Part 1
Giám khảo
How do you like geography?
Thí sinh
I like geography but not that much because in geography there are not to know about the the the distance of of the area. Everything I think about geography.
Giám khảo
Do you think geography is useful?
Thí sinh
I think it is because without geography we could not learn other continents, other places and other countries. And also without geography life would become boring for for many, especially those.
Giám khảo
Have you ever learned geography?
Thí sinh
Yes, we have subjects before and and that's including geography and geography in high school is somewhat interested if I know that a certain country is being tackled and has a lot to offer like countries in.
Giám khảo
Do you want to be a geography teacher?
Thí sinh
And As for now, no, I don't want to become a teacher, especially in geography. I just like to explore other places and countries. But I don't want to become a teacher of geography because I will become very boring.
Giám khảo
Will you learn more about the geography of other countries?
Thí sinh
I think, I think yes, I'd like to learn more countries, especially those which interest me most. I'd like to learn about those countries and its geography so that if the.
How do you like geography?
Điểm: 40.0Gợi ý: Try to make your answer clearer and more organized. Avoid repeating words and focus on expressing your opinion directly. Use simple and correct sentences to explain why you like or dislike geography.
Ví dụ: I like geography because it helps me understand different places and their distances. However, I find some parts a bit difficult to remember.
Do you think geography is useful?
Điểm: 60.0Gợi ý: Your answer is relevant but try to avoid repeating words and complete your thoughts. Use linking words to connect your ideas and provide specific reasons why geography is useful.
Ví dụ: I think geography is useful because it helps us learn about different continents and countries. Moreover, it makes life more interesting by allowing us to explore new places.
Have you ever learned geography?
Điểm: 45.0Gợi ý: Make your sentences complete and clear. Avoid repeating words and try to explain your experience with geography more specifically. Use linking words to connect your ideas.
Ví dụ: Yes, I studied geography in high school. I found it interesting when we learned about countries that have many attractions and unique features.
Do you want to be a geography teacher?
Điểm: 55.0Gợi ý: Your answer is understandable but try to use more natural expressions and avoid repeating words. Explain your reasons clearly and use linking words to make your answer coherent.
Ví dụ: No, I don't want to be a geography teacher because I prefer exploring new places myself. Teaching geography might be boring for me.
Will you learn more about the geography of other countries?
Điểm: 50.0Gợi ý: Try to complete your sentences and avoid repeating words. Use linking words to connect your ideas and explain why you want to learn more about other countries' geography.
Ví dụ: Yes, I would like to learn more about the geography of other countries, especially those that interest me. This will help me understand their culture and environment better.
× I like geography but not that much because in geography there are not to know about the the the distance of of the area.
✓ I like geography but not that much because in geography there is nothing to know about the distance of the area.
The phrase 'there are not to know about' is incorrect. The correct expression is 'there is nothing to know about' to indicate the absence of information. Also, 'the the the' and 'of of' are repetitions and should be removed.
× I think it is because without geography we could not learn other continents, other places and other countries.
✓ I think it is because without geography we could not learn about other continents, other places, and other countries.
The verb 'learn' when referring to acquiring knowledge about something is usually followed by the preposition 'about'. Omitting 'about' makes the sentence incomplete.
× And also without geography life would become boring for for many, especially those.
✓ And also without geography, life would become boring for many, especially for those.
The phrase 'boring for for many' has a repeated preposition 'for'. Also, 'especially those' is incomplete; it should be 'especially for those' to specify the group.
× Yes, we have subjects before and and that's including geography and geography in high school is somewhat interested if I know that a certain country is being tackled and has a lot to offer like countries in.
✓ Yes, we had subjects before, including geography, and geography in high school is somewhat interesting if I know that a certain country is being studied and has a lot to offer, like countries in other regions.
The sentence is fragmented and unclear. 'We have subjects before' should be past tense 'we had subjects before'. 'That's including' should be 'including'. 'Somewhat interested' should be 'somewhat interesting'. 'Is being tackled' is better expressed as 'is being studied'. The sentence ends abruptly and needs completion for clarity.
× And As for now, no, I don't want to become a teacher, especially in geography.
✓ As for now, no, I don't want to become a teacher, especially a geography teacher.
Starting a sentence with 'And As' is redundant. 'Especially in geography' is awkward; it should be 'especially a geography teacher' to specify the subject.
× I just like to explore other places and countries.
✓ I just like exploring other places and countries.
The verb 'like' is often followed by the gerund form '-ing' when expressing general preferences.
× But I don't want to become a teacher of geography because I will become very boring.
✓ But I don't want to become a geography teacher because it will be very boring.
'Teacher of geography' is better expressed as 'geography teacher'. Also, 'I will become very boring' incorrectly suggests the speaker will become boring; it should be 'it will be very boring' referring to the job.
× I think, I think yes, I'd like to learn more countries, especially those which interest me most.
✓ I think, yes, I'd like to learn about more countries, especially those that interest me most.
The phrase 'learn more countries' is incorrect; it should be 'learn about more countries'. Also, 'which' is better replaced by 'that' in restrictive clauses.
× I'd like to learn about those countries and its geography so that if the.
✓ I'd like to learn about those countries and their geography so that if possible, I can understand them better.
'Its geography' is incorrect because 'countries' is plural; the correct pronoun is 'their'. The sentence is incomplete and needs completion for clarity.