Jewelry— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Try to make your answer more natural and structured. Start with a clear topic sentence, then add specific details using linking words. Avoid repeating the same idea twice.

Ví dụ: Yes, I often wear jewelry, especially on special occasions like weddings and festivals. For example, I usually choose simple earrings or a necklace to complement my outfit.

Gợi ý: Improve sentence structure and use more natural expressions. Use linking words to connect your ideas and be specific about why you prefer silver jewelry.

Ví dụ: I prefer silver jewelry over gold and diamonds because it is more affordable and suits my style better. Moreover, silver matches well with most of my clothes.

Gợi ý: Your answer is unclear and incomplete. Try to form complete sentences and explain your ideas clearly with linking words. Also, avoid redundancy and be specific about when and why you buy jewelry.

Ví dụ: I don't usually buy jewelry, but during special occasions and festivals, I like to purchase some pieces. I believe buying jewelry is a good investment and adds to my collection.

Gợi ý: Make your answer more coherent by using linking words and clearer explanations. Provide specific reasons and examples to support your opinion.

Ví dụ: I think some people wear jewelry for a long time because it holds sentimental value or represents their passion. Additionally, wearing certain pieces can be a way to promote and preserve their cultural heritage.

× I like the silver jewelry instead of gold and diamond because it is very affordable and it suits on me.

✓ I like silver jewelry instead of gold and diamond because it is very affordable and it suits me.

The preposition 'on' is incorrectly used with 'suits'. The correct phrase is 'it suits me' without 'on'. Also, 'the' before 'silver jewelry' is unnecessary here as we are talking about jewelry in general.

× No, but on different occasions, an festival, I usually like to buy jewelry.

✓ No, but on different occasions and festivals, I usually like to buy jewelry.

The preposition 'an' is incorrect here; it should be 'and' to connect 'occasions' and 'festivals'. Also, 'festival' should be plural to match 'occasions'.

× Since it is. Go to buy jewelry and it is best investment.

✓ Since it is a good investment, I go to buy jewelry.

The original sentence is fragmented and lacks clarity. It needs to be combined into a complete sentence with proper subject and verb. 'It is best investment' requires an article 'a' before 'best investment' and the sentence should be restructured for clarity.

× Becauses that is their own thinking and that is their own passion.

✓ Because that is their own thinking and their own passion.

The word 'Becauses' is incorrect; it should be 'Because'. Also, the repetition of 'that is' is unnecessary and can be omitted for smoother sentence flow.

× That's why they like to wear jewelry and there they also promote their culture sometimes.

✓ That's why they like to wear jewelry and sometimes they also promote their culture there.

The adverb 'sometimes' is better placed before 'they also promote' for natural English word order. Also, 'there' should be placed at the end to indicate location properly.