Part 1
Giám khảo
Did you do puzzles in your childhood?
Thí sinh
Yes, one of my favorite games in my childhood is puzzles. My favorite puzzles is the puzzles of Elsa that is a Princess from Disney and the face and the costumes of her is print on the pursuits and I really love that puzzles.
Giám khảo
When do you do puzzles, during your trip or when you feel bored?
Thí sinh
I can do puzzle whenever I want but usually I do it when I feel bored because puzzle help me feel relaxed and also a very recreational with me so I will do it when I feel bored or in my free time. Now I'm not doing frequently but I still love it.
Giám khảo
Do you like doing word puzzles or number puzzles? Which is more difficult for you?
Thí sinh
I think both of them are suitable for me because word puzzles help me improve my vocabulary and also help me good at the communication skills. Number puzzles help me good at mathematics at school. So I think both of them have their it difficult.
Giám khảo
Do you think it is good for old people to do puzzles?
Thí sinh
Yes, I think it is very good for all people to do puzzles because it's good for their health care. Their health, especially their dementia is decrease because of the old age. So I think puzzles is one of the good way to improve their mind and memory.
Did you do puzzles in your childhood?
Điểm: 65.0Gợi ý: Câu trả lời của bạn cần rõ ràng và mạch lạc hơn, tránh lỗi ngữ pháp và sử dụng từ vựng chính xác. Bạn nên dùng câu chủ đề rõ ràng, sau đó bổ sung chi tiết cụ thể và liên kết hợp lý để câu trả lời tự nhiên hơn.
Ví dụ: Yes, I enjoyed doing puzzles a lot when I was a child. My favorite puzzle featured Elsa, a princess from Disney, with her face and costume printed on the pieces. I really loved assembling that puzzle because it was both fun and challenging.
When do you do puzzles, during your trip or when you feel bored?
Điểm: 70.0Gợi ý: Bạn nên sử dụng câu ngắn gọn, tránh lặp từ và lỗi ngữ pháp. Hãy dùng các từ nối để câu trả lời mạch lạc hơn và cung cấp chi tiết cụ thể về thời gian và cảm xúc khi làm puzzle.
Ví dụ: I usually do puzzles when I feel bored because they help me relax and entertain myself. Although I don't do them as often now, I still enjoy this hobby during my free time.
Do you like doing word puzzles or number puzzles? Which is more difficult for you?
Điểm: 60.0Gợi ý: Câu trả lời cần rõ ràng hơn và tránh lỗi ngữ pháp. Bạn nên so sánh hai loại puzzle một cách cụ thể và dùng từ vựng phù hợp để thể hiện ý kiến cá nhân rõ ràng.
Ví dụ: I enjoy both word and number puzzles because word puzzles improve my vocabulary and communication skills, while number puzzles help me with mathematics. However, I find number puzzles a bit more challenging than word puzzles.
Do you think it is good for old people to do puzzles?
Điểm: 65.0Gợi ý: Bạn nên diễn đạt ý tưởng rõ ràng hơn và tránh lỗi ngữ pháp. Hãy dùng các từ nối để câu trả lời mạch lạc và cung cấp lý do cụ thể vì sao puzzles tốt cho người già.
Ví dụ: Yes, I believe puzzles are beneficial for elderly people because they help maintain mental health. Doing puzzles can improve memory and reduce the risk of dementia, which is common in old age.
× Yes, one of my favorite games in my childhood is puzzles.
✓ Yes, one of my favorite games in my childhood was puzzles.
The sentence refers to a past time ('in my childhood'), so the verb should be in the past tense 'was' instead of 'is'. This is a tense agreement issue rather than singular/plural, but since the problem type list does not include tense agreement explicitly, this correction fits best here.
× My favorite puzzles is the puzzles of Elsa that is a Princess from Disney and the face and the costumes of her is print on the pursuits and I really love that puzzles.
✓ My favorite puzzles are the puzzles of Elsa, who is a princess from Disney, and her face and costumes are printed on the puzzles, and I really love those puzzles.
The subject 'puzzles' is plural, so the verb should be 'are' instead of 'is'. Also, 'princess' should not be capitalized unless it is a title before a name. 'Her face and costumes are printed' is the correct passive form. 'Pursuits' is a wrong word here; it should be 'puzzles'. 'That puzzles' should be 'those puzzles' to refer to plural items.
× I can do puzzle whenever I want but usually I do it when I feel bored because puzzle help me feel relaxed and also a very recreational with me so I will do it when I feel bored or in my free time.
✓ I can do puzzles whenever I want, but usually I do it when I feel bored because puzzles help me feel relaxed and are also very recreational for me, so I do it when I feel bored or in my free time.
'Puzzle' should be plural 'puzzles' to match the context. 'Help' should be 'help' because 'puzzles' is plural. 'A very recreational with me' is incorrect; it should be 'are very recreational for me'. 'Will do' is changed to 'do' to indicate habitual action.
× Now I'm not doing frequently but I still love it.
✓ Now I don't do it frequently, but I still love it.
The phrase 'I'm not doing frequently' is incorrect; the correct form is 'I don't do it frequently' to express habitual action in the present tense.
× Number puzzles help me good at mathematics at school.
✓ Number puzzles help me be good at mathematics at school.
The verb 'help' is followed by the base form of the verb, so 'help me good' is incorrect. It should be 'help me be good'.
× So I think both of them have their it difficult.
✓ So I think both of them are difficult.
The phrase 'have their it difficult' is incorrect and ungrammatical. The correct expression is 'are difficult' to describe both puzzles.
× So I think puzzles is one of the good way to improve their mind and memory.
✓ So I think puzzles are one of the good ways to improve their minds and memory.
'Puzzles' is plural, so the verb should be 'are' instead of 'is'. 'One of the good way' should be 'one of the good ways' because 'one of' is followed by a plural noun. 'Mind' should be plural 'minds' to match 'their'.