Puzzles— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: 回答中存在语法错误和表达不自然的问题，建议简化句子结构，避免冗长且不连贯的表达，同时注意冠词和单复数的正确使用。

Ví dụ: Yes, I did. My father bought a computer game that included puzzles. The advertisement said it could help children improve their intelligence, and I believe it did.

Gợi ý: 回答时时态使用不当，句子结构混乱，建议使用正确时态，简洁表达观点，并用连接词使句子更连贯。

Ví dụ: I prefer to do puzzles when I feel bored because they help me focus. Also, doing puzzles with friends can be enjoyable and improve our skills.

Gợi ý: 回答内容不够具体且表达不清晰，建议明确表达喜好和原因，避免语法错误，并用连接词使逻辑更清楚。

Ví dụ: I prefer number puzzles because they help me understand problems logically and find root causes. Also, many scientists specialize in mathematics, which I find interesting.

Gợi ý: 回答中有口语填充词，语法不完整，建议避免使用口语填充词，句子要完整且表达清晰。

Ví dụ: Definitely. I always encourage my grandma to do puzzles daily because they can help prevent serious illnesses and exercise the brain.

× Of course, I remember the my father bought a computer games which have the puzzles in it and the advertisement shows that it can help the child to improve the intelligence and I think it also can.

✓ Of course, I remember my father bought a computer game which has puzzles in it, and the advertisement shows that it can help children improve their intelligence, and I think it can too.

句中“the my father”中“the”多余，应去掉；“computer games”应为单数“computer game”，因为指的是一款游戏；“which have”应改为“which has”，主语是单数“game”，动词需用第三人称单数；“the child”应改为复数“children”，表示一般意义；“improve the intelligence”应改为“improve their intelligence”，更自然；“I think it also can”语序不正确，应为“I think it can too”。

× I prefer to do puzzles when I was bored because I think the puzzles can help me to focus on the things and it also a good way to have the pleasure for something and together with your friend is also a good way to improve.

✓ I prefer to do puzzles when I am bored because I think puzzles can help me focus on things, and it is also a good way to enjoy something; doing it together with your friends is also a good way to improve.

句中“when I was bored”时态不符，因表达习惯用现在时“when I am bored”；“the puzzles”中“the”多余，改为复数“puzzles”；“help me to focus on the things”中“the things”应去掉冠词，改为“focus on things”；“it also a good way”缺少动词，应为“it is also a good way”；“have the pleasure for something”表达不自然，改为“enjoy something”；“together with your friend is also a good way to improve”结构不完整，改为“doing it together with your friends is also a good way to improve”。

× Well, I prefer the number puzzles because I think the number can help me to understand the whole things, even the root cause and logical of them. And besides some of the scientists are majoring mathematics.

✓ Well, I prefer number puzzles because I think numbers can help me understand the whole picture, even the root causes and logic behind them. Besides, some scientists major in mathematics.

“prefer the number puzzles”中“the”多余，应去掉；“the number can help me to understand the whole things”中“the number”应为复数“numbers”，“the whole things”表达不自然，改为“the whole picture”；“even the root cause and logical of them”表达错误，应为“even the root causes and logic behind them”；“some of the scientists are majoring mathematics”表达不正确，改为“some scientists major in mathematics”。

× Definitely, I always encourage my uh, grandma to do some puzzles in her daily life because I think it can help the old people to avoid, uh, the serious illness and also can exercise their brain to.

✓ Definitely, I always encourage my grandma to do some puzzles in her daily life because I think it can help old people avoid serious illnesses and also exercise their brains.

“help the old people to avoid”中“the”多余，应去掉；“avoid, uh, the serious illness”应为复数“serious illnesses”；“also can exercise their brain to”语序错误且“to”多余，应为“also exercise their brains”；“grandma”前的“uh”应去掉以保持正式。