Puzzles— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Your answer is somewhat unclear and contains grammatical errors and redundancy. Try to give a clear topic sentence, avoid repetition, and complete your thoughts. Also, use linking words to connect ideas logically.

Ví dụ: Yes, I used to do puzzles in my childhood. For example, my brother and I completed a 1000-piece puzzle together, which we worked on every other night. After finishing it, we proudly hung it on the wall in my room.

Gợi ý: Your answer is unclear and incomplete. Try to organize your ideas clearly, avoid repetition, and finish your sentences. Use linking words to explain reasons or situations.

Ví dụ: I usually do puzzles when I feel bored or when I want to create something decorative for my wall. For instance, I choose a puzzle with an image I like and then assemble it to hang in my house.

Gợi ý: Your answer is somewhat relevant but lacks clarity and structure. Avoid filler phrases and organize your response with a clear topic sentence and supporting details. Use linking words to explain your preferences.

Ví dụ: I prefer doing word puzzles, especially in English, because they help me practice the language. Moreover, I enjoy timed puzzles since they challenge me to think quickly.

Gợi ý: Your answer is good but can be improved by using more precise vocabulary and clearer linking words. Also, avoid informal phrases like 'like brain muscles' and provide a more formal explanation.

Ví dụ: I believe puzzles are beneficial for older adults because they stimulate the brain and help maintain cognitive functions. Therefore, engaging in puzzles can be an effective way for elderly people to keep their minds active.

× I remember I did a couple of of my in my memory.

✓ I remember I did a couple of puzzles in my childhood.

The phrase 'a couple of of my in my memory' is unclear and incorrect. The correct plural form 'puzzles' should be used after 'a couple of' to indicate more than one puzzle. Also, 'in my memory' is awkward here; 'in my childhood' fits the context better.

× I just remember one it was like 1000 pieces puzzle and I put that together with my brother.

✓ I just remember one; it was like a 1000-piece puzzle and I put it together with my brother.

The original sentence is a run-on and lacks proper punctuation. Adding a semicolon separates the two independent clauses. Also, '1000 pieces puzzle' should be '1000-piece puzzle' as a compound adjective describing the puzzle.

× We hang it on my.

✓ We hung it on my wall.

The verb tense should be past tense 'hung' to match the past context. Also, the preposition 'on' is correct, but the object is missing; 'my wall' completes the phrase properly.

× Like I I look for something that I really want to have like A to have in my house hang and then I just put it together and find like.

✓ I look for something that I really want to have hanging in my house, and then I just put it together.

The sentence has repeated words and unclear phrasing. Removing the repeated 'I' and correcting the phrase to 'want to have hanging in my house' clarifies the meaning. The phrase 'and find like' is incomplete and removed for clarity.

× I'd rather to do word puzzle and normally I do it in English.

✓ I'd rather do word puzzles and normally I do them in English.

The phrase 'I'd rather to do' is incorrect; 'rather' is followed directly by the base verb without 'to'. Also, 'word puzzle' should be plural 'word puzzles' to match general preference, and 'do it' should be 'do them' to agree with the plural noun.

× Actually I like to practice English that way and I believe I like the timing one when you have to do it fast.

✓ Actually, I like to practice English that way, and I believe I like the timed one when you have to do it fast.

The phrase 'the timing one' is incorrect; 'timed one' is the correct adjective form to describe a puzzle with a time limit. Commas are added for clarity.