Jewelry— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Apni answer e kichu grammar mistake ache, ar sentence gulo onek boro ar ekta line e. Apni chesta korun sentence gulo ke choto choto kore bolte, ar subject-verb agreement thik rakhte. Apni linking words use korte paren jemon 'because', 'and' jate answer ta natural lage.

Ví dụ: Yes, I often wear jewelry because I believe it enhances a person's beauty. Moreover, it complements the outfit well. I think jewelry is important to complete one's look.

Gợi ý: Apnar answer e onek hesitation ar filler words ache, ja natural sound kore na. Apni chesta korun clear ar shundor sentence banate, ar filler words komate. Ar 'jewelries' er bodole 'jewelry' use korun karon eta uncountable noun. Apni specific karon dite paren investment er jonno gold keno valo.

Ví dụ: I mostly like gold jewelry because it is valuable and can be a good investment for the future. Besides, gold is durable and looks elegant.

Gợi ý: Apnar answer e kichu grammar ar word choice er problem ache. 'Sometime mostly early' bujhte oshubidha hoy. Apni chesta korun clear ar shundor sentence banate, ar 'jewelries' er bodole 'jewelry' use korun. Apni linking word use korte paren jemon 'because' ar 'so' jate answer ta logical lage.

Ví dụ: Yes, I usually buy jewelry, especially gold, because I consider it a valuable investment. I enjoy wearing it and think it is worth having.

Gợi ý: Apnar answer e kichu grammar ar word choice er problem ache. 'Jewelries' er bodole 'jewelry' use korun. Apni chesta korun sentence gulo ke clear ar shundor kore bolte, ar linking words use korte. Apni specific karon dite paren jemon sentimental value ba luck niye.

Ví dụ: I think people wear certain jewelry for a long time because it has sentimental value or brings good luck. For example, some may always wear a ring given by a loved one.

× Often wear jewelry yes, I like to wear jewelry sometimes because I think it enhance a person's beauty and it complements their dress up well and I think jewelry is very important to keep your looking.

✓ I often wear jewelry. Yes, I like to wear jewelry sometimes because I think it enhances a person's beauty and complements their dress well. I also think jewelry is very important to keep your look good.

The sentence lacks proper verb forms and subject-verb agreement. 'Enhance' should be 'enhances' to agree with singular subject 'it'. 'Dress up' should be 'dress' as a noun here. 'Keep your looking' is incorrect; it should be 'keep your look good'. Also, the sentence structure is fragmented and needs to be split for clarity.

× I mostly like gold jewelries because I think, uh, it's uh, jewelry and uh, uh, it's an acid at the same time and uh, uh, for future, umm, investment, it is a very, really good kind of material.

✓ I mostly like gold jewelry because I think it's jewelry and also an asset at the same time. For future investment, it is a really good kind of material.

The word 'jewelries' is incorrect; 'jewelry' is an uncountable noun and does not have a plural form. Also, 'acid' is a wrong word here; the correct word is 'asset'. The sentence is fragmented and needs to be clearer.

× Yes, I love to wear jewelry sometime mostly early. I love to invest on my jewelry, so mainly in gold jewelries, because at the same time it's valuable and it's a worthy thing to have.

✓ Yes, I love to wear jewelry sometimes, mostly earlier. I love to invest in my jewelry, mainly in gold jewelry, because it is valuable and a worthy thing to have.

Again, 'jewelries' is incorrect; 'jewelry' is uncountable. 'Sometime' should be 'sometimes' to indicate frequency. 'Invest on' should be 'invest in'. The sentence structure is awkward and needs correction.

× I think sometime it does it's about special jewelries or a very favorite jewelries. I sometime love to carry one or two piece always because I think it's a very it's a very valuable or give brings good luck.

✓ I think sometimes it is about special jewelry or very favorite pieces. I sometimes love to carry one or two pieces always because I think they are very valuable and bring good luck.

'Sometime' should be 'sometimes' to indicate frequency. 'Jewelries' is incorrect; 'jewelry' is uncountable and 'pieces' is the correct plural form for countable items. 'One or two piece' should be 'one or two pieces'. The sentence structure and pronoun usage need correction for clarity.