Part 1
Giám khảo
How do you like geography?
Thí sinh
I really like geography because it can help me know a lot of place cultures and I usually watch some videos to learn about others countries cultures and I think it's really interesting.
Giám khảo
Do you think geography is useful?
Thí sinh
As for me, I think geography is really useful because it can help me know a lot of countries cultures and if I learn more about this subject I can.
Giám khảo
Have you ever learned geography?
Thí sinh
Of course, in school I learned geography and I think it's really useful. It can helps me know a lot of different countries, cultures and if I learn it, great, I can get a good grade and it's really useful.
Giám khảo
Do you want to be a geography teacher?
Thí sinh
In fact, I don't really want to be a geography teachers because I'm interested in, but I'm not good at the subject.
Giám khảo
Will you learn more about the geography of other countries?
Thí sinh
Yes, of course. Especially when I start to travel, I will learn other countries geography, I will know this country's cultures, advance and know the traditional of this place is really good for me.
How do you like geography?
Điểm: 65.0Gợi ý: 回答中存在语法错误和表达不够自然,建议简化句子结构,避免重复表达,并使用更准确的词汇。
Ví dụ: I really enjoy geography because it helps me learn about different cultures. I often watch videos about other countries, which I find very interesting.
Do you think geography is useful?
Điểm: 50.0Gợi ý: 回答不完整且表达不清晰,建议完整表达观点,避免句子中断,并使用连接词使句子更连贯。
Ví dụ: I think geography is very useful because it helps me understand different cultures. If I study it more, I can gain a better knowledge of the world.
Have you ever learned geography?
Điểm: 60.0Gợi ý: 回答中有语法错误和重复表达,建议使用正确的时态和语法,避免重复,并提供更具体的细节。
Ví dụ: Yes, I studied geography at school. It helped me learn about various countries and cultures, and I enjoyed it because it improved my grades.
Do you want to be a geography teacher?
Điểm: 55.0Gợi ý: 回答表达不完整且语法错误,建议完整表达想法,使用正确的语法,并清晰说明原因。
Ví dụ: Actually, I don't want to be a geography teacher because although I'm interested in the subject, I'm not very good at it.
Will you learn more about the geography of other countries?
Điểm: 60.0Gợi ý: 回答中存在语法错误和表达不清晰,建议使用连贯的句子结构,避免词汇错误,并具体说明学习的内容。
Ví dụ: Yes, definitely. When I travel, I plan to learn about the geography and culture of other countries, which will help me understand their traditions better.
× I really like geography because it can help me know a lot of place cultures and I usually watch some videos to learn about others countries cultures and I think it's really interesting.
✓ I really like geography because it can help me know a lot of places' cultures and I usually watch some videos to learn about other countries' cultures and I think it's really interesting.
这里的“place cultures”和“others countries cultures”中,名词复数形式使用错误。应使用复数形式“places”和“countries”,并且表示所属关系时应加所有格“places' cultures”和“countries' cultures”。
× As for me, I think geography is really useful because it can help me know a lot of countries cultures and if I learn more about this subject I can.
✓ As for me, I think geography is really useful because it can help me know a lot of countries' cultures and if I learn more about this subject I can.
“countries cultures”应为复数所有格形式“countries' cultures”,表示“国家的文化”。
× Of course, in school I learned geography and I think it's really useful. It can helps me know a lot of different countries, cultures and if I learn it, great, I can get a good grade and it's really useful.
✓ Of course, in school I learned geography and I think it's really useful. It can help me know a lot of different countries' cultures and if I learn it, great, I can get a good grade and it's really useful.
“It can helps”中,“can”后应接动词原形,故应为“can help”。另外,“countries, cultures”应改为“countries' cultures”,表示所属关系。
× Of course, in school I learned geography and I think it's really useful. It can helps me know a lot of different countries, cultures and if I learn it, great, I can get a good grade and it's really useful.
✓ Of course, in school I learned geography and I think it's really useful. It can help me know a lot of different countries' cultures and if I learn it, great, I can get a good grade and it's really useful.
“countries, cultures”应为复数所有格“countries' cultures”,表示“不同国家的文化”。
× In fact, I don't really want to be a geography teachers because I'm interested in, but I'm not good at the subject.
✓ In fact, I don't really want to be a geography teacher because I'm interested in it, but I'm not good at the subject.
“a geography teachers”中,“a”表示单数,故“teachers”应改为单数“teacher”。另外,“interested in”后应有宾语,这里应加“it”。
× In fact, I don't really want to be a geography teachers because I'm interested in, but I'm not good at the subject.
✓ In fact, I don't really want to be a geography teacher because I'm interested in it, but I'm not good at the subject.
“interested in”后面缺少宾语,应该补充宾语“it”,表示“我对它感兴趣”。
× Yes, of course. Especially when I start to travel, I will learn other countries geography, I will know this country's cultures, advance and know the traditional of this place is really good for me.
✓ Yes, of course. Especially when I start to travel, I will learn other countries' geography, I will know this country's cultures, advances and know the traditions of this place, which is really good for me.
“other countries geography”应为复数所有格“other countries' geography”,表示“其他国家的地理”。“advance”应为复数“advances”,表示“进步”。“traditional”应为名词复数“traditions”,表示“传统”。
× Yes, of course. Especially when I start to travel, I will learn other countries geography, I will know this country's cultures, advance and know the traditional of this place is really good for me.
✓ Yes, of course. Especially when I start to travel, I will learn other countries' geography, I will know this country's cultures, advances and know the traditions of this place, which is really good for me.
“know the traditional of this place”中,“traditional”应为名词“traditions”,且“of this place”是正确的所有格结构。
× Yes, of course. Especially when I start to travel, I will learn other countries geography, I will know this country's cultures, advance and know the traditional of this place is really good for me.
✓ Yes, of course. Especially when I start to travel, I will learn other countries' geography, I will know this country's cultures and advances, and knowing the traditions of this place is really good for me.
原句中“advance and know the traditional of this place is really good for me”结构混乱,缺少连词,建议调整为“and advances, and knowing the traditions of this place is really good for me”使句子结构更清晰。