Part 1
Giám khảo
How do you like geography?
Thí sinh
Yes, I like geography, but I think it's too hard for me to recite the knowledge of geography. So I'm not very good at geography, but I love it.
Giám khảo
Do you think geography is useful?
Thí sinh
Definitely, geography is very useful. It can help us learn about the world and understand different culture and different countries. And it also useful for us during our traveling. It can have a good effect in our travel experience.
Giám khảo
Have you ever learned geography?
Thí sinh
Yes, I learned geography in my high school and I have learned it for about 3 years. During my high school, I was not very good at geography because it's a quite challenge for me to memorize all the geographical facts and details, which makes it difficult for me to excel in this subject.
Giám khảo
Do you want to be a geography teacher?
Thí sinh
I'd love to, but actually I have insufficient knowledge about geography, so I'd like to be a geography lover instead of a teacher of geography.
Giám khảo
Will you learn more about the geography of other countries?
Thí sinh
Yes, I'm very interested in the geography of other countries. I think they are very interesting and they can broaden my horizons. Knowing other countries cultures can help me knowing better the places.
How do you like geography?
Điểm: 70.0Gợi ý: 回答中表达了喜欢地理但觉得难以记忆的观点,内容较为自然,但句子结构重复,且缺少连贯的连接词。建议使用更简洁的句子结构,并加入连接词使表达更流畅。
Ví dụ: I like geography because it helps me understand the world better. However, I find it challenging to memorize all the facts, which makes it difficult for me to excel in this subject.
Do you think geography is useful?
Điểm: 75.0Gợi ý: 回答内容具体且相关,但存在语法错误和重复表达。建议注意语法准确性,使用连接词如“Moreover”或“Additionally”来增强句子连贯性。
Ví dụ: Definitely, geography is very useful. It helps us learn about the world and understand different cultures and countries. Moreover, it enhances our travel experiences by providing useful knowledge about the places we visit.
Have you ever learned geography?
Điểm: 80.0Gợi ý: 回答结构清晰,内容具体,但句子稍显冗长且有语法错误。建议简化句子结构,使用连接词如“because”或“so”使表达更自然。
Ví dụ: Yes, I studied geography for about three years in high school. However, I found it challenging to memorize all the geographical facts, so I struggled to excel in this subject.
Do you want to be a geography teacher?
Điểm: 75.0Gợi ý: 回答表达了观点,但句子结构不够自然,且重复使用“geography”。建议使用更地道的表达方式,避免重复。
Ví dụ: I'd love to be a geography teacher, but I feel I don't have enough knowledge yet. Therefore, I prefer to remain an enthusiast of the subject for now.
Will you learn more about the geography of other countries?
Điểm: 78.0Gợi ý: 回答内容积极且相关,但存在语法错误和表达重复。建议注意语法准确性,使用连接词如“because”或“which”使句子更连贯。
Ví dụ: Yes, I'm very interested in the geography of other countries because it broadens my horizons. Learning about different cultures helps me understand these places better.
× It can help us learn about the world and understand different culture and different countries.
✓ It can help us learn about the world and understand different cultures and different countries.
这里的culture是可数名词,表示不同的文化,应使用复数形式cultures。
× And it also useful for us during our traveling.
✓ And it is also useful for us during our traveling.
句子缺少系动词is,导致结构不完整。应加上is使句子完整。
× Yes, I learned geography in my high school and I have learned it for about 3 years.
✓ Yes, I learned geography in my high school and I learned it for about 3 years.
前半句使用了过去时learned,后半句应保持时态一致,使用过去时learned,而不是现在完成时have learned。
× During my high school, I was not very good at geography because it's a quite challenge for me to memorize all the geographical facts and details, which makes it difficult for me to excel in this subject.
✓ During my high school, I was not very good at geography because it's quite a challenge for me to memorize all the geographical facts and details, which makes it difficult for me to excel in this subject.
短语quite a challenge中,a应放在challenge前,quite修饰challenge,顺序应为quite a challenge。
× Knowing other countries cultures can help me knowing better the places.
✓ Knowing other countries' cultures can help me know the places better.
countries cultures应为countries' cultures,表示所有格;help me knowing应改为help me know,动词不定式用法;better应放在places后面,修饰places。