Part 1
Giám khảo
Did you do puzzles in your childhood?
Thí sinh
Yes, I usually do puzzles when I was a child. For example we played a world puzzle with my friends with which means we guess a word from other from others description which is very interesting.
Giám khảo
When do you do puzzles, during your trip or when you feel bored?
Thí sinh
Actually I do puzzles both during my trip or when I feel bored. For example when I was on a trip on a trip on on the train I I Washington I feel very bored so I play puzzle with the passengers next to me.
Giám khảo
Do you like doing word puzzles or number puzzles? Which is more difficult for you?
Thí sinh
Actually I like doing word puzzles because I think I'm very good at guessing word from others description or behavior and I think number of puzzles are more difficult than word puzzle because I'm not good at computing.
Giám khảo
Do you think it is good for old people to do puzzles?
Thí sinh
Yes, I think it's definitely very good for old people to do puzzles frequently because doing more puzzles can help old people practice their mind, their brain, which is very good for their their mental health.
Did you do puzzles in your childhood?
Điểm: 65.0Gợi ý: 回答时时态使用不准确,应该用过去时描述童年经历;句子结构较为混乱,表达不够清晰,建议简化句子并注意语法。
Ví dụ: Yes, I often did puzzles when I was a child. For example, my friends and I played a word puzzle where we guessed words based on others' descriptions, which was very interesting.
When do you do puzzles, during your trip or when you feel bored?
Điểm: 60.0Gợi ý: 回答中有重复和语法错误,表达不流畅,建议简化句子,避免重复,并注意时态和主谓一致。
Ví dụ: Actually, I do puzzles both during trips and when I feel bored. For example, once on a train to Washington, I felt bored, so I played puzzles with the passengers next to me.
Do you like doing word puzzles or number puzzles? Which is more difficult for you?
Điểm: 70.0Gợi ý: 回答内容较完整,但语法和表达有误,建议注意单复数形式和介词使用,使表达更准确。
Ví dụ: Actually, I like doing word puzzles because I am good at guessing words from others' descriptions or behavior. I find number puzzles more difficult because I am not good at calculations.
Do you think it is good for old people to do puzzles?
Điểm: 75.0Gợi ý: 回答表达较好,但有重复词汇,建议避免重复并使用更丰富的词汇,使表达更自然。
Ví dụ: Yes, I believe it is very beneficial for elderly people to do puzzles regularly because it helps exercise their brain and improves their mental health.
× Yes, I usually do puzzles when I was a child.
✓ Yes, I usually did puzzles when I was a child.
这里描述的是过去的习惯动作,应该使用过去时态'did',而不是现在时态'do'。
× For example we played a world puzzle with my friends with which means we guess a word from other from others description which is very interesting.
✓ For example, we played a word puzzle with my friends, which means we guess a word from others' descriptions, which is very interesting.
'world puzzle'应为'word puzzle','others description'应为'others' descriptions',表示复数所有格。
× Actually I do puzzles both during my trip or when I feel bored.
✓ Actually, I do puzzles both during my trips and when I feel bored.
'trip'应为复数形式'trips',且连接词应为'and'而非'or',以表达两种情况都做拼图。
× For example when I was on a trip on a trip on on the train I I Washington I feel very bored so I play puzzle with the passengers next to me.
✓ For example, when I was on a trip on the train to Washington, I felt very bored, so I played puzzles with the passengers next to me.
描述过去发生的事情,动词应使用过去时态,如'felt'和'played'。
× Actually I like doing word puzzles because I think I'm very good at guessing word from others description or behavior and I think number of puzzles are more difficult than word puzzle because I'm not good at computing.
✓ Actually, I like doing word puzzles because I think I'm very good at guessing words from others' descriptions or behavior, and I think number puzzles are more difficult than word puzzles because I'm not good at computing.
'guessing word'应为'guessing words','others description'应为'others' descriptions','number of puzzles'应为'number puzzles','word puzzle'应为'word puzzles',保持复数形式一致。
× Yes, I think it's definitely very good for old people to do puzzles frequently because doing more puzzles can help old people practice their mind, their brain, which is very good for their their mental health.
✓ Yes, I think it's definitely very good for old people to do puzzles frequently because doing more puzzles can help old people practice their minds, their brains, which is very good for their mental health.
'mind'和'brain'应使用复数形式'minds'和'brains',因为指的是多个人的心智和大脑。