Part 1
Giám khảo
How do you like geography?
Thí sinh
No, I don't really like geography because I'm not very good at understanding directions. For example, I often get confused when reading maps, which makes me learning geography quite difficult for me.
Giám khảo
Do you think geography is useful?
Thí sinh
I believe geography is useful, but I'm not good at it. The main reason is that a geography can build people's directions or reading maps on a stranger place.
Giám khảo
Have you ever learned geography?
Thí sinh
Yes, I had learned a geography in my secondary school and high school, but I didn't choose geography as my major because I'm not good at it.
Giám khảo
Do you want to be a geography teacher?
Thí sinh
No, I don't want to be a geography teacher. The reason is that I'm not very interested in geography and I I don't have more direction skills.
Giám khảo
Will you learn more about the geography of other countries?
Thí sinh
Oh yes, I will learn more geography of other countries because other countries has has a different geographic or some different beautiful geography scales, so I want to learn more about.
How do you like geography?
Điểm: 65.0Gợi ý: 回答时应避免语法错误,如“makes me learning”应为“makes learning”。此外,回答可以更自然简洁,避免重复表达。
Ví dụ: I don't really like geography because I find it hard to understand directions. For instance, I often get confused when reading maps, which makes learning geography difficult for me.
Do you think geography is useful?
Điểm: 55.0Gợi ý: 回答中存在语法和表达错误,如“a geography can build people's directions”不通顺。应使用更准确的表达,并增加连贯的连接词。
Ví dụ: I believe geography is useful because it helps people understand directions and read maps when they are in unfamiliar places.
Have you ever learned geography?
Điểm: 60.0Gợi ý: 时态使用不当,“had learned”应改为“have learned”。同时,句子结构可以更自然,避免重复。
Ví dụ: Yes, I have learned geography in secondary and high school, but I didn't choose it as my major because I'm not very good at it.
Do you want to be a geography teacher?
Điểm: 50.0Gợi ý: 回答中有重复词汇“I I”,且表达不够自然。应使用更流畅的表达方式,并避免语法错误。
Ví dụ: No, I don't want to be a geography teacher because I'm not very interested in the subject and I lack good direction skills.
Will you learn more about the geography of other countries?
Điểm: 55.0Gợi ý: 回答中存在语法错误和重复词汇,如“has has”,表达不清晰。应使用正确的语法和更具体的描述。
Ví dụ: Yes, I want to learn more about the geography of other countries because they have different landscapes and beautiful geographical features.
× I often get confused when reading maps, which makes me learning geography quite difficult for me.
✓ I often get confused when reading maps, which makes learning geography quite difficult for me.
动词make后面接动词时,应使用动词的原形或动名词形式,这里应使用动名词learning,而不是me learning。
× The main reason is that a geography can build people's directions or reading maps on a stranger place.
✓ The main reason is that geography can help people build directions or read maps in a strange place.
geography是不可数名词,前面不应加不定冠词a;stranger是名词,形容词应为strange;表达更自然应使用help people build directions或read maps。
× Yes, I had learned a geography in my secondary school and high school, but I didn't choose geography as my major because I'm not good at it.
✓ Yes, I learned geography in my secondary school and high school, but I didn't choose geography as my major because I'm not good at it.
过去完成时had learned不适合此处,简单过去时learned更合适;geography为不可数名词,不加冠词a。
× No, I don't want to be a geography teacher. The reason is that I'm not very interested in geography and I I don't have more direction skills.
✓ No, I don't want to be a geography teacher. The reason is that I'm not very interested in geography and I don't have many direction skills.
direction skills是可数名词复数,使用more不合适,应使用many表示数量多。
× Oh yes, I will learn more geography of other countries because other countries has has a different geographic or some different beautiful geography scales, so I want to learn more about.
✓ Oh yes, I will learn more about the geography of other countries because other countries have different geography or some beautiful geographic features, so I want to learn more about them.
countries为复数,谓语动词应为have;geography为不可数名词,不用复数形式;句子结构不完整,需补充about them使表达完整。