Puzzles— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Your answer is generally clear and relevant, but it contains some grammatical errors and awkward phrasing. Try to use plural forms correctly (e.g., 'puzzles' instead of 'puzzle') and improve sentence structure for naturalness. Also, avoid redundancy and keep sentences concise.

Ví dụ: Yes, puzzles were one of my favorite games when I was a child. They helped me relax and also taught me problem-solving skills. My favorite was a Mickey Mouse puzzle that my sister gifted me, and I have kept it ever since.

Gợi ý: Your answer is somewhat repetitive and contains grammatical mistakes. Use correct verb forms ('feel bored' instead of 'feel bore') and avoid redundancy. Also, try to use linking words to connect ideas smoothly and provide more specific details.

Ví dụ: I usually do puzzles when I feel bored because they are a great way to learn new things and pass the time. For example, when I was a kid, I spent most of my free time solving puzzles.

Gợi ý: Your answer is relevant but a bit brief and lacks linking words. Also, use plural forms correctly ('puzzles' instead of 'puzzle'). Try to expand your answer by explaining why number puzzles are easier or more enjoyable for you, and use linking words to improve coherence.

Ví dụ: I prefer number puzzles because I enjoy working with numbers. Since I am a commerce student, I find number puzzles more interesting and less difficult than word puzzles.

Gợi ý: Your answer has several grammatical errors and awkward phrasing. Use plural forms correctly ('puzzles' instead of 'puzzle'), avoid repetition ('greatest way way'), and improve sentence structure. Also, clarify your ideas and use linking words to make your answer more coherent and natural.

Ví dụ: Yes, I believe puzzles are a great way for older people to relax their minds and spend leisure time. Since some elderly people may not go outside due to illness, puzzles can help them stay mentally active and entertained at home.

× Yes, puzzle was one of my favorite games when I was a kid.

✓ Yes, puzzles were one of my favorite games when I was a kid.

The word 'puzzle' should be plural 'puzzles' because it refers to multiple games. Also, 'was' should be 'were' to agree with the plural subject.

× It helps me to relax and as well as I learned problem solving skill from this.

✓ They helped me to relax and also helped me learn problem-solving skills.

The sentence mixes present and past tense incorrectly. Since the context is childhood, past tense 'helped' is appropriate. 'Problem solving skill' should be plural and hyphenated as 'problem-solving skills'. 'As well as' is better replaced with 'also' for clarity.

× My favorite puzzle was of Mickey Mouse.

✓ My favorite puzzle was a Mickey Mouse puzzle.

The phrase 'was of Mickey Mouse' is awkward. It is clearer to say 'was a Mickey Mouse puzzle'.

× Since then I have this puzzle with me.

✓ Since then, I have had this puzzle with me.

The present perfect tense 'have had' is needed to indicate possession from past until now.

× I usually do puzzle when I feel bore.

✓ I usually do puzzles when I feel bored.

'Puzzle' should be plural 'puzzles' because it refers to the activity in general. 'Bore' is incorrect; the correct adjective is 'bored'.

× It's because puzzles are the greatest way to learn something as well as passing time.

✓ It's because puzzles are a great way to learn something as well as pass the time.

'Greatest' is a superlative and may be too strong here; 'a great way' is more natural. 'Passing time' should be 'pass the time' to match the verb form.

× That's why I pass my most of the time by doing puzzle when I was kid.

✓ That's why I spent most of my time doing puzzles when I was a kid.

The sentence refers to past time, so 'pass' should be 'spent'. 'My most of the time' is incorrect; 'most of my time' is correct. 'Doing puzzle' should be 'doing puzzles'. Also, 'a kid' needs the article 'a'.

× I'm fond of numbers, hence I love to do puzzle with numbers.

✓ I'm fond of numbers; hence, I love to do puzzles with numbers.

'Puzzle' should be plural 'puzzles' to refer to the activity generally. Also, punctuation improved for clarity.

× Actually I am a commerce student that's why I like numbers.

✓ Actually, I am a commerce student, so that's why I like numbers.

The sentence is a run-on; adding a comma and conjunction 'so' improves clarity and sentence structure.

× Yes, I personally believe that puzzle are greatest way way to relax mind for older people, they can easily spend their leisure time by playing puzzle.

✓ Yes, I personally believe that puzzles are a great way to relax the mind for older people; they can easily spend their leisure time by playing puzzles.

'Puzzle' should be plural 'puzzles'. 'Greatest way way' is a repetition and should be 'a great way'. 'Relax mind' needs the article 'the mind'. 'Playing puzzle' should be 'playing puzzles'. The sentence is long and benefits from a semicolon.

× It's because some old people do not go outside the home because of their illness.

✓ It's because some older people do not go outside the home because of their illness.

'Old people' is better expressed as 'older people' in this context for politeness and correctness.

× That's why I feel that puzzle can easily spend their lesser time.

✓ That's why I feel that puzzles can easily help them spend their leisure time.

'Puzzle' should be plural 'puzzles'. 'Spend their lesser time' is incorrect; the correct phrase is 'help them spend their leisure time'.