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Part 1

Giám khảo

Did you do puzzles in your childhood?

Thí sinh

Yes, I did a lot of jigsaw puzzles when I was a child. I think it's really exciting and challenging. That's really excited me.

Giám khảo

When do you do puzzles, during your trip or when you feel bored?

Thí sinh

Actually, I will not choose to do puzzles when I was on a trip because I want to explore, explore a new play place. But if I was at home feeling bored, I will do puzzles to entertain myself.

Giám khảo

Do you like doing word puzzles or number puzzles? Which is more difficult for you?

Thí sinh

I'd like to some number puzzles. I used to play play a game named 3046 and I think a word puzzle is more difficult for me because it's really flexible.

Giám khảo

Do you think it is good for old people to do puzzles?

Thí sinh

Yes, I think so. It can help exercise their mind and improve their memory. And the most important thing I think is it give a fun way for them to pass the time that can really reduce the feeling of loneliness.

Đánh giá

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Tổng: 6.0Trôi chảy và mạch lạc: 6.0Phát âm: 6.0Ngữ pháp: 5.5Từ vựng: 6.0

Part 1

Did you do puzzles in your childhood?

Điểm: 70.0

Gợi ý: 回答时语法和表达不够自然,尤其是最后一句话"That's really excited me"不符合英语习惯,应改为"That really excited me"。建议注意时态和表达的准确性,避免语法错误。

Ví dụ: Yes, I did a lot of jigsaw puzzles when I was a child. I found them really exciting and challenging, which made me feel very happy.

When do you do puzzles, during your trip or when you feel bored?

Điểm: 65.0

Gợi ý: 时态使用不一致,混用了过去和将来时,且表达重复("explore, explore")。建议统一时态,避免重复,并使用连接词使句子更流畅。

Ví dụ: Actually, I don't usually do puzzles when I am on a trip because I prefer to explore new places. However, if I feel bored at home, I like to do puzzles to entertain myself.

Do you like doing word puzzles or number puzzles? Which is more difficult for you?

Điểm: 60.0

Gợi ý: 回答中有语法错误("I'd like to some number puzzles"应为"I like some number puzzles"),重复词("play play"),表达不够清晰。建议注意语法准确性,避免重复,并更清楚地表达观点。

Ví dụ: I like number puzzles more. For example, I used to play a game called 3046. I find word puzzles more difficult because they are more flexible and require a broader vocabulary.

Do you think it is good for old people to do puzzles?

Điểm: 75.0

Gợi ý: 表达基本清晰,但有语法错误("it give"应为"it gives"),句子连接不够自然。建议注意主谓一致,使用连接词使句子更连贯。

Ví dụ: Yes, I think it is good for old people to do puzzles. It helps exercise their minds and improve their memory. Moreover, it provides a fun way to pass the time, which can reduce feelings of loneliness.

Ngữ pháp

Verb in the past participle form

× That's really excited me.

That really excites me.

这里使用了过去分词形式'excited',但句子需要表达现在的感受,应该用动词原形的第三人称单数形式'excites'。

Future tense issue

× Actually, I will not choose to do puzzles when I was on a trip because I want to explore, explore a new play place.

Actually, I will not choose to do puzzles when I am on a trip because I want to explore a new place to play.

句子中时间状语是将来时,'when I was'应改为'when I am'以保持时态一致。

Past tense issue

× But if I was at home feeling bored, I will do puzzles to entertain myself.

But if I am at home feeling bored, I will do puzzles to entertain myself.

条件句中表示将来的情况,主句用将来时,条件从句应使用一般现在时,故'if I was'应改为'if I am'。

Incorrect use of quantifiers

× I'd like to some number puzzles.

I'd like some number puzzles.

'like to some'结构不正确,'like'后面直接接名词短语,去掉'to'。

Past tense issue

× I used to play play a game named 3046 and I think a word puzzle is more difficult for me because it's really flexible.

I used to play a game named 3046 and I think a word puzzle is more difficult for me because it's really flexible.

句子中有重复的动词'play play',应去掉一个。

Incorrect use of pronouns

× And the most important thing I think is it give a fun way for them to pass the time that can really reduce the feeling of loneliness.

And the most important thing I think is it gives a fun way for them to pass the time that can really reduce the feeling of loneliness.

主语是第三人称单数'it',谓语动词应加's',改为'gives'。

Từ vựng trọng tâm

DifficultHard; Troublesome; Inconvenient
ExcitedThrilled; Aroused
ExcitingThrilling; Arousing
FunMerriment; Ridicule; Enjoyable; Playful; Tease
ImportantSignificant; Main; Powerful
NewRecently developed; Novel; Different; Additional; Reinvigorated
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