Geography— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: 回答が少し繰り返しで冗長になっています。より自然で効果的な表現にするために、同じ内容を繰り返さず、具体的な理由や例を加えて答えると良いでしょう。

Ví dụ: I enjoy learning geography because it helps me understand different places and cultures. For example, when I travel, I can appreciate the local environment and history more deeply.

Gợi ý: 文法の誤りや不自然な表現が見られます。より明確で論理的な回答にするために、主語と動詞の一致に注意し、具体的な理由を簡潔に述べることが重要です。

Ví dụ: Yes, I think geography is very useful because it provides knowledge about different countries and cultures, which helps us understand the world better when we travel.

Gợi ý: 回答が繰り返しや言い淀みが多く、流暢さに欠けます。簡潔に答え、理由や感想を付け加える際は、論理的なつながりを意識しましょう。

Ví dụ: Yes, I studied geography throughout elementary, junior high, and high school. Now, I find it very meaningful because it helps me understand the world better.

Gợi ý: 文法の誤りや不自然な表現が多いです。自信のなさを表現する際は、より自然なフレーズを使い、理由を明確に述べると良いでしょう。

Ví dụ: Actually, I don't want to be a geography teacher because I think they need to have a lot of knowledge and understand many cultures, and I am not confident that I can do that well.

Gợi ý: 回答が途中で終わっており、内容が不十分です。質問に対して完全な文で答え、理由や具体的な目標を明確に述べることが必要です。

Ví dụ: Yes, I want to learn more about the geography of other countries because my dream is to work for an international organization like the WHO. This knowledge will help me understand global issues better.

× I like to learn geography because by learning geography I can know about the place, the place.

✓ I like learning geography because by learning geography I can know about places.

The phrase 'like to learn' is grammatically correct but 'like learning' is more natural when expressing enjoyment of an activity. Also, 'the place, the place' is repetitive and unclear; 'places' is more appropriate here.

× the knowledge which we obtained from geography will helps us to guide the world or the culture we learned.

✓ the knowledge which we obtain from geography will help us to understand the world and the cultures we learn about.

The verb 'helps' should be 'help' to agree with the plural subject 'knowledge' (treated as singular but followed by plural ideas). Also, 'obtained' should be present tense 'obtain' to match the context. 'Guide the world or the culture' is unclear; 'understand the world and the cultures' is more appropriate.

× Yes, I have learned, I have learned geography in my elementary school, Jun and junior high school and high school as well.

✓ Yes, I have learned geography in my elementary school, junior high school, and high school as well.

Repetition of 'I have learned' is unnecessary. 'Jun' seems to be a typo or unclear word and should be removed or corrected. The sentence is better structured without repetition.

× Actually I don't want to be in a geography teacher because in my image geography teacher have to know many knowledges and have to understand the different culture a lot.

✓ Actually, I don't want to be a geography teacher because in my view, a geography teacher has to know a lot of knowledge and understand different cultures well.

'Be in a geography teacher' is incorrect; it should be 'be a geography teacher'. 'In my image' is incorrect; 'in my view' or 'in my opinion' is correct. 'Geography teacher have' should be 'a geography teacher has' to agree in number. 'Knowledges' is uncountable; use 'knowledge'. 'The different culture a lot' is awkward; 'different cultures well' is better.

× But I don't have a confidence that I can do that.

✓ But I don't have confidence that I can do that.

'A confidence' is incorrect; 'confidence' is an uncountable noun and should not have an article. The modal verb 'can' is used correctly here.

× Yes, I want to learn about the geography of other countries because my dream is to work in global, for example work in WHO or something like that.

✓ Yes, I want to learn about the geography of other countries because my dream is to work globally, for example, to work in the WHO or something like that.

'Work in global' is incorrect; it should be 'work globally'. 'Work in WHO' should be 'work in the WHO' because 'WHO' is an organization and requires the definite article. The sentence structure is improved by adding commas and infinitive forms.