Geography— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: คำตอบของคุณควรใช้ภาษาอังกฤษที่เป็นธรรมชาติและถูกต้องมากขึ้น เช่น การใช้ไวยากรณ์และคำศัพท์ที่เหมาะสม รวมถึงหลีกเลี่ยงความซ้ำซ้อนและความไม่ชัดเจน เช่น 'It's make me feel like I am lost and nowhere not knowing the direction' ควรแก้เป็น 'It makes me feel lost and confused about directions' และควรตอบตรงคำถามโดยไม่พูดถึงเรื่องที่ไม่เกี่ยวข้อง เช่น 'I do not like your coffee'

Ví dụ: I don't really like geography because I find it difficult to understand directions. It often makes me feel confused and lost when I try to read maps.

Gợi ý: ควรใช้ไวยากรณ์ที่ถูกต้องและคำเชื่อมเพื่อให้ประโยคสมบูรณ์และชัดเจน เช่น 'when you going to foreign country' ควรเป็น 'when you go to a foreign country' และควรอธิบายให้ชัดเจนว่าภูมิศาสตร์ช่วยอย่างไร เช่น 'so that you would be lost and also you can' ควรแก้เป็น 'so that you won't get lost and can find important places easily'

Ví dụ: I think geography is very useful, especially when you travel to a foreign country. It helps you understand the infrastructure, landmarks, and tourist attractions so that you won't get lost and can navigate easily.

Gợi ý: ควรใช้โครงสร้างประโยคที่ถูกต้องและคำเชื่อมเพื่อความลื่นไหล เช่น 'I still do not like it until now' ควรเป็น 'I still don't like it now' และควรเพิ่มรายละเอียดที่ชัดเจน เช่น อธิบายว่าทำไมไม่ชอบหรือความรู้สึกตอนเรียน

Ví dụ: The last time I studied geography was in fifth grade. I still don't like it now because I found it boring to just look at maps all day without much explanation.

Gợi ý: คำตอบตรงประเด็นดี แต่ควรใช้คำเชื่อมและโครงสร้างประโยคที่เป็นธรรมชาติมากขึ้น เช่น 'Definitely no' ควรเป็น 'Definitely not' และใช้คำเชื่อมเช่น 'because' เพื่อเชื่อมเหตุผล

Ví dụ: Definitely not, because as I mentioned before, I don't like geography. I find it boring and hard to understand, so I don't think I could teach it effectively.

Gợi ý: คำตอบชัดเจนและมีเหตุผลดี แต่ควรใช้คำเชื่อมเพื่อความลื่นไหล เช่น 'Due to the work that I'm doing right now, which is a doctor' ควรเป็น 'Because I am currently working as a doctor' และควรใช้คำศัพท์ที่เหมาะสม เช่น 'updated medicine' ควรเป็น 'up-to-date medical knowledge'

Ví dụ: I don't think I will learn more about the geography of other countries because I am currently working as a doctor and spend a lot of time studying up-to-date medical knowledge.

× It's make me feel like I am lost and nowhere not knowing the direction.

✓ It makes me feel like I am lost and nowhere, not knowing the direction.

The verb 'make' should be in the third person singular form 'makes' to agree with the singular subject 'It'. This is a subject-verb agreement issue involving verb conjugation in the present tense.

× I'm really bad with direction and way.

✓ I'm really bad with directions and ways.

The nouns 'direction' and 'way' are countable in this context and should be pluralized to 'directions' and 'ways' to correctly express the general concept.

× So I do not like your coffee.

✓ So I do not like geography.

The pronoun 'your coffee' is incorrect and unrelated to the context. The student likely meant to say 'geography' to refer back to the subject of dislike.

× You have to learn about their infrastructure, landmark and tourist attraction so that you would be lost and also you can.

✓ You have to learn about their infrastructure, landmarks, and tourist attractions so that you would not be lost and can also navigate easily.

The nouns 'landmark' and 'tourist attraction' should be pluralized to 'landmarks' and 'tourist attractions' to match the plural context. Also, the sentence structure is corrected to express the intended meaning clearly.

× Last time I learned geography was when I was in fifth grade.

✓ The last time I learned geography was when I was in fifth grade.

The sentence is missing the definite article 'The' at the beginning to specify the time reference properly.

× I just vaguely remember about sitting in a room and looking at the map all day.

✓ I just vaguely remember sitting in a room and looking at maps all day.

The preposition 'about' is unnecessary after 'remember'. Also, 'map' should be plural 'maps' to indicate multiple maps being looked at.

× I don't think I can teach anyone when I do not like it myself.

✓ I don't think I can teach anyone if I do not like it myself.

The conjunction 'when' is incorrectly used; 'if' is more appropriate to express a conditional situation.