Part 1
Giám khảo
How do you like geography?
Thí sinh
Well, I think geography is a very important subject to help us know about the features of our planet Earth, such as mountains, rivers and some and the diversity of nature and also the spectacular sceneries.
Giám khảo
Do you think geography is useful?
Thí sinh
Yes, I do. Geography can help us know about the features of our planet very well, such as oceans, mountains, rivers and biodiversity. If we know geography well, when we go out for a trip, we don't need a compass or map. We can navigate ourselves. What we need is just to do it.
Giám khảo
Have you ever learned geography?
Thí sinh
Yes, there are a lot geography classes since my junior high school. I know a lot about the important features of our planet such as mountains, rivers, oceans.
Giám khảo
Do you want to be a geography teacher?
Thí sinh
Uh, no I don't. Although I think geography is very important, I don't enjoy teaching regardless of the subject.
Giám khảo
Will you learn more about the geography of other countries?
Thí sinh
Yes, I think I will. There are countless spectacular sceneries around the world. So I would be interested about them, about my favorite sceneries in other countries throughout through the learning process of geography.
How do you like geography?
Điểm: 75.0Gợi ý: 回答时语言较为自然,但存在语法和表达上的小错误,如“and some”不完整,且句子较长,建议简化句子结构,避免冗余,同时增加连接词使表达更流畅。
Ví dụ: I like geography because it helps us understand Earth's features, such as mountains, rivers, and diverse natural landscapes. Moreover, it allows us to appreciate spectacular sceneries around the world.
Do you think geography is useful?
Điểm: 80.0Gợi ý: 回答内容具体且有条理,但最后一句“what we need is just to do it”表达不够清晰,建议使用更准确的表达,并适当使用连接词增强逻辑性。
Ví dụ: Yes, I believe geography is very useful because it teaches us about Earth's features like oceans, mountains, rivers, and biodiversity. Therefore, when traveling, we can navigate without relying on a compass or map, which makes trips more enjoyable and independent.
Have you ever learned geography?
Điểm: 70.0Gợi ý: 回答中存在语法错误,如“there are a lot geography classes”应为“there have been many geography classes”。建议注意时态和冠词的使用,同时丰富细节使回答更具体。
Ví dụ: Yes, I have studied geography since junior high school. Through these classes, I have learned a lot about important features of our planet, including mountains, rivers, and oceans.
Do you want to be a geography teacher?
Điểm: 85.0Gợi ý: 回答简洁明了,表达清晰。可以稍微丰富理由,使回答更具体和有说服力。
Ví dụ: No, I don't want to be a geography teacher. Although I find the subject important, I don't enjoy teaching because I prefer learning and exploring new things myself.
Will you learn more about the geography of other countries?
Điểm: 75.0Gợi ý: 回答中存在语法和表达不准确的问题,如“interested about”应为“interested in”,句子结构不够流畅。建议简化句子,使用正确的介词,并增加连接词。
Ví dụ: Yes, I will continue learning about the geography of other countries because there are countless spectacular sceneries worldwide. I am especially interested in exploring my favorite landscapes through studying geography.
× Well, I think geography is a very important subject to help us know about the features of our planet Earth, such as mountains, rivers and some and the diversity of nature and also the spectacular sceneries.
✓ Well, I think geography is a very important subject to help us know about the features of our planet Earth, such as mountains, rivers, and the diversity of nature, and also the spectacular scenery.
句中“some and the diversity of nature and also the spectacular sceneries”结构混乱,且“sceneries”通常用不可数形式“scenery”。应去掉多余的“some and”,并将“sceneries”改为“scenery”。
× Yes, there are a lot geography classes since my junior high school.
✓ Yes, there have been a lot of geography classes since my junior high school.
“a lot geography classes”缺少介词“of”,应为“a lot of geography classes”。
× Yes, there are a lot geography classes since my junior high school.
✓ Yes, there have been a lot of geography classes since my junior high school.
句子描述从过去到现在持续的情况,应使用现在完成时“have been”,而非一般现在时“are”。
× So I would be interested about them, about my favorite sceneries in other countries throughout through the learning process of geography.
✓ So I would be interested in them, in my favorite scenery in other countries throughout the learning process of geography.
“interested”后应接介词“in”而非“about”;“sceneries”应为不可数名词“scenery”;“throughout through”重复,应去掉“through”。