Part 1
Giám khảo
How do you like geography?
Thí sinh
I like geography very much because I like traveling and I need to concern about the weather of different countries. So when my family and I traveling together, it's my job to use my geography knowledge.
Giám khảo
Do you think geography is useful?
Thí sinh
Yes I do. Like I said before, I can use my professional knowledge to help my family make lists about the climate and which is useful.
Giám khảo
Have you ever learned geography?
Thí sinh
Yes, I have learned geography in my middle high school. I was very good at it and always got a good grade. My teachers even thought that I had an A talent on it.
Giám khảo
Do you want to be a geography teacher?
Thí sinh
No I don't. Even though I like geography, I don't think that I am good at being a teacher. The thing is I have no patience to teach others knowledge.
Giám khảo
Will you learn more about the geography of other countries?
Thí sinh
Yes, I will. Learning geography is one of my interests and I like reading many geography books which I will continue buying them and learning them further in the future.
How do you like geography?
Điểm: 75.0Gợi ý: 回答时语法和表达有些错误,且句子结构不够自然。建议注意动词形式和介词的正确使用,同时避免重复表达。
Ví dụ: I really enjoy geography because I love traveling. When my family and I travel, I use my knowledge of geography to check the weather in different countries, which helps us plan our trips better.
Do you think geography is useful?
Điểm: 65.0Gợi ý: 回答不够清晰,表达含糊且有语法错误。建议明确说明地理学的具体用途,并使用连贯的句子。
Ví dụ: Yes, I think geography is very useful. For example, I use my knowledge to help my family understand the climate of different places, which helps us decide where to travel.
Have you ever learned geography?
Điểm: 70.0Gợi ý: 表达中存在语法和用词错误,如“middle high school”和“an A talent”。建议使用正确的词汇和表达方式。
Ví dụ: Yes, I studied geography in middle school and high school. I was good at it and often got high grades. My teachers even said I had a talent for the subject.
Do you want to be a geography teacher?
Điểm: 70.0Gợi ý: 表达较为直接,但语法和用词不够准确。建议使用更自然的表达方式,并注意句子结构。
Ví dụ: No, I don't want to be a geography teacher. Although I like the subject, I don't think I have the patience needed to teach others.
Will you learn more about the geography of other countries?
Điểm: 70.0Gợi ý: 句子结构不够流畅,有重复和冗余。建议简化表达,使用连贯的句子。
Ví dụ: Yes, I will continue learning about the geography of other countries. It's one of my interests, and I enjoy reading geography books to improve my knowledge.
× So when my family and I traveling together, it's my job to use my geography knowledge.
✓ So when my family and I are traveling together, it's my job to use my geography knowledge.
这里缺少be动词,进行时态需要用"am/is/are + 动词-ing"结构,正确表达正在进行的动作。
× Like I said before, I can use my professional knowledge to help my family make lists about the climate and which is useful.
✓ Like I said before, I can use my professional knowledge to help my family make lists about the climate, which is useful.
句中"and which is useful"结构不正确,应使用逗号连接定语从句,修饰前面的内容。
× Yes, I have learned geography in my middle high school.
✓ Yes, I learned geography in my middle high school.
这里使用一般过去时更合适,因为提到的是过去具体时间的动作。
× My teachers even thought that I had an A talent on it.
✓ My teachers even thought that I had an A talent for it.
搭配错误,应该用"talent for"表示对某事有天赋。
× The thing is I have no patience to teach others knowledge.
✓ The thing is I have no patience to teach others knowledge.
此句中"others knowledge"应改为"others' knowledge"表示所有格,但该错误不在给定的语法问题列表中,故不做修改。
× Learning geography is one of my interests and I like reading many geography books which I will continue buying them and learning them further in the future.
✓ Learning geography is one of my interests and I like reading many geography books, which I will continue to buy and learn from further in the future.
"continue buying them and learning them"结构重复且不自然,应改为"continue to buy and learn from",使表达更简洁流畅。