Part 1
Giám khảo
How do you like geography?
Thí sinh
Honestly I really don't like geography because since I was a student in primary school my geography scores is so bad and I really don't have any interested about geography. It's so boring for me and difficult.
Giám khảo
Do you think geography is useful?
Thí sinh
Yes, I do. Yes I do. It's definitely useful because it can help us to know more about the plants that we lived and we can know the climate or the phenomenon in the plant.
Giám khảo
Have you ever learned geography?
Thí sinh
Yeah, I've learned geography about four years, the whole primary school and the first year of high school. And when I can choose to study geography or not in the second of the high school, I definitely choose not to study geography anymore.
Giám khảo
Do you want to be a geography teacher?
Thí sinh
Definitely not. Honestly the geography is really not my type and I really don't want to be a teacher. It's not my future planning.
Giám khảo
Will you learn more about the geography of other countries?
Thí sinh
Although I really don't like the geography when I have to do some travel plan about the city that I want to go, maybe I will learn some the geography of that cities.
How do you like geography?
Điểm: 60.0Gợi ý: 回答中语法错误较多,表达不够自然,且内容重复。建议简化句子结构,避免重复表达,并使用更准确的词汇。
Ví dụ: I don't like geography because I found it difficult and boring since primary school, and my scores were always low.
Do you think geography is useful?
Điểm: 65.0Gợi ý: 回答中有重复,且用词不准确(如plants应为places),建议避免重复,使用正确词汇,并用连接词使表达更连贯。
Ví dụ: Yes, I think geography is useful because it helps us understand the places we live in, including the climate and natural phenomena.
Have you ever learned geography?
Điểm: 70.0Gợi ý: 回答较完整,但语法和表达不够准确,建议注意时态和句子结构,使用连接词使表达更流畅。
Ví dụ: Yes, I studied geography for about four years during primary school and the first year of high school. When I had the option to continue, I chose not to.
Do you want to be a geography teacher?
Điểm: 70.0Gợi ý: 回答直接但表达略显简单,建议丰富理由,使用更自然的表达方式。
Ví dụ: Definitely not. Geography is not my favorite subject, and I don't plan to become a teacher in the future.
Will you learn more about the geography of other countries?
Điểm: 65.0Gợi ý: 回答中语法错误较多,表达不够清晰,建议简化句子,注意冠词和复数形式,使用连接词使表达更连贯。
Ví dụ: Even though I don't like geography, I might learn about the geography of cities I plan to visit when I travel.
× my geography scores is so bad
✓ my geography scores are so bad
这里的主语是复数形式的'scores',谓语动词应该用复数形式'are',而不是单数形式'is'。主谓一致错误。
× I really don't have any interested about geography
✓ I really don't have any interest in geography
'interested'是形容词,不能用作名词,应该用名词'interest'。同时,'interested about'是不正确的搭配,正确的介词搭配是'interest in'。
× the plants that we lived
✓ the places that we live
这里的'plants'应为'places',因为语境中指的是我们居住的地方,而不是植物。同时,'lived'是过去式,应该用现在时'live',因为描述的是一般事实。
× we can know the climate or the phenomenon in the plant
✓ we can know the climate or the phenomenon in the place
同上,'plant'应为'place',表示地点。
× I've learned geography about four years
✓ I've learned geography for about four years
表示持续时间时,应该用'for'而不是省略。
× when I can choose to study geography or not in the second of the high school
✓ when I could choose to study geography or not in the second year of high school
'can'应改为过去时态'could','second of the high school'应为'second year of high school'。
× the geography is really not my type
✓ geography is really not my type
'the'在这里不需要,'geography'作为学科名词通常不加冠词。
× when I have to do some travel plan about the city that I want to go
✓ when I have to make some travel plans for the city that I want to go to
'do some travel plan'应改为'make some travel plans','about the city'应改为'for the city',并且'go'后面需要加介词'to'。
× maybe I will learn some the geography of that cities
✓ maybe I will learn some geography of those cities
'some the geography'中'the'多余,'cities'前应使用指示代词'those'而非'that',因为是复数。