Jewelry— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Câu trả lời của bạn cần tự nhiên hơn và tránh lặp từ. Hãy sử dụng câu ngắn gọn, rõ ràng và đúng ngữ pháp. Ví dụ, tránh nói "stick to me everyday" mà nên nói "I wear them every day". Ngoài ra, hãy chú ý đến thì và cấu trúc câu để câu trả lời mạch lạc hơn.

Ví dụ: Yes, I often wear jewelry every day. My favorite pieces are earrings and a bracelet because they make me feel more confident and fashionable.

Gợi ý: Bạn nên sử dụng từ vựng chính xác và tránh lỗi phát âm hoặc từ sai nghĩa như "germs" (vi khuẩn) thay vì "gems" (đá quý). Câu trả lời cần rõ ràng, có cấu trúc và sử dụng liên từ để nối ý. Hãy mô tả cụ thể hơn về loại trang sức bạn thích và lý do.

Ví dụ: I like earrings that have many gems, especially diamonds. I find shiny jewelry very elegant, and it helps the wearer feel confident and attractive.

Gợi ý: Bạn cần nói rõ ràng và tránh lặp từ như "in in in". Ngoài ra, hãy sử dụng từ đúng như "jewelry" thay vì "jury". Câu trả lời nên có cấu trúc rõ ràng, sử dụng liên từ để nối ý và giải thích lý do mua trang sức.

Ví dụ: I enjoy wearing jewelry, so I usually buy it online, but sometimes I visit stores to try them on. Wearing sparkling jewelry makes me feel more comfortable in social situations because it looks elegant.

Gợi ý: Câu trả lời cần rõ ràng và mạch lạc hơn. Tránh dùng từ không chính xác như "love lover" (nên là "loved ones"). Hãy sử dụng liên từ để nối các ý và giải thích cụ thể hơn về lý do giữ trang sức lâu dài.

Ví dụ: I think people wear certain pieces of jewelry for a long time because they are gifts from loved ones or family members, or simply because they are their favorite items with sentimental value.

× My favorite earrings and bracelet are stick to me everyday.

✓ My favorite earrings and bracelet stick to me every day.

The verb 'stick' does not require the preposition 'to' in this context. Also, 'everyday' as one word is an adjective meaning common or normal, but here the adverb phrase 'every day' (two words) is correct to indicate frequency.

× it's make me look more fashionable.

✓ it makes me look more fashionable.

The subject 'it' is third person singular, so the verb should be 'makes' to agree in number and person.

× I really like a earrings that has a lot of germs or it's just like a diamonds.

✓ I really like earrings that have a lot of gems or are just like diamonds.

The article 'a' should not be used before the plural noun 'earrings'. Also, 'germs' is incorrect here; the correct word is 'gems'. The verb should agree with the plural subject 'earrings', so 'have' is used instead of 'has'. 'A diamonds' is incorrect; 'diamonds' is plural and does not take 'a'.

× I think a jewelry that shiny so and I found it that is so elegant and it's make the owners feel more confident and shiny.

✓ I think jewelry that is shiny is so elegant, and I find that it makes the owners feel more confident and radiant.

'Jewelry' is an uncountable noun and does not take 'a'. The adjective 'shiny' needs the verb 'is' to form a correct clause. 'It's make' should be 'it makes' for subject-verb agreement. 'Shiny' is repeated awkwardly; 'radiant' or 'bright' is better here.

× I really like to wear a jury, so I usually buy it in in in Internet or sometimes I go in the store to try it in the real life.

✓ I really like to wear jewelry, so I usually buy it on the Internet or sometimes I go to the store to try it in real life.

'Jury' is a mispronunciation or misspelling of 'jewelry'. 'Jewelry' is uncountable and does not take 'a'. The correct preposition for online purchases is 'on the Internet'. 'Go in the store' should be 'go to the store'. 'In the real life' should be 'in real life'.

× I feel more comfortable in a social situation when I will truly because a sparkle truly is very elegant.

✓ I feel more comfortable in social situations when I wear jewelry because sparkling jewelry is very elegant.

The phrase 'when I will truly' is unclear and incorrect; it likely means 'when I wear jewelry'. 'A sparkle truly' is incorrect; 'sparkling jewelry' or 'sparkle' as a noun is better. 'In a social situation' should be plural 'in social situations' for general meaning.

× I think people will that who will actually for a long time, because maybe that truly is a gift from their love lover or their families or it's just their favorite items.

✓ I think people will wear jewelry for a long time because maybe it is a gift from their loved ones or their families, or it's just their favorite item.

The original sentence is fragmented and has missing verbs. 'Will that who will actually for a long time' is incorrect; it should be 'will wear jewelry for a long time'. 'Love lover' is incorrect; 'loved ones' is the correct phrase. 'Items' should be singular 'item' to match 'favorite'.