Part 1
Giám khảo
How do you like geography?
Thí sinh
Well, I think geography is a normal thing. I feel boring about it. Especially when I take classes about the geography, I feel really boring, tired and fell sleepy because it is hard for me to gather information about it.
Giám khảo
Do you think geography is useful?
Thí sinh
Well, I think that is really useful because when we get lost, we can we can get the directions by the by our basic geography, not geographical knowledge like the stars, the space or and.
Giám khảo
Have you ever learned geography?
Thí sinh
Yes, I'll have to learn geography when I was a a senior and junior high school student because geography is a must during that time and we should finish the final exam about it.
Giám khảo
Do you want to be a geography teacher?
Thí sinh
No, because the geography is not my thing when I take the class of this. I felt really tired, worried and sleepy at that time because it is hard for me to concentrate on this kind of information.
Giám khảo
Will you learn more about the geography of other countries?
Thí sinh
Well, it depends on the situation. If I really like a country, I would I would like to get some basic information about it because maybe next time I will travel for I will travel for it. So it is common for.
How do you like geography?
Điểm: 55.0Gợi ý: 回答缺乏流畅性和自然表达,句子结构重复且有语法错误。建议使用更自然的表达方式,避免重复,并且注意时态和语法的正确使用。
Ví dụ: I find geography quite uninteresting, especially during classes. It can be tiring and sometimes makes me feel sleepy because I struggle to absorb all the information.
Do you think geography is useful?
Điểm: 60.0Gợi ý: 回答中有重复和语法错误,表达不够清晰。建议简洁明了地表达观点,并用具体例子支持,同时避免重复。
Ví dụ: Yes, I think geography is useful because it helps us find directions when we are lost, using basic knowledge like maps and landmarks.
Have you ever learned geography?
Điểm: 65.0Gợi ý: 回答时态混乱,表达不够自然。建议使用正确的时态,并简洁地说明学习经历。
Ví dụ: Yes, I studied geography in both junior and senior high school because it was a compulsory subject, and we had to take final exams on it.
Do you want to be a geography teacher?
Điểm: 60.0Gợi ý: 表达不够流畅,句子结构重复且有语法错误。建议用更自然的表达方式,清楚说明原因。
Ví dụ: No, I don't want to be a geography teacher because I find it difficult to concentrate in geography classes, which makes me feel tired and bored.
Will you learn more about the geography of other countries?
Điểm: 55.0Gợi ý: 回答不完整且有重复,表达不清晰。建议简洁明了地表达观点,并避免重复和语法错误。
Ví dụ: It depends, but if I like a country, I would learn some basic geography about it, especially if I plan to travel there in the future.
× I feel boring about it.
✓ I feel bored about it.
这里应该用形容词bored来表达“感到无聊”,而不是现在分词boring,boring用来形容事物令人感到无聊。
× I feel really boring, tired and fell sleepy because it is hard for me to gather information about it.
✓ I feel really bored, tired and sleepy because it is hard for me to gather information about it.
同样,应该用形容词bored来表达“感到无聊”,而不是boring。fell sleepy是错误的,应该用形容词sleepy。
× when I take classes about the geography
✓ when I take classes about geography
geography作为学科名词前通常不加定冠词the。
× we can we can get the directions by the by our basic geography
✓ we can get directions by our basic geography
重复使用we can且the by用法错误,应简化为we can get directions by our basic geography。
× not geographical knowledge like the stars, the space or and.
✓ not geographical knowledge like the stars or space.
or and连用不正确,应使用or或and之一,且the space前不加定冠词。
× Yes, I'll have to learn geography when I was a a senior and junior high school student
✓ Yes, I had to learn geography when I was a senior and junior high school student
过去时态中应使用had to而不是will have to。
× because the geography is not my thing
✓ because geography is not my thing
学科名称前一般不加定冠词the。
× when I take the class of this.
✓ when I took this class.
时态应与上下文一致,过去时用took,且表达更自然。
× I felt really tired, worried and sleepy at that time because it is hard for me to concentrate on this kind of information.
✓ I felt really tired, worried and sleepy at that time because it was hard for me to concentrate on this kind of information.
前半句是过去时,后半句应保持时态一致,使用was而不是is。
× If I really like a country, I would I would like to get some basic information about it
✓ If I really like a country, I would like to get some basic information about it
重复使用would不正确,应去掉一个。
× So it is common for.
✓ So it is common for me to do that.
句子不完整,缺少宾语或补充说明,需补充完整。