Geography— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: 回答时应避免重复使用相似词汇，如“quite appealing”和“quite fascinating”，可以用更多不同的表达方式来丰富语言。同时，句子结构可以更简洁自然。

Ví dụ: I find geography interesting because it helps me learn about different cultures and the natural world, which broadens my understanding of the planet.

Gợi ý: 回答中语法错误较多，如“human”应为“humans”，句子表达不够清晰。建议使用更准确的语法和词汇，并且避免模糊表达。

Ví dụ: Yes, geography is very useful because it helps people understand natural disasters like earthquakes, which can save lives. Moreover, advances in geography allow us to learn more about the Earth and how it is changing.

Gợi ý: 时态使用不准确，如“choose”应为过去式“chose”，句子结构可以更自然。建议注意时态一致性和表达的连贯性。

Ví dụ: Unfortunately, I did not study geography much because I failed the exam in primary school, so I decided not to take it in high school to focus on subjects I was better at.

Gợi ý: 回答中表达不清晰，语法错误较多，如“teachers the same job”不合逻辑。建议简化句子，明确表达观点，并注意语法准确。

Ví dụ: I would like to be a geography teacher if I improve my skills because I enjoy teaching. However, since I am not very good at geography now, I am not sure if I can do it long-term.

Gợi ý: 回答中有语法错误和重复，如“we we”，句子不完整且表达不清楚。建议使用简洁明了的句子，避免重复，并完整表达观点。

Ví dụ: Yes, I want to learn about the geography of other countries because it helps me understand the world better and enriches my knowledge.

× I think the study on geography can help human to avoid natural disasters like earthquakes.

✓ I think the study of geography can help humans to avoid natural disasters like earthquakes.

这里“human”应使用复数形式“humans”，因为指的是人类的整体，而不是单个个体。

× And what's more, with the development of geography, human may know more about the earth and may change.

✓ And what's more, with the development of geography, humans may know more about the earth and may change it.

“human”应改为复数“humans”，且“may change”后应加宾语“it”，指代地球。

× When I was in primary school I failed the geography exam, so I choose not to study geography when I am in high school to ensure that I got a good score.

✓ When I was in primary school I failed the geography exam, so I chose not to study geography when I was in high school to ensure that I got a good score.

“choose”应使用过去式“chose”，因为动作发生在过去；“am”应改为过去式“was”，保持时态一致。

× Yes, if I've got the academic ability in geography and I definitely may want to be a geography teacher because I think teachers the same job.

✓ Yes, if I've got the academic ability in geography, I would definitely want to be a geography teacher because I think teachers do the same job.

“may want”表达不确定，语境中应使用“would want”表示假设；“teachers the same job”缺少谓语，应改为“teachers do the same job”。

× Yes, of course, learning the geography of other country is still learning the geography of the earth of the land that we we are standing on.

✓ Yes, of course, learning the geography of other countries is still learning the geography of the earth, the land that we are standing on.

“other country”应使用复数“other countries”，因为指多个国家。

× Yes, of course, learning the geography of other country is still learning the geography of the earth of the land that we we are standing on.

✓ Yes, of course, learning the geography of other countries is still learning the geography of the earth, the land that we are standing on.

句中重复出现“we”，应删除多余的一个。

× And I think learning the knowledge of geography can enrich our inner selves and makes you.

✓ And I think learning the knowledge of geography can enrich our inner selves and make us better.

“makes you”主语不一致，应改为“make us better”，保持主语一致且表达完整。