Part 1
Giám khảo
How do you like geography?
Thí sinh
Well, if I have to taking a scored of geography can is the perfect score. I think I just can. I just can give around 3:00 to 5:00 because actually this is not my strength subject and I would prefer I like some Chinese history.
Giám khảo
Do you think geography is useful?
Thí sinh
Well, I think geography is not useful for me because in my daily life no one will talk about it and I may prefer another subject and actually I am not really interested in geography. Therefore in my daily life geography is not useful.
Giám khảo
Have you ever learned geography?
Thí sinh
Yes, I have learned geography since I was a secondary school student and I am a junior student because that is a fixed word of my school that we have to learn geography. But I thought geography is quite interesting but I don't have interest on it.
Giám khảo
Do you want to be a geography teacher?
Thí sinh
Well, I don't want to be a teacher and I don't like to talk geography because I'm not really interested in it. But I may prefer I can be a teacher that's not teaching geography.
Giám khảo
Will you learn more about the geography of other countries?
Thí sinh
Not really because I don't have the passion on geography in my country. Therefore I will not say I will learn more about geography of other countries.
How do you like geography?
Điểm: 40.0Gợi ý: 回答不够连贯,语法错误较多,表达不自然。建议简化句子结构,直接表达观点,并补充具体原因。
Ví dụ: I don't like geography very much because it is not my strong subject. I prefer Chinese history because I find it more interesting and easier to understand.
Do you think geography is useful?
Điểm: 50.0Gợi ý: 回答内容重复,缺少具体细节。建议避免重复表达,增加具体例子说明为什么觉得地理不实用。
Ví dụ: I don't find geography useful in my daily life because I rarely use it or discuss it with others. For example, I don't need to know about maps or countries for my daily activities.
Have you ever learned geography?
Điểm: 45.0Gợi ý: 表达不清晰,语法错误影响理解。建议简洁明了地说明学习经历和感受,并用连接词使句子流畅。
Ví dụ: Yes, I have studied geography since secondary school because it is a compulsory subject. Although I find some parts interesting, I am generally not very interested in it.
Do you want to be a geography teacher?
Điểm: 50.0Gợi ý: 表达不够自然,句子结构混乱。建议直接表达意愿,并说明原因,避免重复。
Ví dụ: I don't want to be a geography teacher because I am not interested in the subject. However, I might consider teaching another subject that I like more.
Will you learn more about the geography of other countries?
Điểm: 45.0Gợi ý: 回答缺乏流畅性和具体细节。建议使用连接词,表达更自然,并说明原因。
Ví dụ: I probably won't learn more about the geography of other countries because I am not passionate about geography in general. I prefer to focus on subjects I enjoy more.
× Well, if I have to taking a scored of geography can is the perfect score.
✓ Well, if I have to take a score in geography, I think I can get the perfect score.
动词后面接动名词(-ing形式)错误。这里“have to”后面应接动词原形“take”,而不是“taking”。建议记住情态动词和“have to”后面接动词原形。
× I think I just can. I just can give around 3:00 to 5:00 because actually this is not my strength subject and I would prefer I like some Chinese history.
✓ I think I can only get around 3 to 5 because this is not my strong subject and I prefer Chinese history.
“give around 3:00 to 5:00”表达不当,分数应使用数字且不加“give”。“strength subject”应为“strong subject”。建议使用正确的量词和表达方式。
× I would prefer I like some Chinese history.
✓ I prefer Chinese history.
“prefer”后不需要“like”,且“some”在此处不合适。建议简化表达,直接说“I prefer Chinese history”。
× Well, I think geography is not useful for me because in my daily life no one will talk about it and I may prefer another subject and actually I am not really interested in geography.
✓ Well, I think geography is not useful for me because in my daily life no one talks about it, and I prefer other subjects. Actually, I am not really interested in geography.
“no one will talk”时态不合适,应为一般现在时“no one talks”。“prefer another subject”应为“prefer other subjects”。建议注意时态和代词的正确使用。
× Yes, I have learned geography since I was a secondary school student and I am a junior student because that is a fixed word of my school that we have to learn geography.
✓ Yes, I have learned geography since I was a secondary school student and I am a junior student because it is a fixed rule of my school that we have to learn geography.
“fixed word”应为“fixed rule”,词汇使用错误。建议注意词汇搭配。
× But I thought geography is quite interesting but I don't have interest on it.
✓ But I thought geography is quite interesting, but I don't have interest in it.
“interest on”应为“interest in”,介词使用错误。建议记住固定搭配“interest in”。
× Well, I don't want to be a teacher and I don't like to talk geography because I'm not really interested in it.
✓ Well, I don't want to be a teacher and I don't like to talk about geography because I'm not really interested in it.
“talk geography”缺少介词“about”,应为“talk about geography”。建议注意动词与介词的搭配。
× But I may prefer I can be a teacher that's not teaching geography.
✓ But I would prefer to be a teacher who doesn't teach geography.
“prefer I can be”结构错误,应使用“would prefer to be”。“that's not teaching”应为“who doesn't teach”。建议学习正确的从句和动词形式。
× Therefore I will not say I will learn more about geography of other countries.
✓ Therefore, I will not say that I will learn more about the geography of other countries.
缺少连词“that”,使句子结构不完整。建议注意从句连接词的使用。