Geography— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Your answer is relevant but could be more natural and concise. Avoid redundancy like 'Earth and atmosphere' twice and try to use linking words to connect ideas smoothly. Also, correct grammar such as 'has enhanced' instead of 'it's enhanced'.

Ví dụ: I enjoy geography because it has expanded my understanding of the Earth, including its atmosphere, mountains, and rivers.

Gợi ý: Your answer is clear but contains repetition ('their their') and could be more specific. Use linking words to explain why geography is useful and avoid vague phrases like 'every man'.

Ví dụ: Yes, I believe geography is very useful, especially for students, because it helps them understand the environment around them, including the Earth's features and atmosphere.

Gợi ý: Your answer has grammatical errors and is a bit unclear. Use past tense consistently and avoid unnecessary phrases. Try to give a clear topic sentence followed by supporting details with linking words.

Ví dụ: Yes, I studied geography at school, and it was my favourite subject because I found it easy and interesting to learn.

Gợi ý: Your answer is quite long and contains grammatical mistakes. Be concise and clear, and organise your ideas logically using linking words. Avoid vague phrases like 'teacher you always very beneficial'.

Ví dụ: Yes, I would like to be a geography teacher because I find teaching rewarding. I am also interested in teaching English and my mother tongue.

Gợi ý: Your answer is relevant but could be more fluent and grammatically correct. Use linking words to connect ideas and be specific about what you want to learn.

Ví dụ: Yes, definitely. I want to learn more about the geography of other countries, including how global warming and climate change affect them. I am also interested in understanding how mountains and rivers are formed.

× Yes, I like geography because it's enhanced my knowledge about Earth and atmosphere.

✓ Yes, I like geography because it has enhanced my knowledge about Earth and the atmosphere.

The sentence requires the present perfect tense to indicate an action that has an effect on the present. 'It's enhanced' is a contraction of 'it is enhanced', which is incorrect here. The correct form is 'it has enhanced'. Also, 'the atmosphere' needs the definite article 'the' because it refers to a specific atmosphere, that of Earth.

× Apart from that, I can also learn about mountains and rivers.

✓ Apart from that, I can also learn about mountains and rivers.

This sentence is grammatically correct and requires no correction.

× Yes, I think it is very useful for every man, especially for students. They can learn about their their earth and also about atmosphere.

✓ Yes, I think it is very useful for everyone, especially for students. They can learn about their Earth and also about the atmosphere.

The phrase 'every man' is outdated and less inclusive; 'everyone' is more appropriate. The repetition 'their their' is a typographical error. 'Earth' as a proper noun should be capitalised. 'Atmosphere' requires the definite article 'the' because it refers to a specific atmosphere.

× Yes, I learned geography when I study in the school and there was a one subject and which was my favorite that time because that time it was very easy to learn it.

✓ Yes, I learned geography when I studied at school and it was one subject which was my favourite at that time because it was very easy to learn.

The verb 'study' should be in the past tense 'studied' to match the past context. 'In the school' is better expressed as 'at school'. 'There was a one subject' is incorrect; it should be 'it was one subject'. The phrase 'which was my favorite that time' is better as 'which was my favourite at that time'. 'Favourite' is the Australian English spelling. The sentence is restructured for clarity and correctness.

× Well, if I get a chance to become a geography teacher, yes definitely I would like to because teacher you always very beneficial and I am very fascinated about being a teacher and I want to teach geography, English and also my mother tongue.

✓ Well, if I get a chance to become a geography teacher, yes definitely I would like to because teachers are always very beneficial and I am very fascinated by being a teacher and I want to teach geography, English and also my mother tongue.

The phrase 'teacher you always very beneficial' is incorrect; it should be 'teachers are always very beneficial' to agree in number and include the verb 'are'. 'Fascinated about' should be 'fascinated by'. The sentence is corrected for subject-verb agreement and preposition use.

× Yes, definitely. I would like to learn more about our country like geography and what are the changes of global warming and climate change. Also want to learn about mountains and rivers, how they create.

✓ Yes, definitely. I would like to learn more about our country's geography and the changes caused by global warming and climate change. I also want to learn about mountains and rivers, how they are formed.

The phrase 'our country like geography' is unclear; it should be 'our country's geography'. 'What are the changes of global warming' is incorrect; it should be 'the changes caused by global warming'. 'Also want to learn' lacks a subject; it should be 'I also want to learn'. 'How they create' is incorrect; the correct phrase is 'how they are formed' to describe the formation of mountains and rivers.