Part 1
Giám khảo
Did you do puzzles in your childhood?
Thí sinh
I didn't do some umm, puzzle in my childhood because, uh, in the past I always play the Out Games store other outdoors game with my friends.
Giám khảo
When do you do puzzles, during your trip or when you feel bored?
Thí sinh
I seldom do puzzles in all in my trip or I feel bored sometimes. I often place my smartphones for some for scams or play the social media with my friends.
Giám khảo
Do you like doing word puzzles or number puzzles? Which is more difficult for you?
Thí sinh
Actually I don't like play puzzles any other word puzzle or or other puzzles. I often play my smartphones. I think puzzle is so difficult for me.
Giám khảo
Do you think it is good for old people to do puzzles?
Thí sinh
I think it's a good way to the old older people because they're convenient in the reduced and it's very good for them to place the puzzles with neither old people.
Did you do puzzles in your childhood?
Điểm: 38.0Gợi ý: 回答不够清晰且有语法错误,语句冗余并且缺少主题句的流畅表达。建议:1) 直接用一句话回答问题(肯定或否定);2) 用1–2句具体说明原因或举例;3) 注意时态和单复数(did/didn't + base verb);4) 尽量避免填充词(umm, uh)。例如可以说“我小时候没有玩拼图,我更喜欢和朋友在户外玩游戏,比如踢球和捉迷藏。”
Ví dụ: No, I didn’t do puzzles in my childhood. I preferred outdoor games with my friends, such as playing football and hide-and-seek after school.
When do you do puzzles, during your trip or when you feel bored?
Điểm: 34.0Gợi ý: 回答含糊且表达不准确,存在词汇误用(place my smartphones, scams)和语法错误。建议:1) 直接回答频率(often/seldom/never);2) 用一到两个具体场景说明什么时候做或不做;3) 用正确动词短语(use my smartphone, play games, browse social media);4) 保持句子简短且连贯。比如可以说“我很少做拼图,旅行时或无聊时也很少,通常用手机刷社交媒体或玩游戏。”
Ví dụ: I rarely do puzzles, either on trips or when I’m bored. Usually I use my smartphone to browse social media or play simple games with friends.
Do you like doing word puzzles or number puzzles? Which is more difficult for you?
Điểm: 30.0Gợi ý: 回答重复且语法错误较多,缺少比较和细节支持。建议:1) 直接表明喜欢或不喜欢,并比较两者难度;2) 给出具体原因(例如词汇量、逻辑性);3) 避免重复短语并使用正确结构(don’t like doing…; find X more difficult because…)。例如说明“我不喜欢做拼图,尤其是数独因为需要逻辑推理。”
Ví dụ: I don’t really like doing puzzles. If I had to choose, number puzzles are more difficult for me because they require logical thinking and concentration, whereas word puzzles seem easier.
Do you think it is good for old people to do puzzles?
Điểm: 40.0Gợi ý: 回答含义不够明确,词汇和句子结构错误(convenient in the reduced, place the puzzles)。建议:1) 开门见山给出观点(yes/no and why);2) 用具体好处支撑观点(保持头脑活跃、社交、手眼协调);3) 用清晰的连接词(because, for example);4) 保持一句主句加一两句理由的结构。比如说“我认为对老年人有益,因为可以锻炼记忆并促进社交。”
Ví dụ: Yes, I think puzzles are good for older people because they help keep the mind active and improve memory. Also, doing puzzles with others can be a social activity that reduces loneliness.
× I didn't do some umm, puzzle in my childhood because, uh, in the past I always play the Out Games store other outdoors game with my friends.
✓ I didn't do any puzzles in my childhood because, in the past I always played outdoor games with my friends.
问题类型:主谓一致 & 其他(数量词与名词单复数、时态、词序)。解释:原句中“didn't do some ... puzzle”与否定句应使用“any”且“puzzle”需用复数;主句时态为过去(didn't),后半句应使用过去式“played”而不是现在式“play”;“Out Games store other outdoors game”是词序和用词错误,改为“played outdoor games”。建议:在否定句中用any;注意名词单复数一致;句子时态一致使用过去式;使用常见词组“play/played outdoor games”。
× I seldom do puzzles in all in my trip or I feel bored sometimes.
✓ I seldom do puzzles on my trips, but sometimes I do them when I feel bored.
问题类型:现在时使用与句子衔接不当、词序与介词错误。解释:原句“in all in my trip”不自然,应该用复数“trips”并用介词“on”。另外两个分句之间需要连接词“but”或“sometimes”放在从句中,澄清时间和频率关系;代词“them”可替代前面的“puzzles”。建议:使用常见搭配“on my trips”,“seldom”放在动词前,必要时用连接词改善句子流畅性。
× I often place my smartphones for some for scams or play the social media with my friends.
✓ I often use my smartphone to browse social media or do things like that with my friends.
问题类型:介词和动词使用错误。解释:原句“place my smartphones for some for scams”语义和介词都不对,应用动词“use”而不是“place”;“smartphones”一般可用单数“my smartphone”或“my smartphones”视语境;“play the social media”应为“browse social media”或“use social media”。建议:用动词“use”和常见搭配“browse/use social media”;注意不用“play”搭配社交媒体。
× Actually I don't like play puzzles any other word puzzle or or other puzzles.
✓ Actually I don't like playing puzzles, whether word puzzles or other kinds of puzzles.
问题类型:代词/形式及动名词使用错误。解释:在“don't like”后面应接动名词“playing”,而不是不定式或原形“play”;“any other word puzzle or or other puzzles”重复且结构混乱,应改为“whether ... or ...”来列举两类谜题。建议:记住“like”后接动名词;用“whether ... or ...”或并列短语列举项目。
× I often play my smartphones.
✓ I often play on my smartphone.
问题类型:第三人称单数使用(及动词搭配)/用词不当。解释:句子主语为第一人称“I”,但动词“play my smartphones”是错误搭配。更自然的表达是“play on my smartphone”或“use my smartphone”。建议:使用正确介词“on”或用动词“use/browse”替代“play”来表示使用手机。
× I think puzzle is so difficult for me.
✓ I think puzzles are too difficult for me.
问题类型:单复数与主谓一致。解释:“puzzle”应使用复数“puzzles”或在单数前加不定冠词“a”,且与形容词连用时主语复数需用“are”;此外“so difficult”在正式表达中常改为“too difficult”。建议:根据需要使用复数形式或加冠词;注意主谓一致和程度副词用法。
× I think it's a good way to the old older people because they're convenient in the reduced and it's very good for them to place the puzzles with neither old people.
✓ I think it's a good activity for older people because it's convenient and very good for them to do puzzles.
问题类型:代词与词序及用词错误。解释:原句“a good way to the old older people”应为“a good activity for older people”;“they're convenient in the reduced”无意义,可能想表达“it's convenient”或“it reduces something”;“place the puzzles with neither old people”完全不通,应改为“to do puzzles”。建议:使用固定搭配“a good activity for older people”,“convenient for them”,“do puzzles”;保持句子简洁明确,避免重复和无意义短语。