used to collect many kinds of puzzles, but especially if the shoppers also are there, I probably always play puzzles when I have free time.
The phrase 'if the shoppers also is probably' is unclear and likely a misuse of prepositions and sentence structure. The preposition 'in' or 'at' might be missing, and the sentence needs restructuring for clarity. The correction assumes the intended meaning is that when shoppers are present, the speaker plays puzzles.
× I think do perseverance suit for older people when they have no more exciting activities they can do they care.
✓ I think doing puzzles suits older people when they have no more exciting activities they can do or care about.
The phrase 'do perseverance suit' is incorrect. 'Do' is unnecessary here, and 'perseverance' is not the correct noun; likely 'puzzles' or 'doing puzzles' is intended. Modal verb usage and verb forms need correction to express ability or suitability properly.
× I think do perseverance suit for older people when they have no more exciting activities they can do they care.
✓ I think doing puzzles suits older people when they have no more exciting activities they can do or care about.
The word 'activities' is plural and correctly used, but 'perseverance' is singular and does not fit the context. The subject and verb agreement is corrected by changing 'do perseverance suit' to 'doing puzzles suits'.
× I think do perseverance suit for older people when they have no more exciting activities they can do they care.
✓ I think doing puzzles suits older people when they have no more exciting activities they can do or care about.
The preposition 'for' is correctly used with 'suit', but the sentence lacks clarity and proper conjunctions. Adding 'or care about' improves the meaning and flow.