Puzzles— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: 回答は質問に直接答えていますが、内容が曖昧で具体性に欠けています。また、文法的な誤りもあります。より自然で具体的な表現を心がけ、詳細を加えると良いでしょう。

Ví dụ: Yes, I used to enjoy doing puzzles quite often when I was a child, especially jigsaw puzzles with my family during weekends.

Gợi ý: 文法ミス（"It's allows"）があり、表現が不自然です。回答は質問に答えていますが、より流暢で自然な表現を使い、理由や具体例を加えると良いでしょう。

Ví dụ: I usually do puzzles when I feel bored because they help me relax and pass the time, especially digital puzzles on my phone.

Gợi ý: 文法的に不正確で意味が伝わりにくい部分があります。比較の表現も改善が必要です。より明確で正確な文法を使い、理由を具体的に説明しましょう。

Ví dụ: I prefer number puzzles to word puzzles because I find numbers more logical, while word puzzles can be confusing if I don't know the vocabulary.

Gợi ý: "memorable skills"は不自然な表現です。また、"other people"の使い方も適切ではありません。より自然な表現を使い、具体的な効果を説明すると良いでしょう。

Ví dụ: Yes, I believe that doing jigsaw puzzles helps elderly people improve their memory and keeps their minds active and engaged.

× I sometimes did puzzles when I was a kid, but I can't remember some details of memory.

✓ I sometimes did puzzles when I was a kid, but I can't remember some details of them.

The phrase 'details of memory' is incorrect because 'memory' is uncountable and does not fit here. The correct phrase is 'details of them' referring to the puzzles. This is not a tense issue but a phrase usage issue; however, since it relates to the past tense context, it is categorized here for correction.

× It's allows me to spend a lot of time to complete them.

✓ It allows me to spend a lot of time completing them.

The auxiliary 'It's' (it is) followed by 'allows' is incorrect. The correct form is 'It allows' without contraction. Also, 'to spend a lot of time to complete them' is better expressed as 'to spend a lot of time completing them' because 'spend time' is followed by a gerund (-ing form).

× I prefer number puzzles rather than word puzzles because if I don't know the answers was I can't complete them.

✓ I prefer number puzzles rather than word puzzles because if I don't know the answers, I can't complete them.

The phrase 'answers was' is incorrect; 'was' is a past tense verb that does not agree with the plural noun 'answers'. The correct sentence removes 'was' to maintain present tense and subject-verb agreement.

× Yes, I'm convinced that doing jigsaw puzzles allows other people to develop their memorable skills and makes them lively.

✓ Yes, I'm convinced that doing jigsaw puzzles allows other people to develop their memory skills and makes them lively.

The phrase 'memorable skills' is incorrect; the intended meaning is likely 'memory skills'. 'Memorable' is an adjective meaning 'worth remembering', but here the noun 'memory' is appropriate. This is a misuse of adjectives/pronouns; corrected to 'memory skills'.