Part 1
Giám khảo
How do you like geography?
Thí sinh
Yes, I like geography. It helps me learn the knowledge about different countries, the climate and even the reasons why some earthquake happened. And it's really useful when I read the news or travel abroad.
Giám khảo
Do you think geography is useful?
Thí sinh
Yes, I think it's quite useful. People can learn about the world better. For example, we might know why some places are quarter and some places are why some places always earthquake happened.
Giám khảo
Have you ever learned geography?
Thí sinh
Yes, I have a lot of geography. In middle school it was a compulsory classes and I remember I have learning how to draw maps and some platforms and how to read the latest articles.
Giám khảo
Do you want to be a geography teacher?
Thí sinh
Not really, because I think being a teacher requires a lot of patience. I'm not a very passionate person and also I like doing different things. I think being a teacher will tie me down.
Giám khảo
Will you learn more about the geography of other countries?
Thí sinh
Yes, I'd like to learn more about the geography of other countries. For example, I'd like to learn about the asylum. I want to know how it formed in this kind of way and why people live live the way they do.
How do you like geography?
Điểm: 70.0Gợi ý: 回答中存在语法错误和表达不自然的问题,建议简化句子结构,避免冗余,并使用更准确的词汇。
Ví dụ: I like geography because it helps me understand different countries, their climates, and why earthquakes occur. This knowledge is useful when I read the news or travel abroad.
Do you think geography is useful?
Điểm: 50.0Gợi ý: 回答中有语法错误和表达不清晰的问题,建议使用连贯的句子并提供具体例子,避免重复和错误表达。
Ví dụ: Yes, geography is useful because it helps us understand the world better. For example, it explains why some areas are deserts while others experience frequent earthquakes.
Have you ever learned geography?
Điểm: 55.0Gợi ý: 回答中语法错误较多,表达不流畅,建议使用正确的时态和词汇,简洁明了地描述学习经历。
Ví dụ: Yes, I studied geography a lot in middle school because it was a compulsory subject. I learned how to draw maps and read articles about geography.
Do you want to be a geography teacher?
Điểm: 75.0Gợi ý: 回答较为自然,但表达可以更简洁,避免重复,并用更准确的词汇表达观点。
Ví dụ: Not really. Being a teacher requires patience, and I prefer to try different things. I think teaching might limit my freedom.
Will you learn more about the geography of other countries?
Điểm: 60.0Gợi ý: 回答中存在词汇使用错误和表达不清晰的问题,建议使用准确词汇并清楚表达学习兴趣和原因。
Ví dụ: Yes, I want to learn more about the geography of other countries. For example, I am interested in how certain landscapes are formed and why people live differently in various regions.
× It helps me learn the knowledge about different countries, the climate and even the reasons why some earthquake happened.
✓ It helps me learn knowledge about different countries, the climate and even the reasons why some earthquakes happen.
“knowledge”是不可数名词,不需要加冠词“the”;“earthquake”应为复数形式“earthquakes”,因为指多个地震;“happened”时态应与上下文一致,改为一般现在时“happen”。
× People can learn about the world better. For example, we might know why some places are quarter and some places are why some places always earthquake happened.
✓ People can learn about the world better. For example, we might know why some places are dry and why some places always have earthquakes.
“quarter”用词错误,应为形容词描述气候,如“dry”;“earthquake”应为复数“earthquakes”;句子结构混乱,需调整使表达清晰。
× Yes, I have a lot of geography.
✓ Yes, I have studied a lot of geography.
“have a lot of geography”表达不正确,应使用动词“have studied”表示学习过很多地理知识。
× In middle school it was a compulsory classes and I remember I have learning how to draw maps and some platforms and how to read the latest articles.
✓ In middle school it was a compulsory class and I remember I learned how to draw maps and some platforms and how to read the latest articles.
“classes”应为单数“class”,因为前面有“a”;“I have learning”语法错误,应为过去时“I learned”。
× I remember I have learning how to draw maps and some platforms and how to read the latest articles.
✓ I remember I learned how to draw maps and some platforms and how to read the latest articles.
“have learning”时态和形式错误,应使用过去式“learned”,因为回忆的是过去的事情。
× Not really, because I think being a teacher requires a lot of patience.
✓ Not really, because I think being a teacher requires a lot of patience.
此句无明显情态动词错误,保持原句。
× I want to know how it formed in this kind of way and why people live live the way they do.
✓ I want to know how it formed in this kind of way and why people live the way they do.
“live live”重复,应删除一个“live”。