Part 1
Giám khảo
How do you like geography?
Thí sinh
I do not really like geography because it's very hard to memorize geographical location with any different countries.
Giám khảo
Do you think geography is useful?
Thí sinh
I do not think geography is useful. You know the country technology selling very quickly and everybody have the phone and map in map app in the phone. So we also use map to know where we are.
Giám khảo
Have you ever learned geography?
Thí sinh
Yes, maybe in junior high school, but you know, I do not like geography, so into geography class I always sleep.
Giám khảo
Do you want to be a geography teacher?
Thí sinh
No, I think geography is very difficult for me. I do not really memorize geographical location. So I think maybe in the future we do not have the geography lessons.
Giám khảo
Will you learn more about the geography of other countries?
Thí sinh
Maybe not, because my dream is to go around the world, so I think I want to go to this country and know their tradition and their geography, so maybe yes.
How do you like geography?
Điểm: 55.0Gợi ý: 回答缺乏流畅性和准确表达,建议使用更自然的表达方式,并避免语法错误。可以简洁明了地表达观点,同时补充具体原因。
Ví dụ: I don't like geography very much because I find it difficult to remember the locations of different countries.
Do you think geography is useful?
Điểm: 50.0Gợi ý: 回答内容不够连贯,语法和表达存在错误。建议使用连词使句子更流畅,并提供更具体的理由。
Ví dụ: I don't think geography is very useful nowadays because technology like map apps on phones helps us find places easily.
Have you ever learned geography?
Điểm: 45.0Gợi ý: 回答中存在语法错误和表达不自然的问题。建议使用正确的时态和表达方式,并避免负面描述。
Ví dụ: Yes, I studied geography in junior high school, but I didn't enjoy it very much.
Do you want to be a geography teacher?
Điểm: 50.0Gợi ý: 回答缺乏逻辑连贯性,表达不够清晰。建议分句表达观点,并使用连接词使内容更连贯。
Ví dụ: No, I don't want to be a geography teacher because I find it hard to remember locations. Also, I think geography lessons might not be necessary in the future.
Will you learn more about the geography of other countries?
Điểm: 60.0Gợi ý: 回答有些矛盾且表达不够清晰。建议明确表达态度,并用连词连接句子,使内容更连贯。
Ví dụ: I might not study geography in detail, but since I want to travel around the world, I would like to learn about the traditions and geography of the countries I visit.
× I do not really like geography because it's very hard to memorize geographical location with any different countries.
✓ I do not really like geography because it's very hard to memorize geographical locations of different countries.
这里的 'location' 应该用复数形式 'locations',因为指的是多个国家的地理位置。英语中表示多个对象时,名词通常需要用复数形式。
× You know the country technology selling very quickly and everybody have the phone and map in map app in the phone.
✓ You know the country's technology is developing very quickly and everybody has a phone and a map app on the phone.
'country' 应该用所有格 'country's',表示国家的技术;'everybody' 是单数,谓语动词应为 'has';'phone' 和 'map app' 前需要加冠词 'a'。
× You know the country technology selling very quickly and everybody have the phone and map in map app in the phone.
✓ You know the country's technology is developing very quickly and everybody has a phone and a map app on the phone.
主语 'everybody' 是第三人称单数,谓语动词应使用第三人称单数形式 'has'。
× Yes, maybe in junior high school, but you know, I do not like geography, so into geography class I always sleep.
✓ Yes, maybe in junior high school, but you know, I do not like geography, so in geography class I always slept.
描述过去的动作时,动词应使用过去式,'sleep' 的过去式是 'slept'。
× Yes, maybe in junior high school, but you know, I do not like geography, so into geography class I always sleep.
✓ Yes, maybe in junior high school, but you know, I do not like geography, so in geography class I always slept.
介词 'into' 用法错误,正确表达应为 'in geography class',表示在课堂上。
× No, I think geography is very difficult for me. I do not really memorize geographical location. So I think maybe in the future we do not have the geography lessons.
✓ No, I think geography is very difficult for me. I do not really memorize geographical locations. So I think maybe in the future we will not have geography lessons.
'location' 应用复数 'locations',因为指多个地理位置;'lessons' 前不需要定冠词 'the',且未来时态应使用 'will not have'。
× No, I think geography is very difficult for me. I do not really memorize geographical location. So I think maybe in the future we do not have the geography lessons.
✓ No, I think geography is very difficult for me. I do not really memorize geographical locations. So I think maybe in the future we will not have geography lessons.
表达未来时态时,应使用 'will' + 动词原形,'we do not have' 应改为 'we will not have'。
× You know the country technology selling very quickly and everybody have the phone and map in map app in the phone.
✓ You know the country's technology is developing very quickly and everybody has a phone and a map app on the phone.
介词 'in' 用法错误,正确表达应为 'on the phone',表示在手机上。