Jewelry— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Your answer is somewhat clear but contains grammatical errors and some unclear phrases like 'It is very patient to me.' Try to use correct expressions and avoid redundancy. Also, keep your answer concise and coherent by using linking words.

Ví dụ: I don't wear jewelry very often, but I always wear a pair of earrings gifted by my mom. They have red diamond butterflies set in gold, which makes them very special to me. I really love wearing them because they remind me of her.

Gợi ý: Your answer has some grammatical mistakes and repetitive phrases like 'I'm really fond' twice. Use singular/plural forms correctly and avoid redundancy. Also, use linking words to connect your ideas smoothly.

Ví dụ: Honestly, I like all kinds of jewelry, but I usually prefer delicate pieces. For example, I love gold and platinum jewelry because they look elegant and precious. I often wear a small necklace, which suits my style well.

Gợi ý: Your answer is incomplete and has grammatical errors like 'jewelries' instead of 'jewelry' and awkward phrasing. Try to complete your thoughts clearly and use correct vocabulary. Avoid repetition and be concise.

Ví dụ: It depends on what I want to buy. I usually don't buy original gold, platinum, or silver jewelry because they are expensive. However, I often buy imitation jewelry as it is more affordable.

Gợi ý: Your answer is understandable but a bit repetitive and has awkward phrasing like 'it is a compulsion to get a jewellery.' Try to use clearer expressions and linking words to make your answer more coherent and natural.

Ví dụ: I think people wear jewelry for a long time because it holds special meaning, such as being a gift from someone important. Also, some people are very fond of certain pieces, so they keep wearing them for years.

× I always wear a piece of earrings in my ears which was gifted by my mom.

✓ I always wear a pair of earrings in my ears which was gifted by my mom.

The phrase 'a piece of earrings' is incorrect because 'earrings' is plural and usually referred to as a 'pair' rather than a 'piece'. Using 'a pair of earrings' is the correct singular expression for two earrings worn together.

× It is very patient to me.

✓ It is very precious to me.

The adjective 'patient' is incorrectly used here. 'Patient' describes a person who can wait calmly, not an object. The intended meaning is likely 'precious', which means valuable or dear, appropriate for jewelry.

× It has a butterfly of red diamonds with gold earrings.

✓ It has a butterfly made of red diamonds on gold earrings.

The preposition 'of' is incorrectly used after 'butterfly'. The correct phrase is 'made of' to indicate composition. Also, 'on gold earrings' clarifies the location of the butterfly design.

× I'm very fond of all kind of jewelries, but I usually prefer delicate ones.

✓ I'm very fond of all kinds of jewelry, but I usually prefer delicate ones.

'All kind' should be pluralized to 'all kinds' to agree with the plural noun. Also, 'jewelry' is an uncountable noun and does not have a plural form; 'jewelries' is incorrect.

× I'm really fond of gold and platinum jewelries.

✓ I'm really fond of gold and platinum jewelry.

'Jewelry' is an uncountable noun and does not have a plural form. Using 'jewelries' is incorrect.

× It really looks decent and very precious.

✓ They really look decent and very precious.

'Jewelry' is uncountable but here the subject refers to multiple items (delicate ones), so plural verb 'look' is appropriate instead of singular 'looks'.

× I am really loving it.

✓ I really love it.

'Love' is a stative verb and is not usually used in the continuous form. The simple present tense 'I really love it' is correct.

× I've always wore a small necklace.

✓ I've always worn a small necklace.

The past participle of 'wear' is 'worn', not 'wore'. After 'have' or 'has', the past participle form is required.

× I usually do not buy original gold, platinum or silver jewelries often because it really costs much and they are very expensive.

✓ I usually do not buy original gold, platinum or silver jewelry often because it really costs much and they are very expensive.

'Jewelry' is an uncountable noun and does not have a plural form. Using 'jewelries' is incorrect.

× But yes I re repeatedly bought some imitated jewelries.

✓ But yes, I have repeatedly bought some imitation jewelry.

The phrase 're repeatedly' seems to be a typo and should be 'have repeatedly'. Also, 'imitated jewelries' is incorrect; 'imitation jewelry' is the correct term. 'Imitation' is an adjective describing fake or copied jewelry.

× I am really.

✓ I am really fond of them.

The sentence 'I am really.' is incomplete and lacks an object or complement. It should be completed to convey the intended meaning.

× Well, according to me, people usually wear jewelry for a long period of time if it is very special to them or if it is gifted by someone special or if a person is really fond of it or sometimes it is a compulsion to get a jewellery.

✓ Well, according to me, people usually wear jewelry for a long period of time if it is very special to them or if it is gifted by someone special or if a person is really fond of it or sometimes it is a compulsion to get jewelry.

'Jewelry' is an uncountable noun and does not take the article 'a'. Using 'a jewellery' is incorrect.