Part 1
Giám khảo
Did you do puzzles in your childhood?
Thí sinh
No, I don't play the piano in my childhood. Uh, actually, I don't remember the the things.
Giám khảo
When do you do puzzles, during your trip or when you feel bored?
Thí sinh
MMM I didn't do some puzzles when during my trip and I feeling bored. I will play my smartphones to watch the social media and I will take photos with my friends.
Giám khảo
Do you like doing word puzzles or number puzzles? Which is more difficult for you?
Thí sinh
Maybe uh, Lumpur puzzles, I think it is some. It is difficult for me sometimes or in the free time I don't like play puzzles. I prefer play the smart phones, maybe the social media or the smart phones for games.
Giám khảo
Do you think it is good for old people to do puzzles?
Thí sinh
Yes, I think it's very good for all peoples because they usually be the the Alzheimer's, Alzheimer's. So I think they need to play the intelligence games.
Did you do puzzles in your childhood?
Điểm: 38.0Gợi ý: 回答需要直接回应问题并保持时态一致。先用一两句明确说明是否做过拼图,然后补充具体细节(何时、和谁、印象深刻的类型等)。避免提到与问题无关的内容(如‘play the piano’)。句子控制在五句内,注意语法和冠词使用。
Ví dụ: No, I didn't do puzzles when I was a child. I mostly played outdoors with friends, so I didn't spend much time on puzzles. Occasionally my cousin would bring a jigsaw, but I can't remember doing them often.
When do you do puzzles, during your trip or when you feel bored?
Điểm: 45.0Gợi ý: 回答要先直接说明通常什么时候做拼图(或不做),然后给出具体替代活动和原因。使用正确时态(习惯用一般现在时),并用连词(for example, so, because)连接原因和举例。避免语法错误和冗余。
Ví dụ: I usually don't do puzzles either on trips or when I'm bored. Instead, I browse social media on my smartphone or take photos with friends because those activities are more social and convenient.
Do you like doing word puzzles or number puzzles? Which is more difficult for you?
Điểm: 40.0Gợi ý: 先表明偏好(词谜或数字谜),然后解释哪种更难并给出原因。用具体例子说明困难点(例如逻辑推理或词汇量不足)。保持句子简短并使用连接词(but, because, so)。避免重复和不清晰的词语。
Ví dụ: I prefer word puzzles to number puzzles because I enjoy language games more. Number puzzles are harder for me because they require stronger logical skills and concentration, whereas word puzzles feel more familiar.
Do you think it is good for old people to do puzzles?
Điểm: 60.0Gợi ý: 回答要先给出肯定或否定立场,然后说明具体好处并用原因支持。注意用词准确(不宜断言所有老人都会得阿尔茨海默氏症),可以说‘help prevent cognitive decline’等更自然的表述。使用一到两条具体例子或研究支持观点。
Ví dụ: Yes, I think puzzles are very beneficial for older people because they help maintain cognitive function and slow down memory decline. For example, regular crossword or Sudoku practice can keep the mind active and improve attention and problem-solving skills.
× No, I don't play the piano in my childhood. Uh, actually, I don't remember the the things.
✓ No, I didn't play the piano in my childhood. Actually, I don't remember those things.
错误类型:现在时使用不当(应使用过去时),以及代词和重复词错误。说明:提到过去的童年经历时应使用过去时态(didn't play),而不是现在时(don't play)。“the the”是重复词,应删除;“the things”不自然,应改为“those things”或“the things”视语境,但此处用those更恰当。建议:回忆过去时使用过去式,注意不要重复单词,并用恰当的指示代词(those)。
× When do you do puzzles, during your trip or when you feel bored?
✓ When do you do puzzles — during trips or when you feel bored?
错误类型:现在时态使用问题主要在搭配上。说明:原句中的“during your trip”听起来像指特定一次旅行,用复数或一般情况更自然(during trips);另外用破折或逗号分隔选项更清晰。建议:表一般习惯时用复数(during trips),并将句子结构整理清楚。
× MMM I didn't do some puzzles when during my trip and I feeling bored. I will play my smartphones to watch the social media and I will take photos with my friends.
✓ Well, I didn't do many puzzles during my trips, and when I felt bored I would use my smartphone to check social media and take photos with my friends.
错误类型:过去时和动词形式错误、介词/冠词搭配问题。说明:谈过去习惯应使用过去时(didn't do、felt),“didn't do some puzzles”用法不当,改为didn't do many puzzles或didn't do puzzles。删除多余的when或调整位置。“I feeling bored”缺少助动词,应为I felt bored。在叙述过去常做的事情时,使用would或used to更自然。“play my smartphones”用词错误,应为use my smartphone或play games on my smartphone;“the social media”应为social media(不加定冠词)。建议:使用正确的过去时形式,注意可数名词的修饰词(many/any),动词形式要完整(felt),以及使用正确的动词搭配(use a smartphone, check social media)。
× Maybe uh, Lumpur puzzles, I think it is some. It is difficult for me sometimes or in the free time I don't like play puzzles. I prefer play the smart phones, maybe the social media or the smart phones for games.
✓ Maybe word puzzles — I think they're sometimes difficult for me. In my free time I don't like to play puzzles. I prefer using my smartphone for social media or games.
错误类型:形容词/副词和词类使用不当、动词不定式/动名词搭配错误。说明:原句“Lumpur puzzles”不明,推测为“word puzzles”。“I think it is some”无意义,改为they're sometimes difficult。动词搭配“don't like play”缺少不定式to或动名词,改为don't like to play或don't like playing。“prefer play the smart phones”应为prefer using my smartphone 或 prefer to play games on my smartphone。注意冠词和词序。建议:辨别名词类别并使用正确短语(word puzzles),用不定式或动名词与like/prefer搭配,并用use/playing等合适动词短语。
× Yes, I think it's very good for all peoples because they usually be the the Alzheimer's, Alzheimer's. So I think they need to play the intelligence games.
✓ Yes, I think it's very good for all people because they are often affected by Alzheimer's. So I think they need to play brain-training games.
错误类型:冠词与复数名词使用错误,连词和动词结构问题。说明:英语中“people”不可数复数,不用peoples;“they usually be the the Alzheimer's”结构错误,应为they are often affected by Alzheimer's或they often have Alzheimer's。重复“the the”应删除。“intelligence games”不地道,应改为brain-training games或intelligence-building games。建议:使用正确的名词复数(people),用be动词加过去分词或have表状态(are affected by / have Alzheimer's),避免重复词,并选择地道表达(brain-training games)。