Part 1
Giám khảo
How do you like geography?
Thí sinh
I really enjoy learning geography and this subject helps me to understand the wonderful landscape in the world, such as. Climate change and other.
Giám khảo
Do you think geography is useful?
Thí sinh
Yes, I think geography is very useful because it helps me understand how the climate change happens and how natural disasters like earthquakes and floods occur. This is really important for me.
Giám khảo
Have you ever learned geography?
Thí sinh
Yes, I learned geography during my high school and it was also our main academic subject. It's it is really important at that time and I also enjoy learning it.
Giám khảo
Do you want to be a geography teacher?
Thí sinh
No, I don't want to be a geography teacher. Although I'm interested in learning about it. I found it's boring for me to teach students about geography and I would prefer a job that is more creative and interesting.
Giám khảo
Will you learn more about the geography of other countries?
Thí sinh
Yes, I will. And I am looking forward to learning geography about Iceland because I think it's special and. Attracts me a lot.
How do you like geography?
Điểm: 65.0Gợi ý: 回答不够连贯,句子结构不完整,且内容表达不清晰。建议回答时注意句子完整性,避免断句,并且具体说明喜欢地理的原因。
Ví dụ: I really enjoy learning geography because it helps me understand the diverse landscapes and important issues like climate change around the world.
Do you think geography is useful?
Điểm: 80.0Gợi ý: 回答较为完整,但可以使用更多连接词使表达更流畅,同时增加具体例子来丰富内容。
Ví dụ: Yes, I think geography is very useful because it explains how climate change happens and why natural disasters like earthquakes and floods occur, which helps us prepare better for these events.
Have you ever learned geography?
Điểm: 70.0Gợi ý: 回答中有语法错误和重复,建议注意语法准确性和避免重复表达,同时可以补充更多细节。
Ví dụ: Yes, I studied geography in high school as one of the main subjects, and I found it very important and enjoyable because it helped me understand the world better.
Do you want to be a geography teacher?
Điểm: 75.0Gợi ý: 回答表达了观点,但句子连接不够自然,建议使用连接词使表达更流畅,同时可以说明为什么觉得教学无趣。
Ví dụ: No, I don't want to be a geography teacher because, although I enjoy learning the subject, I find teaching it less interesting and would prefer a more creative job.
Will you learn more about the geography of other countries?
Điểm: 70.0Gợi ý: 回答中断句不完整,表达不够连贯。建议使用完整句子并详细说明为什么对冰岛感兴趣。
Ví dụ: Yes, I will continue learning about the geography of other countries. For example, I am especially interested in Iceland because of its unique landscapes and volcanic activity.
× I really enjoy learning geography and this subject helps me to understand the wonderful landscape in the world, such as. Climate change and other.
✓ I really enjoy learning geography and this subject helps me to understand the wonderful landscapes in the world, such as climate change and others.
句中“landscape”应使用复数形式“landscapes”,因为指的是多个不同的景观;“such as”后面不应有句号,且“other”应改为“others”表示其他类似的事物。
× I really enjoy learning geography and this subject helps me to understand the wonderful landscape in the world, such as. Climate change and other.
✓ I really enjoy learning geography and this subject helps me to understand the wonderful landscapes in the world, such as climate change and others.
“such as”后面不应有句号,且“other”应改为“others”表示其他类似的事物。
× I really enjoy learning geography and this subject helps me to understand the wonderful landscape in the world, such as. Climate change and other.
✓ I really enjoy learning geography and this subject helps me to understand the wonderful landscapes in the world, such as climate change and others.
“landscape”应使用复数形式“landscapes”,因为指的是多个不同的景观。
× Yes, I think geography is very useful because it helps me understand how the climate change happens and how natural disasters like earthquakes and floods occur. This is really important for me.
✓ Yes, I think geography is very useful because it helps me understand how climate change happens and how natural disasters like earthquakes and floods occur. This is really important for me.
“climate change”前不需要冠词“the”,因为这里指的是气候变化的整体概念。
× Yes, I learned geography during my high school and it was also our main academic subject. It's it is really important at that time and I also enjoy learning it.
✓ Yes, I learned geography during my high school and it was also our main academic subject. It was really important at that time and I also enjoyed learning it.
描述过去的事情时,动词时态应保持一致,故“It's it is”应改为“it was”,“enjoy”应改为过去式“enjoyed”。
× It's it is really important at that time and I also enjoy learning it.
✓ It was really important at that time and I also enjoyed learning it.
句中重复使用“It's it is”导致结构错误,应删除重复部分并调整时态。
× No, I don't want to be a geography teacher. Although I'm interested in learning about it. I found it's boring for me to teach students about geography and I would prefer a job that is more creative and interesting.
✓ No, I don't want to be a geography teacher. Although I'm interested in learning about it, I find it boring to teach students about geography and I would prefer a job that is more creative and interesting.
“Although”引导的从句不能单独成句,应与主句合并,且时态应保持一致。
× No, I don't want to be a geography teacher. Although I'm interested in learning about it. I found it's boring for me to teach students about geography and I would prefer a job that is more creative and interesting.
✓ No, I don't want to be a geography teacher. Although I'm interested in learning about it, I find it boring to teach students about geography and I would prefer a job that is more creative and interesting.
“I found it's boring for me”中“it's”指代不清,应改为“it”表示“教地理”这件事。
× Yes, I will. And I am looking forward to learning geography about Iceland because I think it's special and. Attracts me a lot.
✓ Yes, I will. And I am looking forward to learning about the geography of Iceland because I think it's special and attracts me a lot.
“learning geography about Iceland”表达不自然,应改为“learning about the geography of Iceland”;“and.”后不应有句号,应与后句连成一句。