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Part 1

Giám khảo

How do you like geography?

Thí sinh

Yes, I really love the geography and my university major focuses on the human geography and urban planning. I think it is a very interesting and meaningful course that was different that I have learned in my high school. I think I learned geography not only the definition but also the more.

Giám khảo

Do you think geography is useful?

Thí sinh

Yes, I think geography is definitely a meaningful course. For instance, when I go to the someplace, I will notice their terrain and their costumes, the traffic. And this is about the human geography and natural geography, and I think this is very useful in our lives.

Giám khảo

Have you ever learned geography?

Thí sinh

Yes, I learned geography in my student life and I remember that when I was getting to my Senior High School I learned on the more detailed about the geography that is a human geography and natural geography. I think after I know these two aspects, I have a better understanding of the geographies.

Giám khảo

Do you want to be a geography teacher?

Thí sinh

Actually, I haven't think about this question yet because you know, I'm not very good at dealing the problems with the students because you know that the students they have, they have very, I have many problems and I, I don't think I can answer them properly.

Giám khảo

Will you learn more about the geography of other countries?

Thí sinh

Yes, I think have a more understanding about other countries. Geographies are many important because after we know that different countries and their language, we will have a better understanding of their politics, economies or other aspects.

Đánh giá

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Tổng: 6.0Trôi chảy và mạch lạc: 6.0Phát âm: 6.0Ngữ pháp: 5.5Từ vựng: 6.0

Part 1

How do you like geography?

Điểm: 65.0

Gợi ý: 回答时应避免语法错误和重复表达,句子结构应更自然流畅。可以简洁明了地表达对地理的喜爱,并补充具体原因。

Ví dụ: I really enjoy geography because my university major focuses on human geography and urban planning. It is interesting and meaningful, unlike what I studied in high school. Through this course, I have gained a deeper understanding beyond just definitions.

Do you think geography is useful?

Điểm: 70.0

Gợi ý: 回答应更连贯,避免重复,使用连接词使内容更流畅。具体细节应更准确,如“costumes”应为“customs”。

Ví dụ: Yes, geography is very useful. For example, when I visit a place, I pay attention to its terrain, customs, and traffic. This knowledge of human and physical geography helps me understand different cultures and environments better.

Have you ever learned geography?

Điểm: 60.0

Gợi ý: 回答应更简洁,避免语法错误,使用正确的时态和表达方式。可以直接说明学习经历和收获。

Ví dụ: Yes, I studied geography during my school years. In senior high school, I learned more detailed topics like human and physical geography, which helped me understand the subject better.

Do you want to be a geography teacher?

Điểm: 55.0

Gợi ý: 回答应更流畅,避免重复和口语化表达。可以简洁表达自己的想法并给出理由。

Ví dụ: I haven't thought about becoming a geography teacher because I feel I might not handle students' questions well. Teaching requires patience and problem-solving skills that I am still developing.

Will you learn more about the geography of other countries?

Điểm: 65.0

Gợi ý: 回答应更完整,语法正确,使用连接词使句子更连贯。内容应具体且相关。

Ví dụ: Yes, I want to learn more about the geography of other countries. Understanding their geography and languages helps me better comprehend their politics, economies, and cultures.

Ngữ pháp

Article errors

× Yes, I really love the geography and my university major focuses on the human geography and urban planning.

Yes, I really love geography and my university major focuses on human geography and urban planning.

在英语中,学科名称前通常不加定冠词“the”,除非特指某个具体的地理学内容。这里“geography”和“human geography”作为学科名称,不需要加“the”。

Incorrect conjunction use

× I think it is a very interesting and meaningful course that was different that I have learned in my high school.

I think it is a very interesting and meaningful course that is different from what I learned in my high school.

原句中“that was different that I have learned”结构不正确,应使用“that is different from what I learned”来表达“与我高中学过的不同”。“different”后面应接介词“from”,且时态应保持一致。

Sentence structure errors

× I think I learned geography not only the definition but also the more.

I think I learned geography not only the definition but also more about it.

原句结构不完整,“not only... but also...”结构后应有对应的内容,且“the more”表达不清,应改为“more about it”来完整表达意思。

Incorrect use of prepositions

× For instance, when I go to the someplace, I will notice their terrain and their costumes, the traffic.

For instance, when I go to some place, I will notice their terrain, their customs, and the traffic.

“someplace”是一个词,表示“某地”,不应加冠词“the”。“costumes”应为“customs”,意为“风俗习惯”,更符合语境。列举时应使用逗号分隔,且“and”前应加逗号。

Incorrect use of prepositions

× And this is about the human geography and natural geography, and I think this is very useful in our lives.

And this is about human geography and natural geography, and I think this is very useful in our lives.

学科名称前不加定冠词“the”,保持一致。

Past tense issue

× Yes, I learned geography in my student life and I remember that when I was getting to my Senior High School I learned on the more detailed about the geography that is a human geography and natural geography.

Yes, I learned geography during my student life and I remember that when I was entering Senior High School, I learned more details about geography, including human geography and natural geography.

“was getting to my Senior High School”表达不自然,应改为“was entering Senior High School”。“learned on the more detailed about the geography”结构错误,应改为“learned more details about geography”。“that is a human geography and natural geography”应改为“including human geography and natural geography”更通顺。

Singular and plural issue

× I think after I know these two aspects, I have a better understanding of the geographies.

I think after I learned about these two aspects, I have a better understanding of geography.

“geography”作为学科名通常不可数,不用复数形式“geographies”。“after I know”时态不对,应改为过去时“after I learned”。

Modal verb usage

× Actually, I haven't think about this question yet because you know, I'm not very good at dealing the problems with the students because you know that the students they have, they have very, I have many problems and I, I don't think I can answer them properly.

Actually, I haven't thought about this question yet because, you know, I'm not very good at dealing with problems from students because, you know, students have many problems and I don't think I can answer them properly.

“haven't think”应为“haven't thought”,过去分词形式。动词“deal”后应接介词“with”,即“dealing with problems”。句子中重复和断句不清,应简化表达。

Singular and plural issue

× Will you learn more about the geography of other countries?

Will you learn more about the geography of other countries?

该句无语法错误,保持原句。

Sentence structure errors

× Yes, I think have a more understanding about other countries.

Yes, I think I have a better understanding of other countries.

缺少主语“I”,且“more understanding about”表达不自然,应改为“a better understanding of”。

Singular and plural issue

× Geographies are many important because after we know that different countries and their language, we will have a better understanding of their politics, economies or other aspects.

Geography is very important because after we know different countries and their languages, we will have a better understanding of their politics, economies, and other aspects.

“Geographies”作为学科名不可数,应用单数“Geography”。“are many important”结构错误,应为“is very important”。“language”应为复数“languages”,因为不同国家有不同语言。列举时应使用逗号和“and”。

Từ vựng trọng tâm

BetterSuperior; More advantageous; To a higher standard
DifferentDissimilar; Distinct; Unusual
GoodFine; Virtuous; Well-behaved; Right; Capable
HighTall; High-ranking; Inflated; Strong; Favorable
ImportantSignificant; Main; Powerful
InterestingAbsorbing
ManyNumerous; A great/good deal of
UsefulFunctional; Beneficial
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