Part 1
Giám khảo
How do you like geography?
Thí sinh
Honestly not really, I found it really hard to learn at my junior high school and I often failed exams so I didn't really like the geography. But it's very useful if you master it really much.
Giám khảo
Do you think geography is useful?
Thí sinh
Yes, of course, I think this subject is really useful for in our daily lives and such as if you can master it, you may not get lost or not miss a run or not to get to the wrong track or wrong Rd.
Giám khảo
Have you ever learned geography?
Thí sinh
Yes, the geography is one of the main subjects in my junior high school and I must to learn it and I find it really difficult so I didn't really good at it. But learning is fun I think.
Giám khảo
Do you want to be a geography teacher?
Thí sinh
No, just like I said, I'm not really good at the geography, but if I have a chance I may want to be a English teacher maybe.
Giám khảo
Will you learn more about the geography of other countries?
Thí sinh
Yes, I think I would be interested in it because I'd love to learn the different cultures from the different countries. I think it's really interesting and it's really meaningful for me.
How do you like geography?
Điểm: 65.0Gợi ý: 回答中表达了个人感受,但语言不够自然,句子结构较复杂且有语法错误。建议简化句子结构,避免重复,使用更自然的表达方式。
Ví dụ: I didn't like geography much because I found it difficult in junior high school and often failed exams. However, I think it's very useful if you understand it well.
Do you think geography is useful?
Điểm: 70.0Gợi ý: 回答内容具体,但表达不够流畅,存在语法和用词错误。建议使用更准确的词汇和简洁的句子结构,避免重复和冗余。
Ví dụ: Yes, geography is very useful in daily life. For example, it helps us avoid getting lost and find the right routes when we travel.
Have you ever learned geography?
Điểm: 60.0Gợi ý: 回答中语法错误较多,句子不够连贯。建议注意动词形式和句子结构,使用连接词使表达更流畅。
Ví dụ: Yes, geography was one of the main subjects in my junior high school. Although I found it difficult and wasn't very good at it, I still think learning can be fun.
Do you want to be a geography teacher?
Điểm: 65.0Gợi ý: 回答表达了观点,但句子结构重复且有语法错误。建议简化表达,避免重复,并注意冠词和词序的正确使用。
Ví dụ: No, I don't want to be a geography teacher because I'm not good at it. I might want to be an English teacher instead.
Will you learn more about the geography of other countries?
Điểm: 75.0Gợi ý: 回答内容丰富且表达较自然,但可以使用更多连接词使句子更连贯。建议适当增加连接词和多样化词汇。
Ví dụ: Yes, I am interested in learning about the geography of other countries because it helps me understand different cultures. I find it both interesting and meaningful.
× I didn't really like the geography.
✓ I didn't really like geography.
在英语中,学科名称前通常不加冠词“the”,除非特指某个具体的地理内容。这里应去掉“the”。
× But it's very useful if you master it really much.
✓ But it's very useful if you master it well.
“really much”用法不正确,表达掌握得好应使用“well”。
× I think this subject is really useful for in our daily lives and such as if you can master it, you may not get lost or not miss a run or not to get to the wrong track or wrong Rd.
✓ I think this subject is really useful in our daily lives, such as if you can master it, you may not get lost or miss a bus or go the wrong way or wrong road.
“useful for in”中“for”多余,应去掉;“not miss a run”表达不准确,应改为“miss a bus”;“not to get to the wrong track or wrong Rd”结构不正确,应改为“go the wrong way or wrong road”。
× I must to learn it and I find it really difficult so I didn't really good at it.
✓ I must learn it and I find it really difficult so I wasn't really good at it.
“must”后不加“to”,应直接接动词原形;“didn't really good at it”结构错误,正确表达是“wasn't really good at it”。
× Yes, the geography is one of the main subjects in my junior high school and I must to learn it and I find it really difficult so I didn't really good at it.
✓ Yes, geography is one of the main subjects in my junior high school and I must learn it and I find it really difficult so I wasn't really good at it.
学科名称前不加定冠词“the”;“must to learn”错误,应为“must learn”;“didn't really good at it”错误,应为“wasn't really good at it”。
× No, just like I said, I'm not really good at the geography, but if I have a chance I may want to be a English teacher maybe.
✓ No, just like I said, I'm not really good at geography, but if I have a chance I may want to be an English teacher maybe.
学科名称前不加“the”;“a English teacher”前应使用“an”因为“English”以元音音素开头。
× No, just like I said, I'm not really good at the geography, but if I have a chance I may want to be a English teacher maybe.
✓ No, just like I said, I'm not really good at geography, but if I have a chance I might want to be an English teacher maybe.
“may want to”表达不自然,建议用“might want to”表示可能性更合适。
× Yes, I think I would be interested in it because I'd love to learn the different cultures from the different countries.
✓ Yes, I think I am interested in it because I'd love to learn about the different cultures from different countries.
“would be interested”在此处表达不准确,应使用现在时“am interested”;“learn the different cultures”应改为“learn about the different cultures”;“the different countries”前不需定冠词“the”。