Geography— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Your answer is generally relevant but contains some grammatical errors and awkward phrasing. Try to use simpler and clearer sentences, and avoid redundancy. For example, instead of "I have been exposed to geography all from my only childhood," say "I have been interested in geography since my childhood." Also, use linking words to connect ideas smoothly.

Ví dụ: To be honest, I really like geography. I have been interested in it since my childhood because I often watched informative channels like Discovery and National Geographic. These programs helped me learn about Earth's history and how it has changed over time.

Gợi ý: Your answer shows understanding but has some grammatical mistakes and unclear expressions. Try to make your sentences more concise and use linking words like "also" or "in addition" to connect ideas. Avoid repeating words like "Earth" unnecessarily.

Ví dụ: Yes, geography is very useful because it helps us understand the landforms of different places on Earth and even other planets like Mars and Venus. In addition, it teaches us about the minerals found beneath the Earth's surface.

Gợi ý: Your answer is somewhat unclear and contains grammatical errors. Try to answer directly and clearly. For example, say "I studied geography as part of my civil engineering degree, and I also read many books about it because I am interested." Use linking words like "also" or "besides" properly.

Ví dụ: I studied geography during my civil engineering degree because it was part of the course. Besides that, I have a keen interest in geography, so I often borrow books from the library to learn more.

Gợi ý: Your answer is relevant but has awkward phrasing and grammatical mistakes. Try to express your ideas more clearly and avoid unnecessary words. For example, say "Yes, I would love to be a geography teacher because I enjoy teaching about different landforms and minerals beneath the Earth."

Ví dụ: Yes, I would love to be a geography teacher because I enjoy sharing knowledge about various landforms around the world and the minerals found beneath the Earth's surface.

Gợi ý: Your answer is a bit confusing and contains grammatical errors. Try to speak clearly and directly. Use linking words like "but" correctly and avoid repeating words unnecessarily. For example, say "Honestly, I am interested in the geography of other planets like Mars and Saturn, but I also want to learn about the geography of different countries because it helps me understand the variety of landforms worldwide."

Ví dụ: Honestly, I am interested in the geography of other planets such as Mars and Saturn. However, I also want to learn about the geography of different countries because it helps me understand the wide variety of landforms around the world.

× Will to be honest, I am really into geography.

✓ To be honest, I am really into geography.

The modal verb 'Will' is incorrectly used at the beginning of the sentence. The correct phrase is 'To be honest' to express honesty or sincerity.

× I have been exposed to geography all from my only childhood.

✓ I have been exposed to geography since my childhood.

The phrase 'all from my only childhood' is incorrect. The correct preposition to indicate the starting point of exposure is 'since', and 'only' is unnecessary here.

× By seeing different informative channels on TV such as Discovery and National Geography, it helps me to get knowledge about different time period of earth evolution and the reason behind it.

✓ By watching different informative channels on TV such as Discovery and National Geographic, it helps me gain knowledge about different time periods of Earth's evolution and the reasons behind it.

The verb 'seeing' should be 'watching' when referring to TV channels. 'National Geography' should be 'National Geographic'. 'Time period' should be plural 'time periods' and 'earth' should be possessive 'Earth's'. Also, 'helps me to get knowledge' is better as 'helps me gain knowledge'.

× Yes, obviously geography is very much useful because it helps to know the landforms of different places of Earth as well as other planets such as Mars or Venus and so on.

✓ Yes, obviously geography is very useful because it helps us know the landforms of different places on Earth as well as other planets such as Mars or Venus.

The phrase 'very much useful' is incorrect; 'very useful' is correct. Also, 'helps to know' should be 'helps us know'. 'Places of Earth' should be 'places on Earth'. 'And so on' is unnecessary here.

× Besides that, it also helps us to know the mineral composition Earth has in which which has been deposited in Earth beneath the ground.

✓ Besides that, it also helps us know the mineral composition that Earth has, which has been deposited beneath the ground.

The phrase 'mineral composition Earth has' needs 'that' to connect the clause. 'In which which' is a repetition and incorrect. 'Deposited in Earth beneath the ground' is incorrect; 'deposited beneath the ground' suffices.

× Well to Wednesday, I am a civil engineering graduate so there is a topic or course related to geographic and we have to study it as it is our main course.

✓ Well, I am a civil engineering graduate, so there is a topic or course related to geography and we have to study it as it is our main course.

'Well to Wednesday' is incorrect and unclear; it should be omitted. 'Geographic' should be 'geography' as a noun.

× Besides that I have a keen interest in geography so I have about a lot of books from library to study those topics.

✓ Besides that, I have a keen interest in geography, so I have many books from the library to study those topics.

'About a lot of books' is incorrect; 'many books' is appropriate. 'From library' should be 'from the library'.

× Yes, obviously I will love to be a geographical teacher because as I am a civil engineer and geography is the 4th subject of it, I would love to teach students about variable insights of about different landforms around the world and also about different mineral composition beneath the earth.

✓ Yes, obviously I would love to be a geography teacher because I am a civil engineer and geography is the fourth subject related to it. I would love to teach students about various insights into different landforms around the world and also about different mineral compositions beneath the Earth.

'I will love to be' is incorrect; 'I would love to be' is correct for expressing desire. 'Geographical teacher' should be 'geography teacher'. 'Variable insights of about' is incorrect; 'various insights into' is correct. 'Mineral composition' should be plural 'mineral compositions'. 'Earth' should be capitalized.

× I is speaking frankly, I love to know the geography of different other planets such as Mars, Saturn and so on, but I will also love to know about different geographies of different countries around the world because it helps to understand the landforms which is in a wide variety around the globe.

✓ Speaking frankly, I love to learn about the geography of different planets such as Mars, Saturn, and so on, and I would also love to learn about the geographies of different countries around the world because it helps to understand the landforms which are widely varied around the globe.

'I is speaking' is incorrect; it should be 'Speaking frankly' or 'I am speaking frankly'. 'Love to know' is better as 'love to learn about'. 'Different other planets' is redundant; 'different planets' suffices. 'Helps to understand the landforms which is' should be 'helps to understand the landforms which are' to agree in number. 'In a wide variety' is awkward; 'widely varied' is better.