Part 1
Giám khảo
How do you like geography?
Thí sinh
I don't have a strong feeling about it and geography isn't something I use a lot in my daily life, so I've never feel connected to it. It was just there. Whether now or in the future, I don't very care about it.
Giám khảo
Do you think geography is useful?
Thí sinh
Yes, I think so. Although I don't deal with it that often, it does come in handy sometimes. For example, if you go out or travel someplace strange, it's very useful for you to be safety and notice that climate changes.
Giám khảo
Have you ever learned geography?
Thí sinh
Yes, of course it was the compulsory subject in our high school and to be honest, I struggled with it. All those maps, climate zones and landforms just went over my mind. I'd say I was not the top student in this class.
Giám khảo
Do you want to be a geography teacher?
Thí sinh
I don't want to be. I know my major is electronic, so I was in high school. I spent a lot of time in math and physics instead of geography, and I don't want to be a teacher in the future. I want to be a engineer or some or some person. So it's not suitable for me.
Giám khảo
Will you learn more about the geography of other countries?
Thí sinh
Well, I think so. Now I'm planning to study abroad, so if everything goes well, I'll definitely learn the geography of this country I am heading to, along with its culture and history. It just makes sense to know the place you are going to live, right?
How do you like geography?
Điểm: 60.0Gợi ý: 回答时语法错误较多,表达不够自然,且内容较为消极。建议使用更自然的表达方式,避免重复和语法错误,同时可以适当表达个人观点。
Ví dụ: I don't have a strong interest in geography because I rarely use it in my daily life. However, I understand its importance in understanding the world around us.
Do you think geography is useful?
Điểm: 70.0Gợi ý: 回答内容较为简单,表达有些不流畅,且存在语法错误。建议使用更准确的词汇和句式,增强表达的连贯性和准确性。
Ví dụ: Yes, I believe geography is useful. For instance, when traveling to unfamiliar places, understanding the geography helps me stay safe and be aware of climate changes.
Have you ever learned geography?
Điểm: 75.0Gợi ý: 回答较为完整,但表达中有些用词不当和语法错误。建议使用更准确的表达方式,并适当丰富细节。
Ví dụ: Yes, geography was a compulsory subject in high school. To be honest, I found it challenging because I had difficulty remembering maps, climate zones, and landforms.
Do you want to be a geography teacher?
Điểm: 65.0Gợi ý: 回答表达不够清晰,语法和用词错误较多。建议简洁明了地表达自己的职业规划,并注意语法准确。
Ví dụ: No, I don't want to be a geography teacher. My major is electronics, and I prefer to focus on math and physics. I hope to become an engineer in the future.
Will you learn more about the geography of other countries?
Điểm: 85.0Gợi ý: 回答较好,表达自然且内容具体。建议进一步丰富细节,使用更多连接词使表达更流畅。
Ví dụ: Yes, I plan to learn more about the geography of the country where I will study abroad. Understanding its geography, culture, and history will help me adapt better to my new environment.
× I've never feel connected to it.
✓ I've never felt connected to it.
这里使用现在完成时,动词feel应使用过去分词felt,表示从过去到现在的经历。
× I don't very care about it.
✓ I don't care about it very much.
'don't care'后面不直接跟副词very,应该用'care about it very much',副词位置错误。
× it's very useful for you to be safety and notice that climate changes.
✓ it's very useful for you to be safe and notice climate changes.
'be safety'错误,应该用形容词safe;'notice that climate changes'中that多余,直接用notice climate changes。
× All those maps, climate zones and landforms just went over my mind.
✓ All those maps, climate zones and landforms just went over my head.
习惯用语是'go over one's head'表示难以理解,'mind'用法不当。
× I want to be a engineer or some or some person.
✓ I want to be an engineer or some other person.
'engineer'以元音音素开头,前面冠词应为'an';'some or some person'重复且不合适,改为'some other person'更自然。
× I'll definitely learn the geography of this country I am heading to, along with its culture and history.
✓ I'll definitely learn the geography of the country I am heading to, along with its culture and history.
'this country'指代不明确,改为'the country'更符合语境。