Jewelry— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Cevabınız doğal ancak bazı cümlelerinizde dilbilgisi hataları ve anlam belirsizlikleri var. Daha kısa ve net cümleler kurmaya çalışın. Örneğin, 'I have loved jewelry since I was a child because my mom owns a jewelry shop. I often wear jewelry and enjoy choosing pieces myself.' gibi daha akıcı ve doğru cümleler kullanabilirsiniz.

Ví dụ: I often wear jewelry because my mom owns a jewelry shop. Since I was a child, I have loved jewelry and enjoy picking out pieces myself.

Gợi ý: Cümlenizde bazı dilbilgisi hataları ve kelime tekrarları var. Ayrıca, cümleleriniz daha akıcı ve mantıklı bağlaçlarla bağlanabilir. Örneğin, 'I prefer real silver jewelry because I am allergic to other types. I usually wear silver or gold, but gold is expensive, so I mostly choose silver. I like bracelets, earrings, piercings, and necklaces.' şeklinde daha doğal ve anlaşılır olabilir.

Ví dụ: I prefer real silver jewelry because I am allergic to other types. I usually wear silver or gold, but gold is expensive, so I mostly choose silver. I like bracelets, earrings, piercings, and necklaces.

Gợi ý: Cümle yapılarınızda zaman ve dilbilgisi hataları mevcut. Ayrıca, cümleleriniz daha açık ve akıcı olabilir. Örneğin, 'No, I have never bought jewelry because my mom has owned a jewelry shop since I was five. Therefore, I have access to jewelry without buying it.' şeklinde daha doğru ve doğal olur.

Ví dụ: No, I have never bought jewelry because my mom has owned a jewelry shop since I was five. Therefore, I have access to jewelry without buying it.

Gợi ý: Cevabınızda fikirlerinizi daha net ve organize şekilde ifade edebilirsiniz. Ayrıca, 'a jewelry' ifadesi yanlış, 'a piece of jewelry' olmalı. Örneğin, 'Some people might wear the same piece of jewelry for a long time because they cannot afford new ones, or they have emotional attachment to it. Others might simply prefer not to change their jewelry often. However, I enjoy wearing new pieces regularly.' şeklinde daha iyi olur.

Ví dụ: Some people might wear the same piece of jewelry for a long time because they cannot afford new ones, or they have emotional attachment to it. Others might simply prefer not to change their jewelry often. However, I enjoy wearing new pieces regularly.

× Yes, I do very often because my mom has a jewelry shop. So when I was a child and now I really love jewelry and I'll do by myself and that's my obsession.

✓ Yes, I do very often because my mom has a jewelry shop. So when I was a child and now, I really love jewelry and I make it by myself and that's my obsession.

The phrase 'I'll do by myself' is incorrect in this context. The student likely means 'I make it by myself' or 'I do it myself.' Also, 'I'll do' is future tense, which does not fit the context of a habitual action. Using 'make' or 'do' in present tense is appropriate here.

× I prefer silver one, it's a real silver because I have a allergic to normal jewelry so I use generally silver or gold.

✓ I prefer silver ones; it's real silver because I am allergic to normal jewelry, so I generally use silver or gold.

The phrase 'silver one' should be plural 'silver ones' when referring to types or pieces of jewelry. Also, 'a allergic' is incorrect; it should be 'allergic' without 'a'. The adverb 'generally' should come before the verb 'use' for correct placement.

× And bracelet, earrings, piercing necklace.

✓ And bracelets, earrings, piercing necklaces.

The nouns 'bracelet' and 'piercing necklace' should be plural to match the list format and to indicate multiple items.

× No, I've never buy jewelry because I said that.

✓ No, I've never bought jewelry because I said that.

The verb 'buy' should be in the past participle form 'bought' after 'have never' to form the present perfect tense correctly.

× My mom has a jewelry shop when I was 5 actually, so I've never buy a jewelry because of that reason.

✓ My mom had a jewelry shop when I was 5, actually, so I've never bought jewelry because of that reason.

The verb 'has' should be past tense 'had' to match 'when I was 5'. Also, 'buy' should be 'bought' in present perfect tense. 'A jewelry' is incorrect; 'jewelry' is uncountable and does not take 'a'.

× Why do you think some people wear a piece of jewelry for a long time?

✓ Why do you think some people wear pieces of jewelry for a long time?

The phrase 'a piece of jewelry' is singular, but the question implies multiple people and possibly multiple items. Using 'pieces of jewelry' is more appropriate.

× Maybe they are so emotional and they're really obsessed with their one piece of jewelry.

✓ Maybe they are so emotional and they're really obsessed with their one piece of jewelry.

This sentence is grammatically correct; no correction needed.

× But I love wearing a new jewelry every time.

✓ But I love wearing new jewelry every time.

'Jewelry' is an uncountable noun and does not take the article 'a'. Removing 'a' makes the sentence correct.