Part 1
Giám khảo
Did you do puzzles in your childhood?
Thí sinh
Yes I do. I did Castle in my childhood, but I don't did it a lot. I seldom did it.
Giám khảo
When do you do puzzles, during your trip or when you feel bored?
Thí sinh
I did parcel when I was at home and no one played with me. So I do. I did puzzle to to spend my time.
Giám khảo
Do you like doing word puzzles or number puzzles? Which is more difficult for you?
Thí sinh
I like to did what I would like to do what puzzle and I think the number puzzle is more difficult to me because I'm not good at maths or any numbers.
Giám khảo
Do you think it is good for old people to do puzzles?
Thí sinh
Yes, I think it's good for old people to do puzzle because it can help them to think more and prevent they don't use their brain and their brain will will become older.
Did you do puzzles in your childhood?
Điểm: 50.0Gợi ý: 你的回答中时态使用不准确,且表达不够自然。建议注意动词时态的一致性,并且避免重复表达。可以用更自然的句式来描述过去的习惯。
Ví dụ: Yes, I used to do puzzles like Castle when I was a child, but I didn't do them very often.
When do you do puzzles, during your trip or when you feel bored?
Điểm: 40.0Gợi ý: 回答中存在语法错误和词汇错误,表达不清晰。建议使用正确的词汇和句子结构,明确说明做拼图的时间和原因。
Ví dụ: I usually do puzzles at home when I feel bored and no one is around to play with me. It helps me pass the time.
Do you like doing word puzzles or number puzzles? Which is more difficult for you?
Điểm: 45.0Gợi ý: 回答中语法混乱,表达不明确。建议简洁明了地表达喜好,并说明原因,使用正确的时态和词汇。
Ví dụ: I prefer word puzzles because I find number puzzles more difficult since I'm not good at math.
Do you think it is good for old people to do puzzles?
Điểm: 50.0Gợi ý: 句子结构不完整且重复,表达不够流畅。建议使用连贯的句子,清晰表达观点并避免重复。
Ví dụ: Yes, I think puzzles are good for elderly people because they help keep the brain active and prevent cognitive decline.
× Yes I do. I did Castle in my childhood, but I don't did it a lot. I seldom did it.
✓ Yes, I did. I did puzzles in my childhood, but I didn't do them a lot. I seldom did them.
这里的时态应该统一使用过去时,因为谈论的是过去的事情。'I do' 应改为 'I did','don't did' 是错误的,应该用过去时的否定形式 'didn't do'。另外,Castle 应该是 puzzles 的一种,且后文用代词 them 指代。
× I did parcel when I was at home and no one played with me. So I do. I did puzzle to to spend my time.
✓ I did puzzles when I was at home and no one played with me. So I did. I did puzzles to spend my time.
这里谈论的是过去的事情,应该全部使用过去时态。'So I do' 应改为 'So I did'。'parcel' 应为 'puzzle'。重复的 'to' 应删除。
× I like to did what I would like to do what puzzle and I think the number puzzle is more difficult to me because I'm not good at maths or any numbers.
✓ I like to do the puzzles I want, and I think the number puzzles are more difficult for me because I'm not good at math or numbers.
'like to did' 是错误的,应该用动词原形 'do'。'would like to do what puzzle' 结构混乱,改为更通顺的表达。'number puzzle is' 应改为复数 'number puzzles are',因为指的是一类谜题。
× Yes, I think it's good for old people to do puzzle because it can help them to think more and prevent they don't use their brain and their brain will will become older.
✓ Yes, I think it's good for old people to do puzzles because it can help them think more and prevent their brains from getting old due to lack of use.
'do puzzle' 应为复数 'do puzzles'。'prevent they don't use their brain' 结构错误,应该用 'prevent their brains from getting old'。重复的 'will' 应删除。