Part 1
Giám khảo
How do you like geography?
Thí sinh
Well, I'm not into geography, which is simply because I'm really terrible at memorizing things. So I didn't choice light when I was in my high school. It is so difficult for me.
Giám khảo
Do you think geography is useful?
Thí sinh
Generally speaking I think the geography is useless because in my phone I have some maps applications to seek some directions, so I need to I don't need to learn geography.
Giám khảo
Have you ever learned geography?
Thí sinh
Yes, I studied geography in my high school. Because the geography is my compulsory subject, I need to pass it to get better scores and.
Giám khảo
Do you want to be a geography teacher?
Thí sinh
MMM while generally speaking I think being a geography teacher is not a good choice for me, I think it's so bored and I don't like geography in my country.
Giám khảo
Will you learn more about the geography of other countries?
Thí sinh
Hmm well if I have a chance to learn some knowledge about of other countries, I think I will choose it because I'm I have so cautious about.
How do you like geography?
Điểm: 55.0Gợi ý: 你的回答表达了对地理的不喜欢和原因,但语法和用词有误,且句子结构不够清晰。建议注意时态和词汇的正确使用,避免语法错误,同时使表达更自然流畅。
Ví dụ: I'm not very fond of geography because I find it hard to memorize facts. Therefore, I chose not to study it in high school since it was quite challenging for me.
Do you think geography is useful?
Điểm: 50.0Gợi ý: 回答中存在语法错误和重复,表达不够连贯。建议简化句子结构,避免重复,并使用更准确的词汇表达观点。
Ví dụ: Generally speaking, I think geography is not very useful for me because I can use map apps on my phone to find directions.
Have you ever learned geography?
Điểm: 60.0Gợi ý: 回答不完整且语法有误。建议完整表达观点,注意句子完整性和时态一致性。
Ví dụ: Yes, I studied geography in high school because it was a compulsory subject, and I needed to pass it to improve my overall grades.
Do you want to be a geography teacher?
Điểm: 55.0Gợi ý: 表达中有语法错误和用词不当,如'bored'应为'boring'。建议注意形容词的正确使用,并使句子更简洁自然。
Ví dụ: Generally speaking, I don't want to be a geography teacher because I find the subject boring and I'm not interested in it.
Will you learn more about the geography of other countries?
Điểm: 45.0Gợi ý: 回答语法错误较多,表达不清晰。建议简化句子,使用正确的词汇和语法结构,明确表达意愿。
Ví dụ: If I have the chance, I would like to learn more about the geography of other countries because I am curious about them.
× So I didn't choice light when I was in my high school.
✓ So I didn't choose it when I was in my high school.
这里使用了过去时的否定形式'didn't',后面动词应使用原形,'choice'是名词,正确动词形式是'choose'。应改为'didn't choose'。
× Generally speaking I think the geography is useless because in my phone I have some maps applications to seek some directions, so I need to I don't need to learn geography.
✓ Generally speaking, I think geography is useless because on my phone I have some map applications to find directions, so I don't need to learn geography.
'the geography'中不需要定冠词'the',因为这里指的是学科的泛指。'maps applications'应为'map applications','seek some directions'表达不自然,改为'find directions'更合适。
× Yes, I studied geography in my high school. Because the geography is my compulsory subject, I need to pass it to get better scores and.
✓ Yes, I studied geography in high school because geography is my compulsory subject, so I needed to pass it to get better scores.
'the geography'不需要定冠词,'in my high school'改为'in high school'更自然。句子连接应更流畅,'Because'不宜单独成句,合并为一句。时态应保持一致,过去时。
× MMM while generally speaking I think being a geography teacher is not a good choice for me, I think it's so bored and I don't like geography in my country.
✓ MMM, while generally speaking, I think being a geography teacher is not a good choice for me. I think it's so boring and I don't like geography in my country.
'so bored'是形容人的感受,'it'指代职业,应使用形容词'boring'表示令人感到无聊。句子应分开,使用逗号和句号使表达更清晰。
× Hmm well if I have a chance to learn some knowledge about of other countries, I think I will choose it because I'm I have so cautious about.
✓ Hmm, well, if I have a chance to learn some knowledge about other countries, I think I will choose it because I am very curious about them.
'about of'是错误搭配,应去掉'of'。'so cautious about'用词错误,应为'curious about'表示对某事感兴趣。句子中断,应补充完整。