Geography— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Your answer is somewhat unclear and contains grammatical errors. Try to start with a clear topic sentence directly answering the question, then add specific reasons using linking words. Avoid redundancy and improve sentence structure for natural flow.

Ví dụ: I like geography because it helps me understand the world around me. For example, when I go outside, I notice different landforms and weather patterns that relate to what I have learned. Therefore, I want to learn more about geography to better appreciate our environment.

Gợi ý: Your answer addresses the question but could be clearer and more coherent. Use linking words to connect ideas and provide specific examples. Also, correct grammar and sentence structure will improve clarity.

Ví dụ: Yes, geography is very useful in daily life because it helps us predict weather changes and understand natural disasters like earthquakes. Moreover, learning geography provides valuable information about different parts of the world.

Gợi ý: Your response is somewhat confusing and contains grammatical mistakes. Provide a clear topic sentence, then explain with specific details using linking words. Avoid unclear phrases and improve sentence flow.

Ví dụ: Yes, I studied geography during my junior years. However, in senior school, I focused more on physics and mathematics because they are related to science. Despite this, I learned many useful things about the environment from geography.

Gợi ý: Your answer is relevant but could be more concise and better structured. Use linking words to connect ideas and avoid repeating similar points. Also, correct grammar and vocabulary usage will enhance clarity.

Ví dụ: I do not want to be a geography teacher. Instead, I prefer to teach mathematics because I find it more interesting. For instance, solving difficult math problems gives me a sense of achievement and happiness.

Gợi ý: Your answer is unclear and contains many grammatical errors. Try to give a direct answer first, then explain with specific reasons using linking words. Avoid repetition and improve sentence structure for better coherence.

Ví dụ: Yes, I would like to learn more about the geography of other countries because I have never travelled abroad. For example, watching the news helps me understand different cultures and environments, which motivates me to study geography before I travel or study overseas.

× When I go outside, I can see land which are related to geographies and so that I would like to learn more about geography.

✓ When I go outside, I can see land which is related to geography and so I would like to learn more about geography.

The word 'land' is singular, so the verb should be 'is' instead of 'are'. Also, 'geographies' is incorrect here; 'geography' as a subject is uncountable and should be singular. The phrase 'so that' is unnecessary and can be simplified to 'so'. Suggestion: Match singular subjects with singular verbs and use uncountable nouns correctly.

× Yes, of course we can use geography in our daily life and help us understand our surrounding patterns like how the weather is it going in the future or what is happening if there are earth earthquake.

✓ Yes, of course we can use geography in our daily life and it helps us understand our surrounding patterns, like how the weather will be in the future or what happens if there is an earthquake.

The sentence lacks a subject for 'help us'; adding 'it' clarifies that geography helps us. 'How the weather is it going' is incorrect; it should be 'how the weather will be'. 'Earth earthquake' is redundant; 'earthquake' alone is correct. Also, 'if there are earthquake' should be 'if there is an earthquake' because 'earthquake' is singular. Suggestion: Use appropriate pronouns to clarify subjects and ensure subject-verb agreement with singular/plural nouns.

× I I learn geography in my junior form, but in my senior form I don't learn geography because I study physics and other mathematics subjects which are related to scientific and urgently geographies.

✓ I learned geography in my junior form, but in my senior form I didn't learn geography because I studied physics and other mathematics subjects which are related to science and geography.

The verb tense should be past tense 'learned' and 'didn't learn' to match the past time frame. 'Study' should be 'studied'. 'Scientific and urgently geographies' is incorrect; 'scientific' is an adjective but 'urgently' is an adverb and does not fit here. 'Geographies' should be singular 'geography'. 'Science and geography' is more appropriate. Suggestion: Use past tense verbs when referring to past events and ensure adjectives and nouns are used correctly.

× I would become a mathematic teacher because I think mathematic is far more interesting than geography.

✓ I would become a mathematics teacher because I think mathematics is far more interesting than geography.

'Mathematic' is incorrect; the correct noun is 'mathematics'. It is singular and uncountable, so 'is' is used. Suggestion: Use correct noun forms and match singular verbs accordingly.

× Because mathematics have many difficult questions that I cannot solve right now and if I solve them I will gain a lot of happiness.

✓ Because mathematics has many difficult questions that I cannot solve right now, and if I solve them I will gain a lot of happiness.

'Mathematics' is singular and requires the singular verb 'has' instead of 'have'. Suggestion: Ensure subject-verb agreement with singular uncountable nouns.

× Yes, of course because I am. I have never been to other country because before.

✓ Yes, of course because I am. I have never been to another country before.

'Other country' is incorrect; the correct phrase is 'another country' when referring to a singular countable noun. Suggestion: Use 'another' with singular countable nouns to indicate one more of the same kind.

× So I know when I watching the news I know that other countries have many uncertain values.

✓ So I know when I watch the news that other countries have many uncertain values.

'When I watching' is incorrect; it should be 'when I watch' because 'watch' is the base form after 'when I'. Also, the second 'I know' is redundant and can be omitted. Suggestion: Use the base verb form after 'when I' and avoid redundant phrases.

× So I want to learn more about some some geography because I travel or study abroad.

✓ So I want to learn more about some geography because I want to travel or study abroad.

'Some some' is a repetition error; it should be 'some'. Also, 'geography' is uncountable and 'some geography' is acceptable but contextually 'geographies' or 'geographical knowledge' might be better. The phrase 'because I travel or study abroad' is better expressed as 'because I want to travel or study abroad' to indicate future intention. Suggestion: Avoid repetition and clarify intentions with appropriate verb forms.